Tonight, I feel lonely

myself and me

 

Tonight, I feel lonely

Doubts and uncertainty

Confusion and misunderstanding

Creeping along the veins

Corroding my bones

Like slow poison

Numb me

Kill me

Disappointments and despair

Loneliness and helplessness

Pushing me into the dark hopeless abyss

I feel lonely tonight  

 

Tonight, I can not feel your love

Inch by inch, the distance between our hearts increase

till we can not feel each others beat anymore

Step by step, our bodies were dragged to the opposite directions

till our hands can not reach each other anymore

Block by block, the wall between us grows taller

till we are not in each others eyes anymore

I can not feel your love tonight  

 

Tonight, the song is sad

Cold wind blows me shaking

Cold rain wets my soul

Lost its softness

My heart is as hard as stone

No tears run down my emotionless face

The song is sad tonight  

 

Tonight, I am lonely

 

  • Author: myself and me (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 7th, 2017 09:09
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Tony36

    Well written and expressed

    • myself and me

      Thanks for reading and commenting.

      • Tony36

        Welcome

      • BRIAN & ANGELA

        Thanks for sharing M & M ~ but your loneliness makes me sad. You know you are loved by all your MPS Friends so I am sending you Love ~ Hugs ~ Kisses ~ because I know they will make you feel A BIT less lonely ~ Yours as always BR IAN XOXOX

        • myself and me

          Thinking of the friends here always makes me feel warm. Thanks.

        • Michael Edwards

          A great work - sad and poignant.

          • myself and me

            Thanks, ME. Your bright watercolor paint does light me up.

            • Michael Edwards

              Cheers - another tomorrow.

            • Christina8

              A very good poem, M&M! Though it's quite sad, know you have friends at MPS! Very well written poem.

              • myself and me

                Thanks Christina. It seems not fit the season, I will try to cheer myself up.

              • Fay Slimm.

                Such pathos in these well written lines M&M - - loneliness described in a heart-touching piece of fine poetry..

                • myself and me

                  Thank you for reading and commenting.

                • WL Schuett

                  Tonight the song is sad .... that has so much feeling , this poem just drips sadness... tugged my heart ...beautifully done M&M

                  • myself and me

                    Thanks WL for stopping by and leaving your comment.

                  • FredPeyer

                    Before you can build new, you have to destroy the old. And that is a sad and lonely business. Well written, m&m! While the song is sad tonight, tomorrow morning listen to the birds and do the same: Start the day with a wonderful song!

                    • myself and me

                      You are right. The morning is fresh.

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Very good emotive write, may that loneliness soon be abated.

                      • myself and me

                        Thank you for reading. I am sure eventually the loneliness will go.



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