Tonight, I feel lonely
Doubts and uncertainty
Confusion and misunderstanding
Creeping along the veins
Corroding my bones
Like slow poison
Numb me
Kill me
Disappointments and despair
Loneliness and helplessness
Pushing me into the dark hopeless abyss
I feel lonely tonight
Tonight, I can not feel your love
Inch by inch, the distance between our hearts increase
till we can not feel each others beat anymore
Step by step, our bodies were dragged to the opposite directions
till our hands can not reach each other anymore
Block by block, the wall between us grows taller
till we are not in each others eyes anymore
I can not feel your love tonight
Tonight, the song is sad
Cold wind blows me shaking
Cold rain wets my soul
Lost its softness
My heart is as hard as stone
No tears run down my emotionless face
The song is sad tonight
Tonight, I am lonely
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Author:
myself and me (
Offline) - Published: December 7th, 2017 09:09
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Comments8
Well written and expressed
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Welcome
Thanks for sharing M & M ~ but your loneliness makes me sad. You know you are loved by all your MPS Friends so I am sending you Love ~ Hugs ~ Kisses ~ because I know they will make you feel A BIT less lonely ~ Yours as always BR IAN XOXOX
Thinking of the friends here always makes me feel warm. Thanks.
A great work - sad and poignant.
Thanks, ME. Your bright watercolor paint does light me up.
Cheers - another tomorrow.
A very good poem, M&M! Though it's quite sad, know you have friends at MPS! Very well written poem.
Thanks Christina. It seems not fit the season, I will try to cheer myself up.
Such pathos in these well written lines M&M - - loneliness described in a heart-touching piece of fine poetry..
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Tonight the song is sad .... that has so much feeling , this poem just drips sadness... tugged my heart ...beautifully done M&M
Thanks WL for stopping by and leaving your comment.
Before you can build new, you have to destroy the old. And that is a sad and lonely business. Well written, m&m! While the song is sad tonight, tomorrow morning listen to the birds and do the same: Start the day with a wonderful song!
You are right. The morning is fresh.
Very good emotive write, may that loneliness soon be abated.
Thank you for reading. I am sure eventually the loneliness will go.
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