UNDETERRED.
Let's overturn hurts by feeding them mirth.
Reverse tearful outbursts by reaching for tools
of lost humour.
Let's accost black moods by adopting grins.
Staple thick skin to thinning endurance by use
of de-fusing.
Let's make naught of wise-cracks by laughing
away sinking self-worth.
The curse of depression melts when giggles
set fire to reactive rafts.
Let's cock a snoop at brooding revenge
and brew no concotions to aid offence.
Life's knocks need smiles of dispersion
not stirrings of locked up non-coercion.
Fashion no birth of lasting depression
over hard words nor concede to pay back
with any worse ferment.
Me-First conclusions mis-use understanding
and to wrestle with mercy brings confusion.
Handling bouts of offence meant to unhinge
friendship's resillience roust disaster.
Fate can be changed with the habit of shunning
resentment to hurtful affronts.
Let's be undetered in working love's essence
of peace into means of survival.
Relationships thrive when leaving momentary
need for contest behind.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I was so taken with the depth in these words above that the verse below readily made itself heard -- hope you enjoy.
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Good write Fay.
Glad you enjoyed it Orchi and thank you.
My dear poetess Fay,
Remembering your beautiful words of wisdom...
“Relationships thrive when leaving momentary need for contest behind.”
...would make this world a better place!
The positivity of your fine penned poem is
a breath of fresh air! A much needed and welcomed share! Thank you!
~Laura~
Many thanks for your kind comment dear Laura - - relationships are precious and need protection - - so pleased you agree with the thoughts on this subject.
Good write, looking for the positive in all is a wonderful thing to do.
Wonderful indeed is a positive outlook my friend - thank you for this comment.
EXCELLENT ADVICE as usual FAY ~ In all situations (so far) I have discovered that a GENTLE ANSWER deflects WRATH ~ AMEN ~ Yours as always BRIAN
Yes agreed Brian - gentleness in answering harsh things is the best way to save relationships often. Thanks for this lovely comment.
Lovely force of positivity seeps into me from reading your words, just when i need it. Thank you.
Ah - so good to hear you say you were helped by the read dear friend - thank you for sharing that in this lovely comment.
Enjoy I did - life is all about positivity - if it wasn't I wouldn't be me - great write Fay.
Always appreciate your perceptive comments dear Michael and thank you the visit and read on a tricky subject for we can only aim at a constantly positive attitude in our relationships.
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