Omniscient Observations

orchidee



Tune: Stowey

('When a knight won his spurs')

Psalm 139 v.14-24 parts

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O Lord, you I will praise

And your name I will raise

For it is I be made

In your image arrayed

Fearfully, wonderfully

You have made me, so be

Your good hand creating

Me all, each, everything

 

Marvellous your works be

My soul knows them, I see

My substance was hid not

When you portioned my lot

But when made in secret

All my parts were set

In your book, they all are

You the great God by far

 

How precious too, your thoughts

Unto me Lord, good sorts

How great sum of them is

I cannot count, 'tis this

The number of them more

Is than the sand's grains sure

When I wake, still with you

I am, you my God true

 

Search me, O God, and know

My heart, reveal, me show

If there any wicked

Way in me now be hid

And know my thoughts here, may

They be pure, I do pray

And lead me in your way

Of everlasting day

 

 

  • Author: orchidee (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 16th, 2018 02:38
  • Comment from author about the poem: A hymn-poem in 6.6.6.6. 6.6.6.6. metre. I may have added in some extra syllables here and there. It does not seem to flow quite so well. The clip shows me and KP! I'm her knight in shining armour, but it don't show the ball and chain she tied to me leg! heehee.
  • Category: Spiritual
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Comments8

  • orchidee

    *gets out dictionary for omniscient* It means all-knowing? Did you know that? Is you all-knowing anyway?! lol.

  • orchidee

    I first sang this about 50 years ago! Arrghh, so I been torturing folk for 50 years! heehee.

  • Michael Edwards

    A beautiful write from the pansophical Orchi.

    • orchidee

      Thanks Michael. *leaves dictionary in easy-to-find place, and looks up pansophical*.

    • Goldfinch60

      Lead me indeed Orchi. Good write.

      • orchidee

        Thanks Gold. You leading that horse to water? Will you make him drink?!

      • BRIAN & ANGELA

        THANKS FOR THE VIDEO STEVE ~ From Hymns Ancient & Mystical ~ I think. My MUM always taught me "Be careful who you rescue ~ you may end up with her BALL & CHAIN !" If I saw KP up close and personal with a DRAGON ~ I'd ride by on the other side and say a Prayer for the DRAGON ! Love the Psalm Paraphrase Poem ~ 139 ~ Beautiful thoughts ! That is my Blank Verse Sonnet for SUNDAY ! Every Blessing ~ BRIAN

        • orchidee

          Thanks Brian.

        • Laura🌻

          Orchi,
          He knows our heart...
          and yours is a heart of
          gold! Thank you for the
          posting!
          ~Laura~

          • orchidee

            Thanks Laura.

          • Fay Slimm.

            Our Creator know all our hearts and this lovely observation of how cared for we are is a pleasure to read Steve.

            • orchidee

              Thanks Fay.

            • FredPeyer

              Orchie, a fine poem. Love the ending. Don't know though if my thoughts are always pure!

              • orchidee

                Thanks Fred. My thoughts are impure when I add water to people's whisky. It pollutes and sabotages the whisky for them! lol.



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