SPRING MEADOW ~ EVERY COLOUR OF THE RAINBOW
SPRING is bursting out all OVER
OVER the Hills and MEADOWS
MEADOWS filled with new grass & FLOWERS
FLOWERS ~ every colour of the RAINBOW
RAINBOW high in the Sky after RAIN
RAIN to refresh flowers ~ but not DAMAGE
DAMAGE in the UK ~ caused by HAILSTONES
HAILSTONES ~ Great Balls of Ice ~ Lethal to PETALS
PETALS of Daffodils ~ Crocuses & TULIPS !
TULIPS come later ~ mostly in APRIL
APRIL showers are warm and gentle to PLANTS
PLANTS are Ladylike ~ more robust than you THINK !
THINK of the Snowdrops ~ cheeky poking through SNOW
SNOW in the UK has now gone away ~ It's SPRING !
Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ love BRIAN
STRUCTURE: In a Word Flow poem the poem must
begin and end with the same word (here it is SPRING).
Also the LAST WORD in each line becomes the FIRST
WORD in the subsequent line ~ OK ! I have capitalised
the first and last words for emphasis ~ OK !
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Author:
BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: March 12th, 2018 03:38
- Category: Nature
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Comments9
Nice one Brian - I've not written in this form and might give it a go sometime - thanks for the inspiration.
THANKS MICHAEL ~ Pleased you enjoyed it ! The key is not just to repeat the word ~ from the previous line ~ but to open the line using the word in a meaningful way ! This what I tried to achieve in this Poem ~ OK Yours BRIAN
Mio Caro Amico BRIAN...
Una bella poesia di
Primavera!
A beautiful Spring poem!
An interesting form.
I like it! Anxiously waiting
for Spring’s debut!💐
Un Abbraccio e Baci...
~Laura~
BUENA MATINA LAURA ~ Cara Mia ~ PRIMAVERA has officially arrived (1st March) but is too shy (ladylike !) to reveal her true glory ! The greatest beauty is the plethora (good word) of Wild & Cultivated Flowers ~ Beautiful.
Grazie per tu commento ! Baci e Abbracci ~ BRIAN ~ Un Uomo de Primavera XOXOX
A fine write Brian.
Thanks STEVE ~ As you know ~ Spring in the UK ~ is always a delight ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN
Beautiful and well thought out this flow of a Spring read - thank you Brian.
THANKS FAY ~ SPRING ~ does indeed FLOW ! In the beautiful Gardens in CORNWALL & ESSEX and we have the JOY of flowing with the English Spring ~ AMEN ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
Clever poem Brian and such a tease for us here in New England........ weeks of cold still ahead per the forecasts..... the snow we have won't melt. What a beautiful picture! A field with gorgeous wildflowers and hardly a weed in sight!
Thanks LORNA ~ Spring does come later in some Northern States ~ but we love New England in the FALL ! Wild Flower Meadows are common in South England and very beautiful. There is competition for space among the plants ~ but the flowers always crowd out the weeds ! Spring Hugs ~ BRIAN
What a beautiful bright and hopeful picture that sent me! An awesome poem---I can't believe you get to experience Spring! Anyway, great form! Spring hugs Christina
THANKS CHRIS ~ All the SNOW has gone from the South of England and the Hills are alive with the Sound of Song Birds and the Scent of Spring ! It will soon be like that in your Beautiful State because God has promised ~ even in North America ! SPRINGTIME would follow WINTER every year so follow the SUN ~ AMEN ~ It's 60F here this week so Warm Hugs ~ Your UK Brother ~ BRIAN ~ Just finished teaching for another day and Tuesday is always better than MONDAY soon be FRIDAY! B.
Good write - it is a pity that snow is being forecast again for later this week - The Beast from the East is returning.
THANKS ANDY ~ Depends where you live ! I hope I'm far enough South (Essex) to escape it ! Also THERESA has told VLADAMIR ~ We don't want no more Russian Snow (or nerve poison!). Thanks BRIAN
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