Comments received on poems by Lizzy Renee



Death Grip
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write with a great message.

May 5th, 2017 00:12

Taken From Me
NikitaPassmore said:

I love this poem

May 4th, 2017 23:41

Death Grip
orchidee said:

This is fab poetry for age 12!

May 4th, 2017 10:55

Death Grip
orchidee said:

Good write. On this theme, I read recently that a \'quick death\' can be preferable, enviable even, than a long drawn-out \'living death\' .e.g. some illnesses.

May 4th, 2017 10:54

Taken From Me
Lizzy Renee said:

\"Strong Women don\'t play victim, don\'t make themselves look pitiful, and don\'t point fingers. They stand and they deal.\" Mandy Hale


May 4th, 2017 10:04

Death Grip
Michael Edwards said:

Love the structure - a good read.

May 4th, 2017 09:43

Death Grip
swingline said:

You have nothing to fear in the hands of God .

May 4th, 2017 09:18

Taken From Me
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks LIZZIE ~ even though it is so so sad ~ I love this poem ~ because despite your infinite losses (nothing can replace people) and your rage against cancer (I feel like that ~ having lost love ones) You still honor the VOICE that brought you PEACE ~ AMEN. I too have peace in my heart because \"Unto the weary and the weak ~ JESUS whispers PEACE !\" Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Hugs BRIAN (UK).

May 4th, 2017 08:50

Taken From Me
WriteBeLight said:

So sorry Lizzy. An appropriate poem explaining your frustration.

May 3rd, 2017 15:44

Questions
valene said:

questions, questions,
always exist
looking for answers
is hard to resist
BUT
searching for them
can be a real pain
and in fact
drive some insane
my suggestion
don\'t look to hard
the answer might be
in your front yard

love a poem that inspires my brain to think!



April 30th, 2017 20:05

Questions
Aamina said:

Nice poem. I have a question. Why do I have exams??!!!

April 29th, 2017 13:07

Questions
WriteBeLight said:

Great poem about all the answers needed, but may never be found. I did ask why is water wet? There is an answer to that one. Very scientific. Very thought provoking write Lizzy!

April 29th, 2017 07:20

Questions
MendedFences27 said:

There are more questions than there are answers. The important thing is to keep asking and searching for the answer.The inquisitive mind is the healthy mind. Stop asking and the mind becomes a wasteland. Nice write - Phil A.

April 28th, 2017 18:02

Questions
orchidee said:

Oh I know. My question is: \'When will Neighbours\' end?! If you\'ve not got it in the U.S., think of the most ghastliest soap show you have there! heehee.

April 28th, 2017 10:08

The Battle Between Truth and Lies
WriteBeLight said:

I agree Lizzy. The truth always conquers.

April 27th, 2017 10:36

Ode to The Galaxy
Fay Slimm. said:

An amazing summary of the galaxy\'s fascination Lizzie - - love the picture of its awesome beauty and the hope that goes with it,.

April 27th, 2017 10:22

Ode to The Galaxy
Lizzy Renee said:

Thank You all for your encouraging comments.

April 27th, 2017 08:12

Ode to The Galaxy
valene said:

I find myself fascinated by the night sky! there\'s something magical on a clear night, when it\'s filled with small bright lights shining on the earth. and though i probably shouldn\'t admit it, i make a wish almost every night on the 1st star i see....lately it seems to be working :)
I enjoyed the read and the image you posted with it!

April 26th, 2017 20:59

The Battle Between Truth and Lies
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Yes God will show the truth like u say and truth will win eventually. Super rhyming here. Yeah falsehood is everywhere. We need to be careful. Thumbs up.

Pls do review my latest poem too, u r most welcome to.

April 26th, 2017 08:33

The Battle Between Truth and Lies
MendedFences27 said:

Live by the truth. Lies bring you down, trip you up, and destroy your self esteem. Life is full of pressures to lead one to lie, but don\'t do it.
Your poem seems written by someone very wise. It is not what others do, but what we ourselves do that matters. A good and meaningful poem. - Phil A.

April 25th, 2017 21:36

\"The Four Stringed Wonder\"
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME JOLIE ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ a very lively 4~4~4~2 Sonnet throbbing with Rhyme & Rhythm and a lovely tribute to the VIOLIN an instrument for ANGELS ~ Love it. I love the way they play it THE BLUE GRASS FIDDLE up in the Appalachians ! I love ALABAMA ~ Birthplace of Nat & Natalie King Cole lovely climate and lovely Friendly People. When we crossed the Border from Pensacola into MOBILE it was like going into a different Planet and we loved that Restaurant \"Where they throw dough ~ awesome !\" Keep playing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems ~ Thanks B.

April 12th, 2017 15:37

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