Comments received on poems by Lizzy Renee
Prodigal
FredPeyer said:
Like it a lot, Lizzy!
And the only way to find out if these arms are open wide, is to return!
September 11th, 2017 20:15
FredPeyer said:
Like it a lot, Lizzy!
And the only way to find out if these arms are open wide, is to return!
September 11th, 2017 20:15
Looking at the Sky
O.G. Tone said:
Good composition Ms. Renee?..The pic. Tell alot about the story.
August 17th, 2017 21:27
O.G. Tone said:
Good composition Ms. Renee?..The pic. Tell alot about the story.
August 17th, 2017 21:27
Flower
FredPeyer said:
This lovely poem reminds me of my rose garden in St.Eustache. For the last 30 years though, living in Hawaii, I have not experienced any winter anymore.
Merci beaucoup, ton poem est tres tres bon.
August 17th, 2017 20:23
FredPeyer said:
This lovely poem reminds me of my rose garden in St.Eustache. For the last 30 years though, living in Hawaii, I have not experienced any winter anymore.
Merci beaucoup, ton poem est tres tres bon.
August 17th, 2017 20:23
Looking at the Sky
FredPeyer said:
A beautiful poem, Lizzy. It starts so nice, all happy.....and then the unexpected rough time, but finishing on a positive note again.
August 17th, 2017 20:18
FredPeyer said:
A beautiful poem, Lizzy. It starts so nice, all happy.....and then the unexpected rough time, but finishing on a positive note again.
August 17th, 2017 20:18
Flower
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
I\'m a flowerlover so I\'m mighty pleased that u r back with this beautiful lovely poem. I ESP liked how u say \' springs request. Kudos.
Nice to read from u again. Hope u will write your thoughts too about my latest poem, under it.
Take care pal.
August 15th, 2017 13:24
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
I\'m a flowerlover so I\'m mighty pleased that u r back with this beautiful lovely poem. I ESP liked how u say \' springs request. Kudos.
Nice to read from u again. Hope u will write your thoughts too about my latest poem, under it.
Take care pal.
August 15th, 2017 13:24
Ode to an Ant
RickyMcG said:
Really enjoyed this :) I sometimes instinctively risk my own life by swerving out of the way of an animal trying to cross the road! We are all equal on the this earth, whether it was a gods doing or not I do not know.
August 15th, 2017 03:10
RickyMcG said:
Really enjoyed this :) I sometimes instinctively risk my own life by swerving out of the way of an animal trying to cross the road! We are all equal on the this earth, whether it was a gods doing or not I do not know.
August 15th, 2017 03:10
Flower
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Flowers and BIRDS are both very pretty and are often compared in simile ? But to say an Open Rose is more Beautiful than a Wren is true but new to me ! Thanks for caring and sharing a perfect STRUCTURE (rhyming couplets) and a perfect SUBJECT ! Two more lines and it would be a Sonnet ! Yours BRIAN (UK)
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August 14th, 2017 14:07
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Flowers and BIRDS are both very pretty and are often compared in simile ? But to say an Open Rose is more Beautiful than a Wren is true but new to me ! Thanks for caring and sharing a perfect STRUCTURE (rhyming couplets) and a perfect SUBJECT ! Two more lines and it would be a Sonnet ! Yours BRIAN (UK)
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August 14th, 2017 14:07
A day in the Snow
Michael Edwards said:
Superb, unpretentious, love the language and such a good read.
August 11th, 2017 14:34
Michael Edwards said:
Superb, unpretentious, love the language and such a good read.
August 11th, 2017 14:34
A day in the Snow
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI LIZZY ~ Welcome back ~ Love SNOW ~ Love the Poem ~ Love You too ! Canada has a monopoly on Snow ! Where I live in South England and last year we had zero snowfall ! I have been in NEW YORK in December and we had lots of Snow ! A Friend mine met a Girl on line and fell in Love ~ He then realised she lived in WINNIPEG ! After they got married he had to live there for a YEAR to get a work permit He survived the WINTER ! Your lovely POEM describes all the Joys of Snow and the sadness (of Kids) when it melts. Thanks for sharing Happy Birthday ~ Love & Hugs ~ BRIAN XOX
August 11th, 2017 13:17
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI LIZZY ~ Welcome back ~ Love SNOW ~ Love the Poem ~ Love You too ! Canada has a monopoly on Snow ! Where I live in South England and last year we had zero snowfall ! I have been in NEW YORK in December and we had lots of Snow ! A Friend mine met a Girl on line and fell in Love ~ He then realised she lived in WINNIPEG ! After they got married he had to live there for a YEAR to get a work permit He survived the WINTER ! Your lovely POEM describes all the Joys of Snow and the sadness (of Kids) when it melts. Thanks for sharing Happy Birthday ~ Love & Hugs ~ BRIAN XOX
August 11th, 2017 13:17
A day in the Snow
WriteBeLight said:
Brrrr...chilly. But I do not mind as it is hot and humid here in New England! Great job Lizzy!
August 11th, 2017 12:27
WriteBeLight said:
Brrrr...chilly. But I do not mind as it is hot and humid here in New England! Great job Lizzy!
August 11th, 2017 12:27
A day in the Snow
orchidee said:
A fine write Lizzie. You come back for birthday greetings in a few days time? hehehe
August 11th, 2017 09:13
orchidee said:
A fine write Lizzie. You come back for birthday greetings in a few days time? hehehe
August 11th, 2017 09:13
A Dream
WriteBeLight said:
Very unusual Lizzy. I used to get weird dreams when having a slice of pepperoni pizza before bed. Needless to say, I do not do that any more :)
May 15th, 2017 13:23
WriteBeLight said:
Very unusual Lizzy. I used to get weird dreams when having a slice of pepperoni pizza before bed. Needless to say, I do not do that any more :)
May 15th, 2017 13:23
A Dream
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks LIZZY for an interesting dream. It speaks about EXCLUSION which is something we all hate. Glad you woke up safe ~ Hugs BRIAN
May 15th, 2017 09:30
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks LIZZY for an interesting dream. It speaks about EXCLUSION which is something we all hate. Glad you woke up safe ~ Hugs BRIAN
May 15th, 2017 09:30
Save Me!
orchidee said:
Don\'t choose darkness
It will only lose (or eventually)
Follow the way of light
And it always peruse.
May 13th, 2017 01:31
orchidee said:
Don\'t choose darkness
It will only lose (or eventually)
Follow the way of light
And it always peruse.
May 13th, 2017 01:31
Save Me!
orchidee said:
A true and fine write! Oh, but it\'s wise to ALWAYS choose light over darkness, I think - as you have done.
Also, my view is - we can\'t save ourselves. It\'s like two people crossing a broken bridge. One got 50% across it, the other 99%. But they both fell in the river!
Great faith for you age too!
May 13th, 2017 01:28
orchidee said:
A true and fine write! Oh, but it\'s wise to ALWAYS choose light over darkness, I think - as you have done.
Also, my view is - we can\'t save ourselves. It\'s like two people crossing a broken bridge. One got 50% across it, the other 99%. But they both fell in the river!
Great faith for you age too!
May 13th, 2017 01:28
Save Me!
SorrowfullyHappy said:
some people have different definitions of the word \"Hero\"
there can be no light without darkness no darkness without light
that is why i have chosen darkness over light
May 12th, 2017 11:13
SorrowfullyHappy said:
some people have different definitions of the word \"Hero\"
there can be no light without darkness no darkness without light
that is why i have chosen darkness over light
May 12th, 2017 11:13
The Rainbow
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhhhh LIZZY ~ Thanks for another BEAUTIFUL POEM ~ I love rainbows ~ Pictures & Poems ! YES The Rainbow is GOD\'s promise that never again will he destroy the World by flood ~ however hard it rains ~ don\'t worry. You will have learned in School that the raindrops act as prisms and split the sunlight into a SPECTRUM SEVEN COLOURS ~ R-O-Y-G-B-I-V which produces our rainbow ! Thanks for sharing ~ Rainbow Hugs for a lovely Young Lady ~ BRIAN
May 9th, 2017 10:56
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhhhh LIZZY ~ Thanks for another BEAUTIFUL POEM ~ I love rainbows ~ Pictures & Poems ! YES The Rainbow is GOD\'s promise that never again will he destroy the World by flood ~ however hard it rains ~ don\'t worry. You will have learned in School that the raindrops act as prisms and split the sunlight into a SPECTRUM SEVEN COLOURS ~ R-O-Y-G-B-I-V which produces our rainbow ! Thanks for sharing ~ Rainbow Hugs for a lovely Young Lady ~ BRIAN
May 9th, 2017 10:56
Rolling Waves of the Sea
WriteBeLight said:
Very nice Lizzy. I so love the water and the waves. Great expression here :)
May 8th, 2017 13:31
WriteBeLight said:
Very nice Lizzy. I so love the water and the waves. Great expression here :)
May 8th, 2017 13:31
Rolling Waves of the Sea
swingline said:
I used to live in Panama City , Florida . I know how strong the call of the sea resonates within all of us . Excellent write .
May 8th, 2017 09:44
swingline said:
I used to live in Panama City , Florida . I know how strong the call of the sea resonates within all of us . Excellent write .
May 8th, 2017 09:44
Rolling Waves of the Sea
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI LIZZIE ~ Thanks for another lovely Poem ! I too love the sea and it always stirs my MUSE and makes me want to paint ! We are lucky in the UK which is a small island and we are never more than 70 miles from the Coast ! I know in Canada you can be many hundreds of miles from the Sea but you also have hundreds of awesome Lakes ! Hugs ~ BRIAN The area of Canada is 40 times greater than that of the UK !
May 8th, 2017 09:41
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI LIZZIE ~ Thanks for another lovely Poem ! I too love the sea and it always stirs my MUSE and makes me want to paint ! We are lucky in the UK which is a small island and we are never more than 70 miles from the Coast ! I know in Canada you can be many hundreds of miles from the Sea but you also have hundreds of awesome Lakes ! Hugs ~ BRIAN The area of Canada is 40 times greater than that of the UK !
May 8th, 2017 09:41
Ode to an Ant
WriteBeLight said:
Life should be respected! Great thought here Lizzy.
May 6th, 2017 06:48
WriteBeLight said:
Life should be respected! Great thought here Lizzy.
May 6th, 2017 06:48
Ode to an Ant
Goldfinch60 said:
ALL life is wonderful and nothing should be harmed. Good write.
May 6th, 2017 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
ALL life is wonderful and nothing should be harmed. Good write.
May 6th, 2017 00:46
Ode to an Ant
Michael Edwards said:
A difficult one as I never intentionally or knowingly kill any life form except garden pests when I spray the plants in the garden and set traps for slugs and snails. Beyond that I agree with the sentiments in your great poem.
May 5th, 2017 23:27
Michael Edwards said:
A difficult one as I never intentionally or knowingly kill any life form except garden pests when I spray the plants in the garden and set traps for slugs and snails. Beyond that I agree with the sentiments in your great poem.
May 5th, 2017 23:27
Ode to an Ant
swingline said:
All life is sacred , those who take life for granted live to reget it . As all life was endowed with the breath of life from God we should not be so flippant with his creations . Not even a sparrow falls that God is not aware . God gave mankind dominion over all creatures of the Earth . But he never gave permission to abuse .
May 5th, 2017 18:22
swingline said:
All life is sacred , those who take life for granted live to reget it . As all life was endowed with the breath of life from God we should not be so flippant with his creations . Not even a sparrow falls that God is not aware . God gave mankind dominion over all creatures of the Earth . But he never gave permission to abuse .
May 5th, 2017 18:22
Ode to an Ant
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GOD loves Ants and all living things including insects ! In the BIBLE He says \"Look at the Ant you sluggards ~ consider her Ways and be wise.\" God loves Ants and cites them as an example of diligent workers. We should protect them and not stamp on them ! Love the poem and picture ~ Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Hugs Brian
May 5th, 2017 17:05
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GOD loves Ants and all living things including insects ! In the BIBLE He says \"Look at the Ant you sluggards ~ consider her Ways and be wise.\" God loves Ants and cites them as an example of diligent workers. We should protect them and not stamp on them ! Love the poem and picture ~ Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Hugs Brian
May 5th, 2017 17:05
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