Comments received on poems by nancy akbari
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SunSearcher said:
Very cute. I am 40 now and completely understand the denial in this piece lol. I believe I am done aging myself.
~SS
December 28th, 2017 08:13
SunSearcher said:
Very cute. I am 40 now and completely understand the denial in this piece lol. I believe I am done aging myself.
~SS
December 28th, 2017 08:13
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Michael Edwards said:
Oh to be 43 again - I\'d be younger than my children - good fun write.
December 28th, 2017 02:26
Michael Edwards said:
Oh to be 43 again - I\'d be younger than my children - good fun write.
December 28th, 2017 02:26
The Ol\' Thanksgiving Blues
SunSearcher said:
Thanks for the chuckle this morning. Fun write..love the part about not being able to reach your shoes, totally relate lol.
~SS
November 26th, 2017 09:02
SunSearcher said:
Thanks for the chuckle this morning. Fun write..love the part about not being able to reach your shoes, totally relate lol.
~SS
November 26th, 2017 09:02
The Ol\' Thanksgiving Blues
Michael Edwards said:
We don\'t celebrate it here in the UK but I recognise the dilemma - gave me a good smile this morning. Thanks for posting.
November 26th, 2017 06:33
Michael Edwards said:
We don\'t celebrate it here in the UK but I recognise the dilemma - gave me a good smile this morning. Thanks for posting.
November 26th, 2017 06:33
Alive But Not Living
Christina8 said:
Great poem! Very heartfelt! Loved how you wrote. Like tepo, I can\'t wait for your next poem!--Christina
November 14th, 2017 21:25
Christina8 said:
Great poem! Very heartfelt! Loved how you wrote. Like tepo, I can\'t wait for your next poem!--Christina
November 14th, 2017 21:25
Alive But Not Living
Laura🌻 said:
Hi Nancy!
Some days I feel exactly
what your poem describes!
Only difference...
You take care of your husband
and I take care of my mom!
Welcome to the golden years!
~Laura~
November 14th, 2017 20:21
Laura🌻 said:
Hi Nancy!
Some days I feel exactly
what your poem describes!
Only difference...
You take care of your husband
and I take care of my mom!
Welcome to the golden years!
~Laura~
November 14th, 2017 20:21
A Loved One\'s Death
lasergraph said:
Good piece and I can feel the tug at the heart . You don\'t reach old age without having experienced the loss of someone close. I have a few and your description is certainly knowing. Thanks for a great piece.
September 23rd, 2017 19:15
lasergraph said:
Good piece and I can feel the tug at the heart . You don\'t reach old age without having experienced the loss of someone close. I have a few and your description is certainly knowing. Thanks for a great piece.
September 23rd, 2017 19:15
To Attessa on Her 42nd Birthday
lasergraph said:
WOW, I loved this. I can remember some of those same yearnings and yet now wish it was back at the beginning.
September 23rd, 2017 19:12
lasergraph said:
WOW, I loved this. I can remember some of those same yearnings and yet now wish it was back at the beginning.
September 23rd, 2017 19:12
A Loved One\'s Death
Accidental Poet said:
My adoptive mother passed from Alzheimer\'s Disease in 2008, and my sister and I held her hands as she passed. A very emotional moment to say the least. Glad you still have your husband there to annoy the shit out of you. That\'s just his way of saying that he loves you. ; )
September 9th, 2017 16:57
Accidental Poet said:
My adoptive mother passed from Alzheimer\'s Disease in 2008, and my sister and I held her hands as she passed. A very emotional moment to say the least. Glad you still have your husband there to annoy the shit out of you. That\'s just his way of saying that he loves you. ; )
September 9th, 2017 16:57
A Loved One\'s Death
dark_energy said:
So happy to hear he is still with you 😁
Lovely piece!
September 9th, 2017 14:46
dark_energy said:
So happy to hear he is still with you 😁
Lovely piece!
September 9th, 2017 14:46
To Attessa on Her 42nd Birthday
charlesbarrett said:
Breathtaking. This struck a cord with me as a father to 2 young daughters. A reminder to always cherish the moments. Beautifully written. Thanks for sharing.
July 25th, 2017 14:50
charlesbarrett said:
Breathtaking. This struck a cord with me as a father to 2 young daughters. A reminder to always cherish the moments. Beautifully written. Thanks for sharing.
July 25th, 2017 14:50
To Attessa on Her 42nd Birthday
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful poetic contribution to MPS, Nancy! Welcome, and I will look for more from you. As a parent of two, I can relate,
July 25th, 2017 14:12
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful poetic contribution to MPS, Nancy! Welcome, and I will look for more from you. As a parent of two, I can relate,
July 25th, 2017 14:12
If You Go
ron parrish aka wordman said:
if you go,i will follow,sounds like a poem of love
April 12th, 2017 21:58
ron parrish aka wordman said:
if you go,i will follow,sounds like a poem of love
April 12th, 2017 21:58
If You Go
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ~ NANCY ~ thanks for your first poem ~ very sentimental. To me it sounds like MOM ~ who been devoted to her CHILD ever since it was born ? The key line for me is: \"My life is yours # It no longer belongs to me # You took it from me # The day you were born. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems ~ Thanks B
April 12th, 2017 17:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ~ NANCY ~ thanks for your first poem ~ very sentimental. To me it sounds like MOM ~ who been devoted to her CHILD ever since it was born ? The key line for me is: \"My life is yours # It no longer belongs to me # You took it from me # The day you were born. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems ~ Thanks B
April 12th, 2017 17:51
