Comments received on poems by nancy akbari
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SunSearcher said:
Very cute. I am 40 now and completely understand the denial in this piece lol. I believe I am done aging myself.
~SS
December 28th, 2017 08:13
SunSearcher said:
Very cute. I am 40 now and completely understand the denial in this piece lol. I believe I am done aging myself.
~SS
December 28th, 2017 08:13
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Michael Edwards said:
Oh to be 43 again - I\'d be younger than my children - good fun write.
December 28th, 2017 02:26
Michael Edwards said:
Oh to be 43 again - I\'d be younger than my children - good fun write.
December 28th, 2017 02:26
The Ol\' Thanksgiving Blues
SunSearcher said:
Thanks for the chuckle this morning. Fun write..love the part about not being able to reach your shoes, totally relate lol.
~SS
November 26th, 2017 09:02
SunSearcher said:
Thanks for the chuckle this morning. Fun write..love the part about not being able to reach your shoes, totally relate lol.
~SS
November 26th, 2017 09:02
The Ol\' Thanksgiving Blues
Michael Edwards said:
We don\'t celebrate it here in the UK but I recognise the dilemma - gave me a good smile this morning. Thanks for posting.
November 26th, 2017 06:33
Michael Edwards said:
We don\'t celebrate it here in the UK but I recognise the dilemma - gave me a good smile this morning. Thanks for posting.
November 26th, 2017 06:33
Alive But Not Living
Christina8 said:
Great poem! Very heartfelt! Loved how you wrote. Like tepo, I can\'t wait for your next poem!--Christina
November 14th, 2017 21:25
Christina8 said:
Great poem! Very heartfelt! Loved how you wrote. Like tepo, I can\'t wait for your next poem!--Christina
November 14th, 2017 21:25
Alive But Not Living
Laura🌻 said:
Hi Nancy!
Some days I feel exactly
what your poem describes!
Only difference...
You take care of your husband
and I take care of my mom!
Welcome to the golden years!
~Laura~
November 14th, 2017 20:21
Laura🌻 said:
Hi Nancy!
Some days I feel exactly
what your poem describes!
Only difference...
You take care of your husband
and I take care of my mom!
Welcome to the golden years!
~Laura~
November 14th, 2017 20:21
A Loved One\'s Death
lasergraph said:
Good piece and I can feel the tug at the heart . You don\'t reach old age without having experienced the loss of someone close. I have a few and your description is certainly knowing. Thanks for a great piece.
September 23rd, 2017 19:15
lasergraph said:
Good piece and I can feel the tug at the heart . You don\'t reach old age without having experienced the loss of someone close. I have a few and your description is certainly knowing. Thanks for a great piece.
September 23rd, 2017 19:15
To Attessa on Her 42nd Birthday
lasergraph said:
WOW, I loved this. I can remember some of those same yearnings and yet now wish it was back at the beginning.
September 23rd, 2017 19:12
lasergraph said:
WOW, I loved this. I can remember some of those same yearnings and yet now wish it was back at the beginning.
September 23rd, 2017 19:12
A Loved One\'s Death
dark_energy said:
So happy to hear he is still with you 😁
Lovely piece!
September 9th, 2017 14:46
dark_energy said:
So happy to hear he is still with you 😁
Lovely piece!
September 9th, 2017 14:46
To Attessa on Her 42nd Birthday
charlesbarrett said:
Breathtaking. This struck a cord with me as a father to 2 young daughters. A reminder to always cherish the moments. Beautifully written. Thanks for sharing.
July 25th, 2017 14:50
charlesbarrett said:
Breathtaking. This struck a cord with me as a father to 2 young daughters. A reminder to always cherish the moments. Beautifully written. Thanks for sharing.
July 25th, 2017 14:50
To Attessa on Her 42nd Birthday
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful poetic contribution to MPS, Nancy! Welcome, and I will look for more from you. As a parent of two, I can relate,
July 25th, 2017 14:12
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful poetic contribution to MPS, Nancy! Welcome, and I will look for more from you. As a parent of two, I can relate,
July 25th, 2017 14:12
If You Go
ron parrish aka wordman said:
if you go,i will follow,sounds like a poem of love
April 12th, 2017 21:58
ron parrish aka wordman said:
if you go,i will follow,sounds like a poem of love
April 12th, 2017 21:58
If You Go
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ~ NANCY ~ thanks for your first poem ~ very sentimental. To me it sounds like MOM ~ who been devoted to her CHILD ever since it was born ? The key line for me is: \"My life is yours # It no longer belongs to me # You took it from me # The day you were born. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems ~ Thanks B
April 12th, 2017 17:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ~ NANCY ~ thanks for your first poem ~ very sentimental. To me it sounds like MOM ~ who been devoted to her CHILD ever since it was born ? The key line for me is: \"My life is yours # It no longer belongs to me # You took it from me # The day you were born. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems ~ Thanks B
April 12th, 2017 17:51
