Comments received on poems by Shayl
THE CAT IN THE HAT ON AGING
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
This poem is hilarious. I loved it, but I wonder if you meant \"pooping\" instead of \"popping.\" It rhymes you know. If that\'s what you meant, hit the edit button and correct it. :)
Thanks for posting this excellent poem on the aging process.
October 22nd, 2018 15:53
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
This poem is hilarious. I loved it, but I wonder if you meant \"pooping\" instead of \"popping.\" It rhymes you know. If that\'s what you meant, hit the edit button and correct it. :)
Thanks for posting this excellent poem on the aging process.
October 22nd, 2018 15:53
FORGIVE ME
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
We feel your pain in this read, Shayle.
Your words are filled with raw emotion. Thanks for sharing. :)
October 18th, 2018 11:10
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
We feel your pain in this read, Shayle.
Your words are filled with raw emotion. Thanks for sharing. :)
October 18th, 2018 11:10
GONE FOREVER ( ONE OF MY BIGGEST FEARS)
dusk arising said:
And so begins a new beginning. Your life moves on from here enriched by this past. Now you know love.
A reall good, compact, punchy, emotional piece.
October 11th, 2018 15:12
dusk arising said:
And so begins a new beginning. Your life moves on from here enriched by this past. Now you know love.
A reall good, compact, punchy, emotional piece.
October 11th, 2018 15:12
KIDNAPPED MY FEELINGS
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
A nice attempt at writing down the feelings from the heart. Sounds like love to me. Thanks for sharing. :)
October 9th, 2018 16:20
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
A nice attempt at writing down the feelings from the heart. Sounds like love to me. Thanks for sharing. :)
October 9th, 2018 16:20
CRUSH FOR HIM
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Sounds like love. Nicely done. Glad you wrote down your emotional ride and shared it with us. Keep posting! :)
October 8th, 2018 16:01
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Sounds like love. Nicely done. Glad you wrote down your emotional ride and shared it with us. Keep posting! :)
October 8th, 2018 16:01
MY FOREVER PET
orchidee said:
A sensitive write. I know what you mean. We can get replacement pets, but may not want to rush into it.
June 14th, 2018 01:41
orchidee said:
A sensitive write. I know what you mean. We can get replacement pets, but may not want to rush into it.
June 14th, 2018 01:41
MY FOREVER PET
A.H. Browning said:
A very good friend had a cat named Maple. The cat, Maple, had a very funny way of making a huge and over dramatic production out of ignoring me, of just how much I did not matter to her. I don\'t really know how to describe this, but it was always very amusing. Maple has been gone now for several years and I really miss her. However, I know that wherever she is, she\'s ignoring me right now... completely.
June 13th, 2018 18:19
A.H. Browning said:
A very good friend had a cat named Maple. The cat, Maple, had a very funny way of making a huge and over dramatic production out of ignoring me, of just how much I did not matter to her. I don\'t really know how to describe this, but it was always very amusing. Maple has been gone now for several years and I really miss her. However, I know that wherever she is, she\'s ignoring me right now... completely.
June 13th, 2018 18:19
MY FOREVER PET
Lalion said:
I feel with you, I still miss my Jovan and its been 14 years but he still visits in my dream and I still sometimes wake up in panic because I had forgotten to pick up his favourite food.
I am sorry for your loss. Remember funny moments and laugh, always do that..
June 13th, 2018 17:22
Lalion said:
I feel with you, I still miss my Jovan and its been 14 years but he still visits in my dream and I still sometimes wake up in panic because I had forgotten to pick up his favourite food.
I am sorry for your loss. Remember funny moments and laugh, always do that..
June 13th, 2018 17:22
EX-FRIENDS
niallprideaux said:
I definitely think this about some people... nice write :)
May 18th, 2018 15:52
niallprideaux said:
I definitely think this about some people... nice write :)
May 18th, 2018 15:52
Thinking of you
Antoinette said:
It\'s simple and that works. Sometimes things are tied in a perfect little bow and that\'s how I feel about this poem. It\'s cute.
May 4th, 2018 14:20
Antoinette said:
It\'s simple and that works. Sometimes things are tied in a perfect little bow and that\'s how I feel about this poem. It\'s cute.
May 4th, 2018 14:20
Murder Me
orchidee said:
Oohh not today, thank you! heehee. Oops, that\'s taken the sharp edge off this poem
May 1st, 2018 13:55
orchidee said:
Oohh not today, thank you! heehee. Oops, that\'s taken the sharp edge off this poem
May 1st, 2018 13:55
World of lies
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
this is an amazing poem i can really relate and understand... just know your never alone there is always someone that can relate
June 5th, 2017 08:58
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
this is an amazing poem i can really relate and understand... just know your never alone there is always someone that can relate
June 5th, 2017 08:58
World of lies
Ethan said:
To be honest, it\'s a fun idea, but you didn\'t execute it as efficiently or eloquently as I\'d hoped. Just my opinion, keep writing.
June 4th, 2017 14:21
Ethan said:
To be honest, it\'s a fun idea, but you didn\'t execute it as efficiently or eloquently as I\'d hoped. Just my opinion, keep writing.
June 4th, 2017 14:21
scared
swingline said:
Sometimes an optical illusion occurs in the mind of the heart . Like looking into the mirror we see a reflection of ourself . Which if you are looking at someone else and see your reflections of your feelings it may just be a mirage you see .
May 5th, 2017 13:48
swingline said:
Sometimes an optical illusion occurs in the mind of the heart . Like looking into the mirror we see a reflection of ourself . Which if you are looking at someone else and see your reflections of your feelings it may just be a mirage you see .
May 5th, 2017 13:48
pretending
swingline said:
Life\'s a mess isn\'t it . As the North Mississippi Allstars say , \'Unless your sleeping in a hollow log , drinking muddy water , you\'re okay \'
May 3rd, 2017 10:49
swingline said:
Life\'s a mess isn\'t it . As the North Mississippi Allstars say , \'Unless your sleeping in a hollow log , drinking muddy water , you\'re okay \'
May 3rd, 2017 10:49
my old friend
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME SHAYL ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ I am sure it struck a chord with many of our Members. At som point (or points ) in time we have an imaginary Friend ~ they can be quite an asset when we are lonely or alone ! Thanks for sharing BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems ~ Thanks B.
April 14th, 2017 16:22
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME SHAYL ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ I am sure it struck a chord with many of our Members. At som point (or points ) in time we have an imaginary Friend ~ they can be quite an asset when we are lonely or alone ! Thanks for sharing BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems ~ Thanks B.
April 14th, 2017 16:22
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