Comments received on poems by Shayl
THE FREAK OF NATURE
David Wakeling said:
This is a little self indulgent.I mean anxiety is a serious mental illness and require medication not poetry
March 11th, 2023 01:47
David Wakeling said:
This is a little self indulgent.I mean anxiety is a serious mental illness and require medication not poetry
March 11th, 2023 01:47
I\'M DYING OF DEPRESSION IN THE MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT
GentlemanJim said:
I like this from a different perspective having lost my soulmate, lost my hope and dreams of tomorrow, dare I believe I could love again. Thank you
March 10th, 2023 13:29
GentlemanJim said:
I like this from a different perspective having lost my soulmate, lost my hope and dreams of tomorrow, dare I believe I could love again. Thank you
March 10th, 2023 13:29
I\'M DYING OF DEPRESSION IN THE MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT
Abby1234 said:
Same. I can relate to you. I long for all those things.
March 9th, 2023 08:30
Abby1234 said:
Same. I can relate to you. I long for all those things.
March 9th, 2023 08:30
I\'M DYING OF DEPRESSION IN THE MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT
OatMilkLatte said:
Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem. I hear you, and I oh so hope you find what you seek.
March 9th, 2023 00:39
OatMilkLatte said:
Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem. I hear you, and I oh so hope you find what you seek.
March 9th, 2023 00:39
WHY DO I
L. B. Mek said:
well, at least
you can rhyme your suffering
clear enough
for us to appreciate, what you\'re going through...
keep expressing, keep fighting, keep sharing
all the best!
October 25th, 2021 04:34
L. B. Mek said:
well, at least
you can rhyme your suffering
clear enough
for us to appreciate, what you\'re going through...
keep expressing, keep fighting, keep sharing
all the best!
October 25th, 2021 04:34
NOTHING LEFT TO LOSE
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes you just know it\'s the end, and this is the end.
October 20th, 2021 15:36
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes you just know it\'s the end, and this is the end.
October 20th, 2021 15:36
SPECIAL FRIEND
Goldfinch60 said:
Good friends are so important in our lives.
Andy
March 31st, 2021 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Good friends are so important in our lives.
Andy
March 31st, 2021 01:28
WHY DADDY? WHY?
Poetic Dan said:
And my is Steve and I didn\'t meet him until I was 15 by then it was to late and my step father and drunkenly broken my spirit! Yet nearly 40 years down the line I\'m a dad they could never dream, so in a way I did forgive and made sure I let mine know what a precious gift life is!
Thank you for sharing such a raw and open part of your journey, keep shining bright.
March 30th, 2021 16:05
Poetic Dan said:
And my is Steve and I didn\'t meet him until I was 15 by then it was to late and my step father and drunkenly broken my spirit! Yet nearly 40 years down the line I\'m a dad they could never dream, so in a way I did forgive and made sure I let mine know what a precious gift life is!
Thank you for sharing such a raw and open part of your journey, keep shining bright.
March 30th, 2021 16:05
SPECIAL FRIEND
Poetic Dan said:
What every soul should give to another, the gift of friendship!
Beautifully put
March 30th, 2021 15:54
Poetic Dan said:
What every soul should give to another, the gift of friendship!
Beautifully put
March 30th, 2021 15:54
NO LONGER DADDYS LITTLE GIRL
Suresh said:
The sooner one becomes independent, the stronger the bonds of relationship becomes, allowing one the freedom to explore.
January 12th, 2021 15:06
Suresh said:
The sooner one becomes independent, the stronger the bonds of relationship becomes, allowing one the freedom to explore.
January 12th, 2021 15:06
YOU WERE MY EVERYTHING (then you broke my heart after promising not to)
Goldfinch60 said:
Those silent tears will pass, they have for me.
Andy
October 2nd, 2020 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Those silent tears will pass, they have for me.
Andy
October 2nd, 2020 00:27
YOU WERE MY EVERYTHING (then you broke my heart after promising not to)
Whimsical_1 said:
I love the versing you have in this poem. It\'s definitely a pain I\'m sure many of us have experienced. Wishing you some happier nights to come
October 1st, 2020 18:01
Whimsical_1 said:
I love the versing you have in this poem. It\'s definitely a pain I\'m sure many of us have experienced. Wishing you some happier nights to come
October 1st, 2020 18:01
I HOPE WE STAY WITH YOU MOM
Nemo said:
I agree with LG ❤️
stay strong and emotionally support you mum and brother 💪
beautifully written. 🌹
January 24th, 2020 16:07
Nemo said:
I agree with LG ❤️
stay strong and emotionally support you mum and brother 💪
beautifully written. 🌹
January 24th, 2020 16:07
WAITING FOR MY DADDY
dusk arising said:
So sad. After reading your words i wanted you to read this:-
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-99272
June 6th, 2019 13:39
dusk arising said:
So sad. After reading your words i wanted you to read this:-
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-99272
June 6th, 2019 13:39
WHY DADDY? WHY?
MissTess78 said:
Such a sad poem...I can feel your pain because I can relate...but you can turn that all around with forgiveness...believe me it will set you free
May 31st, 2019 08:17
MissTess78 said:
Such a sad poem...I can feel your pain because I can relate...but you can turn that all around with forgiveness...believe me it will set you free
May 31st, 2019 08:17
BLACK AND WHITE
dusk arising said:
Yes war is awful.... and we see ISIS men happily beheading non combatant civilians and placing heads on stakes. No wonder our men go to war eh?
February 20th, 2019 17:15
dusk arising said:
Yes war is awful.... and we see ISIS men happily beheading non combatant civilians and placing heads on stakes. No wonder our men go to war eh?
February 20th, 2019 17:15
I LOVE YOU
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
i dont know if you saw my latest poem \"i fucking love you\" but it seems like i gave you some inspiration? great poem
February 11th, 2019 07:56
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
i dont know if you saw my latest poem \"i fucking love you\" but it seems like i gave you some inspiration? great poem
February 11th, 2019 07:56
I LOVE YOU
dusk arising said:
Made me laugh this one. The way you turn it around in last verse is good fun. And of course, so true but.... life\'s bitch, then you die!
February 8th, 2019 13:19
dusk arising said:
Made me laugh this one. The way you turn it around in last verse is good fun. And of course, so true but.... life\'s bitch, then you die!
February 8th, 2019 13:19
BEST-FRIEND BETRAYED
Goldfinch60 said:
Sadly emotive write, when friends hurt you it is a blow to your heart.
November 29th, 2018 02:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Sadly emotive write, when friends hurt you it is a blow to your heart.
November 29th, 2018 02:05
FOR HIM
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Wonderfully emotional poem written from the heart. I suspect the subject of your poem is your baby.
If so, enjoy.
November 26th, 2018 17:36
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Wonderfully emotional poem written from the heart. I suspect the subject of your poem is your baby.
If so, enjoy.
November 26th, 2018 17:36
THE CAT IN THE HAT ON AGING
Leisa Niamh said:
Very funny indeed. Keep up the writing.
November 10th, 2018 18:21
Leisa Niamh said:
Very funny indeed. Keep up the writing.
November 10th, 2018 18:21
MOTHER & DAUGHTER
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes Shayl that relationship is so important, I hope that all is worked out soon.
November 3rd, 2018 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes Shayl that relationship is so important, I hope that all is worked out soon.
November 3rd, 2018 01:10
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