Comments received on poems by Shayl



MY EVERYTHING
Goldfinch60 said:

May that love last forever.

Andy

September 6th, 2020 01:25

I HOPE WE STAY WITH YOU MOM
Nemo said:

I agree with LG ❤️
stay strong and emotionally support you mum and brother 💪
beautifully written. 🌹


January 24th, 2020 16:07

WAITING FOR MY DADDY
dusk arising said:

So sad. After reading your words i wanted you to read this:-
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-99272

June 6th, 2019 13:39

WHY DADDY? WHY?
MissTess78 said:

Such a sad poem...I can feel your pain because I can relate...but you can turn that all around with forgiveness...believe me it will set you free

May 31st, 2019 08:17

WHERE\'S MY DADDY?
Goldfinch60 said:

Very sad write.

May 9th, 2019 00:43

BLACK AND WHITE
dusk arising said:

Yes war is awful.... and we see ISIS men happily beheading non combatant civilians and placing heads on stakes. No wonder our men go to war eh?


February 20th, 2019 17:15

I LOVE YOU
Writings From The Unknown13 said:

i dont know if you saw my latest poem \"i fucking love you\" but it seems like i gave you some inspiration? great poem

February 11th, 2019 07:56

I LOVE YOU
SerenWise said:

Love this!

February 8th, 2019 15:36

I LOVE YOU
dusk arising said:

Made me laugh this one. The way you turn it around in last verse is good fun. And of course, so true but.... life\'s bitch, then you die!

February 8th, 2019 13:19

GEOMETRY
psychofemale said:

i loved the last stanza :)

January 24th, 2019 18:02

BEST-FRIEND BETRAYED
Goldfinch60 said:

Sadly emotive write, when friends hurt you it is a blow to your heart.

November 29th, 2018 02:05

FOR HIM
Goldfinch60 said:

Good loving write.

November 27th, 2018 01:59

FOR HIM
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Wonderfully emotional poem written from the heart. I suspect the subject of your poem is your baby.

If so, enjoy.

November 26th, 2018 17:36

THE CAT IN THE HAT ON AGING
Leisa Niamh said:

Very funny indeed. Keep up the writing.

November 10th, 2018 18:21

MOTHER & DAUGHTER
Goldfinch60 said:

Yes Shayl that relationship is so important, I hope that all is worked out soon.

November 3rd, 2018 01:10

NATURE IS EVERYWHERE
Goldfinch60 said:

Nature is always wondrous.

October 25th, 2018 01:38

THE CAT IN THE HAT ON AGING
A.H. Browning said:

I\'m still laughing...

October 22nd, 2018 19:22

THE CAT IN THE HAT ON AGING
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

This poem is hilarious. I loved it, but I wonder if you meant \"pooping\" instead of \"popping.\" It rhymes you know. If that\'s what you meant, hit the edit button and correct it. :)

Thanks for posting this excellent poem on the aging process.

October 22nd, 2018 15:53

FORGIVE ME
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

We feel your pain in this read, Shayle.

Your words are filled with raw emotion. Thanks for sharing. :)

October 18th, 2018 11:10

GONE FOREVER ( ONE OF MY BIGGEST FEARS)
dusk arising said:

And so begins a new beginning. Your life moves on from here enriched by this past. Now you know love.
A reall good, compact, punchy, emotional piece.

October 11th, 2018 15:12

KIDNAPPED MY FEELINGS
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

A nice attempt at writing down the feelings from the heart. Sounds like love to me. Thanks for sharing. :)

October 9th, 2018 16:20

CRUSH FOR HIM
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Sounds like love. Nicely done. Glad you wrote down your emotional ride and shared it with us. Keep posting! :)

October 8th, 2018 16:01

GOODBYE MY FRIEND
orchidee said:

A sensitive and sad write Shayl.

June 29th, 2018 02:35

MISSING YOU ALWAYS
CuriousSoul said:

Sport for your lose

June 15th, 2018 21:10

MISSING YOU ALWAYS
Gabriella said:

heart touching I loved it

June 15th, 2018 12:06

MY FOREVER PET
orchidee said:

A sensitive write. I know what you mean. We can get replacement pets, but may not want to rush into it.

June 14th, 2018 01:41

MY FOREVER PET
A.H. Browning said:

A very good friend had a cat named Maple. The cat, Maple, had a very funny way of making a huge and over dramatic production out of ignoring me, of just how much I did not matter to her. I don\'t really know how to describe this, but it was always very amusing. Maple has been gone now for several years and I really miss her. However, I know that wherever she is, she\'s ignoring me right now... completely.

June 13th, 2018 18:19

MY FOREVER PET
Lalion said:

I feel with you, I still miss my Jovan and its been 14 years but he still visits in my dream and I still sometimes wake up in panic because I had forgotten to pick up his favourite food.
I am sorry for your loss. Remember funny moments and laugh, always do that..

June 13th, 2018 17:22

MY FOREVER PET
Georgiarous101 said:

Beautiful poem so sorry for your loss x

June 13th, 2018 16:55

EX-FRIENDS
niallprideaux said:

I definitely think this about some people... nice write :)

May 18th, 2018 15:52

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