Comments received on poems by jdblake



Is there Ever Truth?
Lalion said:

Only the Truth can set you free. No matter what, truth endures and somebody wrote that the truth is like a Lion, set it free and it will fiercely defends itself.
Walk on the side of truth, Best wishes and a truthful write.

June 20th, 2018 18:00

Purpose
Gabriella said:

wow very good write

June 20th, 2018 08:22

Hiding with a Prescription
jdblake said:

These are just things that I have experienced and still haunt my mind from time to time. That pain creates words and I write it out of my mind. Better on paper than letting it taking over me.

September 18th, 2017 20:55

Hiding with a Prescription
Christina8 said:

Very poignant and well written. I think there are a lot of people that can relate to this poem. Thanks for sharing this personal write! Hope you feel better soon!

September 18th, 2017 17:45

Ptsd
ron parrish aka wordman said:

ptsd,it touches a lot of us

September 17th, 2017 21:53

Ptsd
Christina8 said:

Thank you for sharing your intimate story of ptsd, depression and anxiety. You wrote a good poem and expressed yourself well. I hope you keep writing and posting poems and that it helps you deal with the pain and maybe that it helps others too.

September 17th, 2017 15:42

Losing Apart of what Keeps Me Sane
Christina8 said:

You wrote a beautiful poem in tribute for your grandma although you are sad and in pain. I know firsthand that it\'s hard to see your grandparents suffer and I feel for you. Thanks for sharing a personal write!

September 16th, 2017 19:58

The Fire Burns too Hot
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

July 14th, 2017 18:41

The Fire Burns too Hot
Nicholas Browning said:

The single thing that every human shares with another, is that not a single one of us ever ASKED to be here. Life is both cheerful and dark. We must find our way through it all. Good poetry, and best of luck.

July 14th, 2017 15:29

The Fire Burns too Hot
jdblake said:

Thank you

July 14th, 2017 08:00

The Fire Burns too Hot
ShannonXx said:

This is an emotional poem but written very well

July 14th, 2017 07:54

The Mirror Holds Hate
Poetic Dan said:

Reminds me of my raw pain
Use it, like I did let it take you
The path will only be dark for so long
Well I know it can feel like it is
But my hope is that you\'ll find that inner peace.

I truly thank you for sharing your pain with me

July 8th, 2017 19:20

Please be Gentle
lostgirl24 said:

This is very beautiful, relatable, and well written. If you ever need to talk, let me know and I\'m there.

July 5th, 2017 20:03

Please be Gentle
Goldfinch60 said:

Good strong write.

July 5th, 2017 01:38

Lost within Myself
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write. It is not you there are many that feel like this with the way our world is at the present. Look towards the light, it is out there.

June 17th, 2017 00:50

Lost within Myself
onepauly said:

I feel the same way. the key is
sometimes

June 16th, 2017 22:25

Lost within Myself
Lala said:

Touching. Good writing

June 16th, 2017 20:24

My Name is Batman
Hopey_xx said:

Very nice poem, well done! I know how it feels too

April 24th, 2017 11:41

Shadows in my dreams
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write.

April 23rd, 2017 00:58

Shadows in my dreams
ElenaGrace said:

Elegantly written. Nice job:)

April 22nd, 2017 22:32

Broken
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME FRIEND ~ THANK YOU FOR A CHALLENGING POEM ~ which is full of despair ! In my experience ~ and I have experienced the Storms of Life ! I have been knocked down but never knocked out ~ almost ruined but never completely destroyed ! I value life and have always managed to pick myself up again. NEVER give up HOPE ! Thinking of you and praying for you ~ BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems ~ B

April 16th, 2017 16:26