Comments received on poems by ElenaGrace
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FredPeyer said:
Outback is right. \"They\" are not important. Listen to the voice inside instead.
Very well written. I don\'t know if you write about yourself or somebody else, but it sounds like a cry for help.
July 2nd, 2017 16:44
FredPeyer said:
Outback is right. \"They\" are not important. Listen to the voice inside instead.
Very well written. I don\'t know if you write about yourself or somebody else, but it sounds like a cry for help.
July 2nd, 2017 16:44
Low Battery
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Hints of the erotic (or maybe your icon and the letter \"X\" in your monicker sets the male brain off in such direction).
June 28th, 2017 08:03
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Hints of the erotic (or maybe your icon and the letter \"X\" in your monicker sets the male brain off in such direction).
June 28th, 2017 08:03
Low Battery
Louis Gibbs said:
I\'m not sure that I get it, but somehow like it just the same? Thanks for this poem, Elena.
June 27th, 2017 22:20
Louis Gibbs said:
I\'m not sure that I get it, but somehow like it just the same? Thanks for this poem, Elena.
June 27th, 2017 22:20
Pinocchio
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Your strength will come - believe in yourself.
June 6th, 2017 02:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Your strength will come - believe in yourself.
June 6th, 2017 02:14
Pinocchio
Ethan said:
Is the blue fairy in the fairytale or something? I haven\'t seen Pinocchio in a very long time.
June 5th, 2017 13:29
Ethan said:
Is the blue fairy in the fairytale or something? I haven\'t seen Pinocchio in a very long time.
June 5th, 2017 13:29
Mannequin Words
Fay Slimm. said:
I feel the romance of these well-crafted lines and love the comparison to the mannequin world . An engaging read Elena.
June 4th, 2017 13:15
Fay Slimm. said:
I feel the romance of these well-crafted lines and love the comparison to the mannequin world . An engaging read Elena.
June 4th, 2017 13:15
Unseen, Unheard
P.X. Vexxus said:
Some would say if you raise your voice loud enough in an empty room, someone will eventually hear you. Don\'t give up, never stop shouting. I heard you, others have seen you, and now we want to hear more! ~
May 9th, 2017 00:30
P.X. Vexxus said:
Some would say if you raise your voice loud enough in an empty room, someone will eventually hear you. Don\'t give up, never stop shouting. I heard you, others have seen you, and now we want to hear more! ~
May 9th, 2017 00:30
Unseen, Unheard
swingline said:
Perhaps so true , who are we really looking at when one looks at another .
May 8th, 2017 18:52
swingline said:
Perhaps so true , who are we really looking at when one looks at another .
May 8th, 2017 18:52
Letter To Love
SorrowfullyHappy said:
i\'d say in line 3 take out the words it\'s and in and replace them with is
\"But as is your nature\"
but that\'s just me
May 4th, 2017 12:12
SorrowfullyHappy said:
i\'d say in line 3 take out the words it\'s and in and replace them with is
\"But as is your nature\"
but that\'s just me
May 4th, 2017 12:12
Letter To Love
Gary Edward Geraci said:
I would replace the word \"Love\" in the opening line with the word \"Lust.\" Your stanzas very brilliantly describe a \'counterfeit\' love, an \'imposter\' to love -which can be accurately expressed to always wound (i.e. ill fated endings): Lust
May 3rd, 2017 22:41
Gary Edward Geraci said:
I would replace the word \"Love\" in the opening line with the word \"Lust.\" Your stanzas very brilliantly describe a \'counterfeit\' love, an \'imposter\' to love -which can be accurately expressed to always wound (i.e. ill fated endings): Lust
May 3rd, 2017 22:41
Man of Stars
Warded Seabee said:
I generally don\'t like to be touched often, but I definitely enjoyed this poem (:
April 21st, 2017 14:10
Warded Seabee said:
I generally don\'t like to be touched often, but I definitely enjoyed this poem (:
April 21st, 2017 14:10
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