Comments received on poems by Jessie
Ocean of Unspoken Words
lasergraph said:
Those tinted glasses are rose colored no doubt.
January 16th, 2018 16:43
lasergraph said:
Those tinted glasses are rose colored no doubt.
January 16th, 2018 16:43
Determined, Alone
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Yes the thought that straight comes to the mind is how powerful this is, focusing on thethe strengths despite any odds. Wow demons can fight stronger than Angels, that is creatively said, way to go. Kudos.
January 15th, 2018 14:41
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Yes the thought that straight comes to the mind is how powerful this is, focusing on thethe strengths despite any odds. Wow demons can fight stronger than Angels, that is creatively said, way to go. Kudos.
January 15th, 2018 14:41
The Child
Pierre Walter Riony said:
Reading this poem brings me back to my childhood, the peaceful times in Tibet where I frequently watched over my family\'s goats. I remember conversing with the kind Chinese monks every Sunday and making it back home for tea. What beautiful memories.. Thank you madam for this true gift you have blessed us all with
Greetings and Gratitude from UK
May 11th, 2017 15:42
Pierre Walter Riony said:
Reading this poem brings me back to my childhood, the peaceful times in Tibet where I frequently watched over my family\'s goats. I remember conversing with the kind Chinese monks every Sunday and making it back home for tea. What beautiful memories.. Thank you madam for this true gift you have blessed us all with
Greetings and Gratitude from UK
May 11th, 2017 15:42
The Child
WriteBeLight said:
So beautiful and poignant Jessie! Wonderful poetry. Great point of view and approach. So many can relate :)
May 11th, 2017 09:50
WriteBeLight said:
So beautiful and poignant Jessie! Wonderful poetry. Great point of view and approach. So many can relate :)
May 11th, 2017 09:50
The Child
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, we all have that \'little child\' within us.
May 11th, 2017 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, we all have that \'little child\' within us.
May 11th, 2017 01:38
The Child
Gary Edward Geraci said:
I personally read a refreshing, pro-life, perspective out of your poem Jesse. Thank you for conveying the immense and unrepeatable value that a child\'s life represents. For us to know that child within we must first know and be able to appreciate other\'s children: brothers or sisters, nephews and nieces, cousins, our friend\'s children....
May 10th, 2017 22:48
Gary Edward Geraci said:
I personally read a refreshing, pro-life, perspective out of your poem Jesse. Thank you for conveying the immense and unrepeatable value that a child\'s life represents. For us to know that child within we must first know and be able to appreciate other\'s children: brothers or sisters, nephews and nieces, cousins, our friend\'s children....
May 10th, 2017 22:48
The Child
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME JESSIE ~ Thanks for sharing you first poem. It is elegant in structure pulsating with rhyme & rhythm which makes it exciting to read and easy to recite. The subject is enthralling to read an something all of us (30+) can relate ~ the cute little Girl and the boisterous little Boy inside us gradually fades and dies. This is indeed very very sad ~ we can lose our sense of fun and innocence ! HOWEVER ~ (AS YOU INDICATE) I have notice that friends of mine who have young children do themselves become like little Girls and little Boys again ! Thanks for your explanation and thanks for caring. Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ thanks b.
May 10th, 2017 18:39
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME JESSIE ~ Thanks for sharing you first poem. It is elegant in structure pulsating with rhyme & rhythm which makes it exciting to read and easy to recite. The subject is enthralling to read an something all of us (30+) can relate ~ the cute little Girl and the boisterous little Boy inside us gradually fades and dies. This is indeed very very sad ~ we can lose our sense of fun and innocence ! HOWEVER ~ (AS YOU INDICATE) I have notice that friends of mine who have young children do themselves become like little Girls and little Boys again ! Thanks for your explanation and thanks for caring. Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ thanks b.
May 10th, 2017 18:39
