Comments received on poems by Dxmenxque
Dig
Louis Gibbs said:
You \"patted it to smooth out the surface\", But was a more fundamental change made? Just wondering ... It sounds like that will be required to create the change you seek. Thanks for sharing, D.S.
July 28th, 2017 09:44
Louis Gibbs said:
You \"patted it to smooth out the surface\", But was a more fundamental change made? Just wondering ... It sounds like that will be required to create the change you seek. Thanks for sharing, D.S.
July 28th, 2017 09:44
Thank You
Louis Gibbs said:
Thank you for sharing this strong poem of appreciation, D.S. Your old soul shines through!
July 27th, 2017 08:02
Louis Gibbs said:
Thank you for sharing this strong poem of appreciation, D.S. Your old soul shines through!
July 27th, 2017 08:02
Societies Standards
Azura Nightsong said:
I too shout at societies standards, for they are fake and just wishful thinking.
Instead of crying over how you can\'t fulfill them, instead take joy in crushing them and being you!
Overall a very good poem!
July 24th, 2017 17:21
Azura Nightsong said:
I too shout at societies standards, for they are fake and just wishful thinking.
Instead of crying over how you can\'t fulfill them, instead take joy in crushing them and being you!
Overall a very good poem!
July 24th, 2017 17:21
Societies Standards
Azura Nightsong said:
I too shout at societies standards, for they are fake and just wishful thinking.
Instead of crying over how you can\'t fulfill them, instead take joy in crushing them and being you!
Overall a very good poem!
July 24th, 2017 17:21
Azura Nightsong said:
I too shout at societies standards, for they are fake and just wishful thinking.
Instead of crying over how you can\'t fulfill them, instead take joy in crushing them and being you!
Overall a very good poem!
July 24th, 2017 17:21
Societies Standards
burning-embers said:
What a nugget of truth you expose here! You\'re right. There are several desires which are killing me right now.
July 24th, 2017 11:20
burning-embers said:
What a nugget of truth you expose here! You\'re right. There are several desires which are killing me right now.
July 24th, 2017 11:20
Societies Standards
charlesbarrett said:
Beautiful piece. Very thought provoking. The damage that society can cause to people, young women in particular, is horrible. “Normality is a paved road: it’s comfortable to walk, but no flowers grow there” - Vincent Van Gogh. Thank you for sharing.
July 24th, 2017 11:10
charlesbarrett said:
Beautiful piece. Very thought provoking. The damage that society can cause to people, young women in particular, is horrible. “Normality is a paved road: it’s comfortable to walk, but no flowers grow there” - Vincent Van Gogh. Thank you for sharing.
July 24th, 2017 11:10
False
charlesbarrett said:
I really enjoyed the progression in this. From being fooled, to realization, to independence. Favorite line was “once you got it just right. The consistency. The flavor. That’s when you slipped it to me”. Great imagery. Nice work.
July 22nd, 2017 08:22
charlesbarrett said:
I really enjoyed the progression in this. From being fooled, to realization, to independence. Favorite line was “once you got it just right. The consistency. The flavor. That’s when you slipped it to me”. Great imagery. Nice work.
July 22nd, 2017 08:22
Mirrors
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ THANKS FOR YOUR FIRST POEM ~ Excellent in context and very very true. Mirrors can be a curse anyway ~ because what we see is a MIRROR IMAGE where LEFT is RIGHT and RIGHT is WRONG.. We are unsymmetrical and when we see a photo we often get a shock because it looks nothing like our reversed MIRROR IMAGE. Because of Fashion and Glamour and every \"Famouis\" girl being SIZE ZERO (I don\'t like skinny heroin chic Girls ! ) lots of my Younger Female Friends are dissatisfied with how they look ~ especially NAKED in a MIRROR ~ most ladies over 40 don\'t have that problem ~ but for most teens 25 years is too long to wait. When I\'m with a Lady ~ what is important is PERSONALITY & LOVE ~ Color ~ Size ~ What she is (or isn\'t) wearing ~ Cosmetics ~ Jewels etc are all UNIMPORTANT ~ BUT as you say ~ Females are very difficult to convince that we love them for themselves ~ AMEN Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems ~ Thanks B.
June 1st, 2017 08:43
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ THANKS FOR YOUR FIRST POEM ~ Excellent in context and very very true. Mirrors can be a curse anyway ~ because what we see is a MIRROR IMAGE where LEFT is RIGHT and RIGHT is WRONG.. We are unsymmetrical and when we see a photo we often get a shock because it looks nothing like our reversed MIRROR IMAGE. Because of Fashion and Glamour and every \"Famouis\" girl being SIZE ZERO (I don\'t like skinny heroin chic Girls ! ) lots of my Younger Female Friends are dissatisfied with how they look ~ especially NAKED in a MIRROR ~ most ladies over 40 don\'t have that problem ~ but for most teens 25 years is too long to wait. When I\'m with a Lady ~ what is important is PERSONALITY & LOVE ~ Color ~ Size ~ What she is (or isn\'t) wearing ~ Cosmetics ~ Jewels etc are all UNIMPORTANT ~ BUT as you say ~ Females are very difficult to convince that we love them for themselves ~ AMEN Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems ~ Thanks B.
June 1st, 2017 08:43
