Comments received on poems by Dent Moses
A beautiful life
miss aggie said:
Beautifully written! I enjoyed reading your poem.
March 3rd, 2018 16:46
miss aggie said:
Beautifully written! I enjoyed reading your poem.
March 3rd, 2018 16:46
The Plea in My Eyes to Save Me
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant eneding and soulful write. Thank you for helping clear more tears I hope back.
January 22nd, 2018 12:29
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant eneding and soulful write. Thank you for helping clear more tears I hope back.
January 22nd, 2018 12:29
I Feel You
kevin browne said:
and this poem made my bones stronger., well written, friend.
November 17th, 2017 13:25
kevin browne said:
and this poem made my bones stronger., well written, friend.
November 17th, 2017 13:25
Angel
J.M. Shine said:
*Like Button\" Lots of great lines there. Good job, keep going!
September 2nd, 2017 16:30
J.M. Shine said:
*Like Button\" Lots of great lines there. Good job, keep going!
September 2nd, 2017 16:30
Sweet Release
Simple-Man87 said:
Very well done. I loved it. Thank you for sharing.
August 18th, 2017 12:57
Simple-Man87 said:
Very well done. I loved it. Thank you for sharing.
August 18th, 2017 12:57
They Never Die
FredPeyer said:
I like your poem Dent, well written!
At my age I cannot agree with your last line though, for me waking up is a godsend....I am still alive! :-)
August 13th, 2017 16:25
FredPeyer said:
I like your poem Dent, well written!
At my age I cannot agree with your last line though, for me waking up is a godsend....I am still alive! :-)
August 13th, 2017 16:25
Your Love is Not Enough
Dent Moses said:
No worries, thanks for reading 😊 Sometimes I barely get what I\'m saying lol
August 13th, 2017 09:45
Dent Moses said:
No worries, thanks for reading 😊 Sometimes I barely get what I\'m saying lol
August 13th, 2017 09:45
Your Love is Not Enough
FredPeyer said:
Dent, I am probably a bit dense, but I read it a few times and am not getting it. Is this about a break-up?
August 11th, 2017 21:53
FredPeyer said:
Dent, I am probably a bit dense, but I read it a few times and am not getting it. Is this about a break-up?
August 11th, 2017 21:53
A Chorus
Nicholas Browning said:
Love is painful above all else. Keep it up, don\'t lose sight of the end of the road.
July 14th, 2017 15:25
Nicholas Browning said:
Love is painful above all else. Keep it up, don\'t lose sight of the end of the road.
July 14th, 2017 15:25
See David Sit
Nicholas Browning said:
We take and take with no end. Indeed. Well done.
July 13th, 2017 15:01
Nicholas Browning said:
We take and take with no end. Indeed. Well done.
July 13th, 2017 15:01
See David Sit
burning-embers said:
Straight away i\'m thinking environment. To me this is a provocative cry to save our planet but I\'m not sure.
July 12th, 2017 01:32
burning-embers said:
Straight away i\'m thinking environment. To me this is a provocative cry to save our planet but I\'m not sure.
July 12th, 2017 01:32
Oh Why, Oh Why Can\'t I?
orchidee said:
Oh dear! It may not be wise to give ratings \'out of 10\' to poems. I don\'t mind it on my poems though.
I understand lack of punctuation. I don\'t tend to put much punctuation in my poems - maybe just speech marks, etc.
I suppose we can \'draw breath\' at the end of each line. It is one continuous poem, but set out as you have chosen.
July 5th, 2017 13:16
orchidee said:
Oh dear! It may not be wise to give ratings \'out of 10\' to poems. I don\'t mind it on my poems though.
I understand lack of punctuation. I don\'t tend to put much punctuation in my poems - maybe just speech marks, etc.
I suppose we can \'draw breath\' at the end of each line. It is one continuous poem, but set out as you have chosen.
July 5th, 2017 13:16
Oh Why, Oh Why Can\'t I?
Stephen.Sapaugh said:
I\'m glad that you are putting time and effort into writing poems dentmoses, however I would like to say that punctuation would help this poem a lot. And, wouldn\'t you better classify this more like a song? Also, I don\'t understand the repetition.
July 5th, 2017 09:36
Stephen.Sapaugh said:
I\'m glad that you are putting time and effort into writing poems dentmoses, however I would like to say that punctuation would help this poem a lot. And, wouldn\'t you better classify this more like a song? Also, I don\'t understand the repetition.
July 5th, 2017 09:36
Let me out
Jemerina said:
I could be wrong, and apologies if I am, but is this about mental illness? Strong poem.
July 4th, 2017 11:43
Jemerina said:
I could be wrong, and apologies if I am, but is this about mental illness? Strong poem.
July 4th, 2017 11:43
Let me out
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful writing. I am trying, I am tryingf to figure out the meaning of it all!
July 4th, 2017 05:10
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful writing. I am trying, I am tryingf to figure out the meaning of it all!
July 4th, 2017 05:10
