Comments received on poems by Joaquin Finn
Bye bye Days
Lorna said:
I like this! Not sure I understand it all but somehow it made me smile...... coming to an understanding of another person that other people don\'t \"get\".......
March 17th, 2018 14:15
Lorna said:
I like this! Not sure I understand it all but somehow it made me smile...... coming to an understanding of another person that other people don\'t \"get\".......
March 17th, 2018 14:15
My house in Budapest
Louis Gibbs said:
I will never forget the experience of beholding the splendor of the Blue Mosque! As an engineer and one who appreciates fine architecture, It was breath-taking. I share your love of that great city, Joaquin, and appreciate your fine poem!
July 27th, 2017 07:44
Louis Gibbs said:
I will never forget the experience of beholding the splendor of the Blue Mosque! As an engineer and one who appreciates fine architecture, It was breath-taking. I share your love of that great city, Joaquin, and appreciate your fine poem!
July 27th, 2017 07:44
Mr Bordi
Louis Gibbs said:
A bold, beautiful biographical write, tied up so neatly and profoundly in the last two lines! Well done ... a fine, poignant poem, Brendon.
July 22nd, 2017 11:21
Louis Gibbs said:
A bold, beautiful biographical write, tied up so neatly and profoundly in the last two lines! Well done ... a fine, poignant poem, Brendon.
July 22nd, 2017 11:21
Who brings ice Cream to a fucking poker game ?
Goldfinch60 said:
I would have taken rum and raisin ice-cream! Good fun write.
July 16th, 2017 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
I would have taken rum and raisin ice-cream! Good fun write.
July 16th, 2017 01:16
Who brings ice Cream to a fucking poker game ?
burning-embers said:
Cool! Like a candid snapshot/photo you present a great example of the odd things which characterise the personality of someone you love. These things are priceless reminders of a personality which no framed photo will ever portray. I would never have thought of writing like this, its brilliant. +fav\'s
July 15th, 2017 09:19
burning-embers said:
Cool! Like a candid snapshot/photo you present a great example of the odd things which characterise the personality of someone you love. These things are priceless reminders of a personality which no framed photo will ever portray. I would never have thought of writing like this, its brilliant. +fav\'s
July 15th, 2017 09:19
Help is on the way dear
Nicholas Browning said:
Friendship can be stupid. I once showed a nerdy guy that the world isn\'t as bad as he made it out to be. I was his first real friend. I showed him how to interact with others, how to be himself. In the long run, he thought he could do just fine without me, so we went our separate ways. He then tried to add me on facebook about a year later. I didn\'t accept. Best of luck with your former friend.
July 11th, 2017 19:35
Nicholas Browning said:
Friendship can be stupid. I once showed a nerdy guy that the world isn\'t as bad as he made it out to be. I was his first real friend. I showed him how to interact with others, how to be himself. In the long run, he thought he could do just fine without me, so we went our separate ways. He then tried to add me on facebook about a year later. I didn\'t accept. Best of luck with your former friend.
July 11th, 2017 19:35
GoodBye Green eyed Hero
MaddieJ said:
I like that you aren\'t using alot of figurative language. It\'s just saying what you want to say. It\'s hard to lose someone without warning. I have had a recent loss so I know. Thanks for sharing this!
July 10th, 2017 00:08
MaddieJ said:
I like that you aren\'t using alot of figurative language. It\'s just saying what you want to say. It\'s hard to lose someone without warning. I have had a recent loss so I know. Thanks for sharing this!
July 10th, 2017 00:08
GoodBye Green eyed Hero
Nicholas Browning said:
Powerful. Although, I would like to know who this, \"Green eyed hero is.\" Perhaps I\'ll find out later. Cheers
July 9th, 2017 18:03
Nicholas Browning said:
Powerful. Although, I would like to know who this, \"Green eyed hero is.\" Perhaps I\'ll find out later. Cheers
July 9th, 2017 18:03
What is Lettuce ?
orchidee said:
A fine write J. What is lettuce? Something we must never feed to guinea pigs (ours included here at home). It makes them ill. They can have cabbage, carrots, etc though.
July 4th, 2017 09:48
orchidee said:
A fine write J. What is lettuce? Something we must never feed to guinea pigs (ours included here at home). It makes them ill. They can have cabbage, carrots, etc though.
July 4th, 2017 09:48
What is Lettuce ?
Louis Gibbs said:
When the façade is down we see each other best. A well written truth, Joaquin!
July 4th, 2017 08:54
Louis Gibbs said:
When the façade is down we see each other best. A well written truth, Joaquin!
July 4th, 2017 08:54
What is Lettuce ?
FredPeyer said:
Hate to tell you this, but Hungarians actually come from a different planet. But at 3am they become human.
Love your poem!
July 4th, 2017 04:47
FredPeyer said:
Hate to tell you this, but Hungarians actually come from a different planet. But at 3am they become human.
Love your poem!
July 4th, 2017 04:47
The Things They Don\'t Tell You
FredPeyer said:
No matter where you are, no matter what you are, no matter who you are...somethings you have to find out for yourself. And sometimes that is really hard. Good poem, makes people think!
June 27th, 2017 18:53
FredPeyer said:
No matter where you are, no matter what you are, no matter who you are...somethings you have to find out for yourself. And sometimes that is really hard. Good poem, makes people think!
June 27th, 2017 18:53
I don\\\\\\\'t like Blue eyes
Louis Gibbs said:
I enjoyed this lovely poem, Joaquin. Well done! Welcome to MPS.
June 14th, 2017 08:20
Louis Gibbs said:
I enjoyed this lovely poem, Joaquin. Well done! Welcome to MPS.
June 14th, 2017 08:20
