Comments received on poems by MelanieA



Scars
Louis Gibbs said:

A fine tribute to the love, acceptance, and compassion we all seek, and the fortunate find in true love. Well done, Melaniea!

June 23rd, 2017 09:24

Moonlight
Goldfinch60 said:

Moonlight is beautiful and it can bring such romantic feelings. Good write.

June 20th, 2017 01:25

This Kiss
SheWasTheSun said:

I love how the last line trails off. It leaves the reader wanting to know more yet somehow knowing everything. Great work!

June 18th, 2017 13:52

Longing to be Unmasked
swingline said:

You stand unmasked before God so why not everyone else . If God likes you as you really are then it doesn\'t matter what others think .

June 17th, 2017 04:26

Longing to be Unmasked
John Gover said:

I don\'t know if this was on purpose but the use of zero capitalization really allows you see the vulnerability of the author.

Bold choice. I love it. Well read.

June 17th, 2017 03:46

Longing to be Unmasked
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write. Everybody wears masks in different situations. Welcome to MPS.

June 17th, 2017 00:53