Comments received on poems by MelanieA
Scars
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine tribute to the love, acceptance, and compassion we all seek, and the fortunate find in true love. Well done, Melaniea!
June 23rd, 2017 09:24
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine tribute to the love, acceptance, and compassion we all seek, and the fortunate find in true love. Well done, Melaniea!
June 23rd, 2017 09:24
Moonlight
Goldfinch60 said:
Moonlight is beautiful and it can bring such romantic feelings. Good write.
June 20th, 2017 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Moonlight is beautiful and it can bring such romantic feelings. Good write.
June 20th, 2017 01:25
This Kiss
SheWasTheSun said:
I love how the last line trails off. It leaves the reader wanting to know more yet somehow knowing everything. Great work!
June 18th, 2017 13:52
SheWasTheSun said:
I love how the last line trails off. It leaves the reader wanting to know more yet somehow knowing everything. Great work!
June 18th, 2017 13:52
Longing to be Unmasked
swingline said:
You stand unmasked before God so why not everyone else . If God likes you as you really are then it doesn\'t matter what others think .
June 17th, 2017 04:26
swingline said:
You stand unmasked before God so why not everyone else . If God likes you as you really are then it doesn\'t matter what others think .
June 17th, 2017 04:26
Longing to be Unmasked
John Gover said:
I don\'t know if this was on purpose but the use of zero capitalization really allows you see the vulnerability of the author.
Bold choice. I love it. Well read.
June 17th, 2017 03:46
John Gover said:
I don\'t know if this was on purpose but the use of zero capitalization really allows you see the vulnerability of the author.
Bold choice. I love it. Well read.
June 17th, 2017 03:46
Longing to be Unmasked
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Everybody wears masks in different situations. Welcome to MPS.
June 17th, 2017 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Everybody wears masks in different situations. Welcome to MPS.
June 17th, 2017 00:53