Comments received on poems by fayeisabee1
A While
Its Raskolnikov said:
I\'m so sorry, forget all the long and complicated ways to describe this poem. It is simply true and sad
July 22nd, 2017 08:16
Its Raskolnikov said:
I\'m so sorry, forget all the long and complicated ways to describe this poem. It is simply true and sad
July 22nd, 2017 08:16
A While
charlesbarrett said:
I felt this one. So sad. Well written. Thanks for sharing this.
July 22nd, 2017 07:56
charlesbarrett said:
I felt this one. So sad. Well written. Thanks for sharing this.
July 22nd, 2017 07:56
Close minded elderly
burning-embers said:
I think you\'ve done a job well with this. I\'m in the generation you criticise and by and large you\'re right. When i was your age i was as critical as you of my elders and swore not to become so narrow minded. I assume you\'re doing that too today. Well let me tell you, it ain\'t gonna be easy unless you can laugh at yourself. I often do and hope others laugh with me.
July 2nd, 2017 04:24
burning-embers said:
I think you\'ve done a job well with this. I\'m in the generation you criticise and by and large you\'re right. When i was your age i was as critical as you of my elders and swore not to become so narrow minded. I assume you\'re doing that too today. Well let me tell you, it ain\'t gonna be easy unless you can laugh at yourself. I often do and hope others laugh with me.
July 2nd, 2017 04:24
A Poem about a Poem
FredPeyer said:
Great! Your poems are made of more than meets the eye.
June 30th, 2017 15:24
FredPeyer said:
Great! Your poems are made of more than meets the eye.
June 30th, 2017 15:24
A mug of support
FredPeyer said:
Thank you Faye, made me think. Especially the two lines \"Listen to the words spoken, Disagree and leave the door open\". Don\'t know how many times I closed that door.
June 30th, 2017 15:20
FredPeyer said:
Thank you Faye, made me think. Especially the two lines \"Listen to the words spoken, Disagree and leave the door open\". Don\'t know how many times I closed that door.
June 30th, 2017 15:20
Distant memories of a friend
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully expressed, great writing. Love the \"I tried you didn\'t, I swam you didn\'t\" culminating in the \"U died. I didn\'t\".
June 30th, 2017 15:16
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully expressed, great writing. Love the \"I tried you didn\'t, I swam you didn\'t\" culminating in the \"U died. I didn\'t\".
June 30th, 2017 15:16
Distant memories of a friend
onepauly said:
life is not always kind.
my condolences
June 24th, 2017 23:08
onepauly said:
life is not always kind.
my condolences
June 24th, 2017 23:08
Close minded elderly
P.H.Rose said:
Not all older people
Think it was better back then
Or worse now...
I am a child of 1960
So not a million miles from
60 years old, there where things I hated
About my youth and to be
Honest things I hate about
These days... but you are
What you are in the times
That you live if that makes sense
Your poem is very good,
You just live your life as you
See it and probably when
You are old you\'ll tell your
Children how much better it
Was way back when...
But until then keep writing
June 23rd, 2017 17:41
P.H.Rose said:
Not all older people
Think it was better back then
Or worse now...
I am a child of 1960
So not a million miles from
60 years old, there where things I hated
About my youth and to be
Honest things I hate about
These days... but you are
What you are in the times
That you live if that makes sense
Your poem is very good,
You just live your life as you
See it and probably when
You are old you\'ll tell your
Children how much better it
Was way back when...
But until then keep writing
June 23rd, 2017 17:41
Close minded elderly
Heather T said:
I don\'t think there is anything new under heaven, it just changes in its expression. The superficial things will always pass away. What\'s good never will. I will say that in some capacity there is never growth without change. I appreciate your thoughts.
June 23rd, 2017 15:03
Heather T said:
I don\'t think there is anything new under heaven, it just changes in its expression. The superficial things will always pass away. What\'s good never will. I will say that in some capacity there is never growth without change. I appreciate your thoughts.
June 23rd, 2017 15:03
Close minded elderly
FredPeyer said:
Fayeisabee, I said it in my last comment to you and have to say it again: You write incredibly well!
Subject matter: Yes, there are many of us (I am 69 years old) who are EXACTLY how you describe, living in the past, dreaming of past glory, not understanding today\'s generation. BUT there are also many of us who may not fit into that category.
Having said that, your poem is great, it makes people think and question. And isn\'t that the purpose? You say: \"That still makes you wiser you say?\" Remember Socrates apparently said: \"The only thing I know is that I don\'t know anything.\"
June 23rd, 2017 11:53
FredPeyer said:
Fayeisabee, I said it in my last comment to you and have to say it again: You write incredibly well!
Subject matter: Yes, there are many of us (I am 69 years old) who are EXACTLY how you describe, living in the past, dreaming of past glory, not understanding today\'s generation. BUT there are also many of us who may not fit into that category.
Having said that, your poem is great, it makes people think and question. And isn\'t that the purpose? You say: \"That still makes you wiser you say?\" Remember Socrates apparently said: \"The only thing I know is that I don\'t know anything.\"
June 23rd, 2017 11:53
Close minded elderly
Edthepoet said:
Nice, I like your style. There\'s a beat running through your words.
June 23rd, 2017 10:22
Edthepoet said:
Nice, I like your style. There\'s a beat running through your words.
June 23rd, 2017 10:22
Bubble of suffocation
malubotelho said:
I love the Bible effect. I want to wrap me too.
June 22nd, 2017 21:50
malubotelho said:
I love the Bible effect. I want to wrap me too.
June 22nd, 2017 21:50
Bubble of suffocation
onepauly said:
and then the bubble bursts
into unspoken joy
worth reading
June 22nd, 2017 17:02
onepauly said:
and then the bubble bursts
into unspoken joy
worth reading
June 22nd, 2017 17:02
Computerised Smiles
FredPeyer said:
Fayeisabee, this is why you are writing such beautiful poems. It is true that there is something seriously wrong if two people at the breakfast table text each other to hand over the butter, but YOU more than make up for it with your writing. Put it into an app and you just might have a chance to make them see their erroneous ways :-)
June 21st, 2017 20:53
FredPeyer said:
Fayeisabee, this is why you are writing such beautiful poems. It is true that there is something seriously wrong if two people at the breakfast table text each other to hand over the butter, but YOU more than make up for it with your writing. Put it into an app and you just might have a chance to make them see their erroneous ways :-)
June 21st, 2017 20:53
Computerised Smiles
Goldfinch60 said:
It will not be long before normal conversation is confined to history. Good write.
June 21st, 2017 07:57
Goldfinch60 said:
It will not be long before normal conversation is confined to history. Good write.
June 21st, 2017 07:57
Bullshit Secrets of Love
Jeff said:
...never believed in love to begin with...let alone love at first sight....but i really like this. Great job and very well stated
June 20th, 2017 07:01
Jeff said:
...never believed in love to begin with...let alone love at first sight....but i really like this. Great job and very well stated
June 20th, 2017 07:01
My World- your horror story
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... That was powerful
So much so I had to read over.
Your vibe is strong
Keep doing what your doing
Thanks
June 18th, 2017 05:32
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... That was powerful
So much so I had to read over.
Your vibe is strong
Keep doing what your doing
Thanks
June 18th, 2017 05:32
Temptations
John Gover said:
Life has always been dull.
It\'s true, take a look.
If it wasn\'t a cell phone,
In the old days: A book.
June 17th, 2017 13:06
John Gover said:
Life has always been dull.
It\'s true, take a look.
If it wasn\'t a cell phone,
In the old days: A book.
June 17th, 2017 13:06
