Comments received on poems by Lost Girl
Thoughts
FredPeyer said:
Very well written and thought provoking. There are days like that, and I found that the best remedy is to get up and do something!
July 24th, 2017 18:22
FredPeyer said:
Very well written and thought provoking. There are days like that, and I found that the best remedy is to get up and do something!
July 24th, 2017 18:22
Thoughts
Azura Nightsong said:
I quite understand, my mind is a maze of corridors I quite often find myself travelling down.
Sometimes you don\'t even become aware of the people all around you, you\'re on another planet.
Nice poem, keep writing!
July 24th, 2017 17:24
Azura Nightsong said:
I quite understand, my mind is a maze of corridors I quite often find myself travelling down.
Sometimes you don\'t even become aware of the people all around you, you\'re on another planet.
Nice poem, keep writing!
July 24th, 2017 17:24
Your Perfection
ummbree said:
beautiful!!! beauty doesn\'t run only skin deep and (unfairly) this isn\'t said enough.
July 20th, 2017 02:45
ummbree said:
beautiful!!! beauty doesn\'t run only skin deep and (unfairly) this isn\'t said enough.
July 20th, 2017 02:45
Toxins
burning-embers said:
You pose such a question. Who knows. What confounds me is - with all the talk of good works, of love, peace and compassion which we see plenty of all around the globe, there is still the dark, quiet unspoken evil in mankind. If only we could breed it out of us. But we are animals. Really provocative writing thank you.
July 15th, 2017 06:15
burning-embers said:
You pose such a question. Who knows. What confounds me is - with all the talk of good works, of love, peace and compassion which we see plenty of all around the globe, there is still the dark, quiet unspoken evil in mankind. If only we could breed it out of us. But we are animals. Really provocative writing thank you.
July 15th, 2017 06:15
Toxins
Nicholas Browning said:
I live with a little faith, and I live with a little chaos. Evil can be a good thing. Sometimes it\'s required to get certain things done in a way that \"Good\" never can. That\'s just me though. I\'m not perfect, never will be. We live, we die. Simple as that. As for this work of literature, it seems to just be simply stating that our air is polluted and some people live with the evil they acquire and some don\'t. True enough. Not everyone is the same.
July 15th, 2017 01:38
Nicholas Browning said:
I live with a little faith, and I live with a little chaos. Evil can be a good thing. Sometimes it\'s required to get certain things done in a way that \"Good\" never can. That\'s just me though. I\'m not perfect, never will be. We live, we die. Simple as that. As for this work of literature, it seems to just be simply stating that our air is polluted and some people live with the evil they acquire and some don\'t. True enough. Not everyone is the same.
July 15th, 2017 01:38
Toxins
Frank Prem said:
To be born is to begin to die. Toxin and life, both in the same breath.
July 14th, 2017 21:59
Frank Prem said:
To be born is to begin to die. Toxin and life, both in the same breath.
July 14th, 2017 21:59
AM I STRONG?
AmandaJade said:
You go girl!! You ARE strong! Don\'t let ANYONE tell you otherwise
July 13th, 2017 22:04
AmandaJade said:
You go girl!! You ARE strong! Don\'t let ANYONE tell you otherwise
July 13th, 2017 22:04
AM I STRONG?
burning-embers said:
Your words have strength and your rationale is fine. I believe that the more personal disasters and hardships you survive then the stronger you become.
July 13th, 2017 21:25
burning-embers said:
Your words have strength and your rationale is fine. I believe that the more personal disasters and hardships you survive then the stronger you become.
July 13th, 2017 21:25
Vulnerability
onepauly said:
I have paranoia. and I\'m afraid to go out most of the time. I feel afraid because a lot of times I shake all over, and I don\'t want people get the wrong idea and take it for weakness. I try to stop it but if I do it gets worse. I guess ill have to live with it. I stay in my home almost always. a lot of people are not fair.
July 11th, 2017 18:40
onepauly said:
I have paranoia. and I\'m afraid to go out most of the time. I feel afraid because a lot of times I shake all over, and I don\'t want people get the wrong idea and take it for weakness. I try to stop it but if I do it gets worse. I guess ill have to live with it. I stay in my home almost always. a lot of people are not fair.
July 11th, 2017 18:40
Vulnerability
burning-embers said:
We\'re all vunerable u know. I\'m an old geezer and lifes taught me to toughen up and hide behind a wall of camoflage. I\'m a big softy and my feelings can be hurt by the wrong words or actions as can all others here. You are not alone and life will give you the materials to build your very own wall of invunerability. Your writing is a strength. Take pride from that, hold your head up, no one else can write like you do.
July 11th, 2017 14:06
burning-embers said:
We\'re all vunerable u know. I\'m an old geezer and lifes taught me to toughen up and hide behind a wall of camoflage. I\'m a big softy and my feelings can be hurt by the wrong words or actions as can all others here. You are not alone and life will give you the materials to build your very own wall of invunerability. Your writing is a strength. Take pride from that, hold your head up, no one else can write like you do.
July 11th, 2017 14:06
Vulnerability
GODisreal said:
Lost Girl...so well written...it\'s great and just know we all have strengths and we are all weak at something...
July 11th, 2017 12:29
GODisreal said:
Lost Girl...so well written...it\'s great and just know we all have strengths and we are all weak at something...
July 11th, 2017 12:29
Vulnerability
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
MY PRECIOUS ANGEL ~ You are really loved on MPS and I trust that is an encouragement and a Bleesing. One of the BEAUTIES of Young Ladies is their naivety and trust and vulnerability and need to be loved ! I can say hand on heart that I have never taken advantage of any Young Lady since I myself was a TEEN ! What is beautiful ~ when i am gentle and understanding and loving with a LADY (of any age !) SHE loves me twice as much ! But I love Ladies who are positive & sassy (and you have the capacity to like that ~ BECAUSE YOU ARE WOMAN) I like LADIES Who when they say NO they mean NO (not maybe !) and want an equal say ~ON DATES ~ about where we go and where we eat and who we hang out with and that is how it should be in marriage ! You are lovely ANGEL and I am praying that GOD will give you more RESOLVE ~ more SELF CONFIDENCE and more JOY ~ Hugs BRIAN (UK)
July 11th, 2017 05:50
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
MY PRECIOUS ANGEL ~ You are really loved on MPS and I trust that is an encouragement and a Bleesing. One of the BEAUTIES of Young Ladies is their naivety and trust and vulnerability and need to be loved ! I can say hand on heart that I have never taken advantage of any Young Lady since I myself was a TEEN ! What is beautiful ~ when i am gentle and understanding and loving with a LADY (of any age !) SHE loves me twice as much ! But I love Ladies who are positive & sassy (and you have the capacity to like that ~ BECAUSE YOU ARE WOMAN) I like LADIES Who when they say NO they mean NO (not maybe !) and want an equal say ~ON DATES ~ about where we go and where we eat and who we hang out with and that is how it should be in marriage ! You are lovely ANGEL and I am praying that GOD will give you more RESOLVE ~ more SELF CONFIDENCE and more JOY ~ Hugs BRIAN (UK)
July 11th, 2017 05:50
Frozen Hearted Girl
rosetintedview said:
I really like this poem! The constant use of imagery makes it really easy to follow, added with the use of ellipses creates suspense to create a bit of drama which keeps the reader guessing. :) Chloe
July 11th, 2017 04:54
rosetintedview said:
I really like this poem! The constant use of imagery makes it really easy to follow, added with the use of ellipses creates suspense to create a bit of drama which keeps the reader guessing. :) Chloe
July 11th, 2017 04:54
Vulnerability
Poetic Dan said:
Wow I can relate, I spend most of my time trying not to be in others head. 22 years on I\'m still the same open and vulnerable with a heart that breaks, trying so desperately to be that change.
As stated by others your confidence is already with you in the way you write, just need to be brave and hold on tight.
For we are just pack animals and they have a huge impact on us, we all need ones that appreciate and value our contribution.
So as a wolf does keep moving forward till it does or run your own just don\'t give up being who you are.
take care.
July 11th, 2017 03:47
Poetic Dan said:
Wow I can relate, I spend most of my time trying not to be in others head. 22 years on I\'m still the same open and vulnerable with a heart that breaks, trying so desperately to be that change.
As stated by others your confidence is already with you in the way you write, just need to be brave and hold on tight.
For we are just pack animals and they have a huge impact on us, we all need ones that appreciate and value our contribution.
So as a wolf does keep moving forward till it does or run your own just don\'t give up being who you are.
take care.
July 11th, 2017 03:47
Vulnerability
Nicholas Browning said:
Vulnerability comes with an option. The option to use it to your advantage. Being weak is advantageous, in certain ways. In some ways it could be your fault, but I can\'t really say. Due to the fact that I don\'t know the details of course. Writing seems to be a good outlet for you. We\'ll help all that we can, if you let us. Thanks for sharing. Keep it up.
July 11th, 2017 03:46
Nicholas Browning said:
Vulnerability comes with an option. The option to use it to your advantage. Being weak is advantageous, in certain ways. In some ways it could be your fault, but I can\'t really say. Due to the fact that I don\'t know the details of course. Writing seems to be a good outlet for you. We\'ll help all that we can, if you let us. Thanks for sharing. Keep it up.
July 11th, 2017 03:46
Vulnerability
FredPeyer said:
Lost Girl, anyone who can write as well as you do is NOT what you say you are in this well written poem. The poem says one thing, the writing something else. You can show as much vulnerability as you want, from the way you write I know you are strong and confident.
Nuff said.
July 11th, 2017 03:17
FredPeyer said:
Lost Girl, anyone who can write as well as you do is NOT what you say you are in this well written poem. The poem says one thing, the writing something else. You can show as much vulnerability as you want, from the way you write I know you are strong and confident.
Nuff said.
July 11th, 2017 03:17
Its My Turn To Laugh
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
I LOVE THIS ONE SWEETHEART ~ LOVE YOU ! You have a beautiful gentle spirit ~ BUT ~ it is no match for your LYING AGGRESSOR ~ I love your RESOLVE ! Knock him DOWN ~ Knock him OUT and SPIT on his Grave ! Thinking of you ~ Praying for you ~ Love & Hugs BRIAN
July 10th, 2017 08:21
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
I LOVE THIS ONE SWEETHEART ~ LOVE YOU ! You have a beautiful gentle spirit ~ BUT ~ it is no match for your LYING AGGRESSOR ~ I love your RESOLVE ! Knock him DOWN ~ Knock him OUT and SPIT on his Grave ! Thinking of you ~ Praying for you ~ Love & Hugs BRIAN
July 10th, 2017 08:21
Its My Turn To Laugh
FredPeyer said:
Lost girl you are scaring the s...t out of me. Do I need to take boxing lessons? Just kidding. This is what I call honest writing. The question is will you feel better after beating him/her up, be it physically or with words. I agree that sometimes giving somebody the same medicine works, but more often than not it back-fires. Think it over, sometimes treating somebody who hurt you with either silence or kindness brings better results and makes you look so much better. But no matter what, you are your own boss, do what you think you have to do.
July 10th, 2017 04:41
FredPeyer said:
Lost girl you are scaring the s...t out of me. Do I need to take boxing lessons? Just kidding. This is what I call honest writing. The question is will you feel better after beating him/her up, be it physically or with words. I agree that sometimes giving somebody the same medicine works, but more often than not it back-fires. Think it over, sometimes treating somebody who hurt you with either silence or kindness brings better results and makes you look so much better. But no matter what, you are your own boss, do what you think you have to do.
July 10th, 2017 04:41
Its My Turn To Laugh
Poetic Dan said:
Powerful, I hope that rock they get swept under gives you some relief of your pain.
Will expressed, I\'m sure this will bring you back to balance
July 10th, 2017 03:04
Poetic Dan said:
Powerful, I hope that rock they get swept under gives you some relief of your pain.
Will expressed, I\'m sure this will bring you back to balance
July 10th, 2017 03:04
Truth seeker
burning-embers said:
Great expression of passion here. I know how u feel, once i have discovered a lie then the perpetrator becomes totally invalid to me. Lies destroy everything
July 9th, 2017 07:43
burning-embers said:
Great expression of passion here. I know how u feel, once i have discovered a lie then the perpetrator becomes totally invalid to me. Lies destroy everything
July 9th, 2017 07:43
Truth seeker
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhhhhh ANGEL ~ You are on your soapbox today ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ because I hate LIES & LIARS as well ~ AMEN ~ Thinking of you ~ praying for you ~ Hugs BRIAN (UK Please check my Prayer Poem ~ thanks B
July 9th, 2017 03:26
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhhhhh ANGEL ~ You are on your soapbox today ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ because I hate LIES & LIARS as well ~ AMEN ~ Thinking of you ~ praying for you ~ Hugs BRIAN (UK Please check my Prayer Poem ~ thanks B
July 9th, 2017 03:26
Truth seeker
FredPeyer said:
Wow, talk about letting it all out. I can understand your feelings. Without knowing who lied, and what he/she lied about, maybe the kick in the face is the right thing to do. Or, maybe you could try to kill them with kindness! In any case, this is a strong write!
July 9th, 2017 03:14
FredPeyer said:
Wow, talk about letting it all out. I can understand your feelings. Without knowing who lied, and what he/she lied about, maybe the kick in the face is the right thing to do. Or, maybe you could try to kill them with kindness! In any case, this is a strong write!
July 9th, 2017 03:14
Invisible
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
STILL LOST SWEETHEART ? I love CHICAGO GIRLS (like Michelle Obama) and I can\'t see why HE (MEN are so crass) sees you as MISS CELLOPHANE an looks right through you ! Your Poem as usual is well structured and well expressed ! I promise if you sashied past me I WOULD notice ~ and you would KNOW (and feel) I\'d NOTICED ~ YES ! Hugs BRIAN (UK) Note that Boys can be MISTER CELLOPHANE as well ~ B
July 8th, 2017 03:50
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
STILL LOST SWEETHEART ? I love CHICAGO GIRLS (like Michelle Obama) and I can\'t see why HE (MEN are so crass) sees you as MISS CELLOPHANE an looks right through you ! Your Poem as usual is well structured and well expressed ! I promise if you sashied past me I WOULD notice ~ and you would KNOW (and feel) I\'d NOTICED ~ YES ! Hugs BRIAN (UK) Note that Boys can be MISTER CELLOPHANE as well ~ B
July 8th, 2017 03:50
Invisible
FredPeyer said:
A very well written cry for help. One-way street love is hard, but believe me, one day somebody will notice you. And you will notice him/her. And from then on your life will be so much better.
July 8th, 2017 03:35
FredPeyer said:
A very well written cry for help. One-way street love is hard, but believe me, one day somebody will notice you. And you will notice him/her. And from then on your life will be so much better.
July 8th, 2017 03:35
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