Frozen Hearted Girl
Nicholas Browning said:

Within the process known as \"Life\", we are forced to endure pain and suffering. That fact is universal. We don\'t all become cold, but some of us do. There is a light for every one out there. Some find it, and some don\'t. I can\'t tell you where it is, or tell you where to look. All I can tell you is that if you don\'t want to become any colder; Make the warmth that you so desperately seek.

July 7th, 2017 07:31

Perfect Imperfections
Stephen.Sapaugh said:

Thank you for expressing your feelings. I hope that it has made you feel better, and this community is here to help/support you. I actually have to disagree with others. No one is good enough, and the only security we have on this Earth is found in Christ, and his crucifixion. He died for all these insecurities, and he is the one that bares them for me. When I forget that I personally feel lost.

July 5th, 2017 13:42

Perfect Imperfections
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

YES ANGEL It is sad ~ but through self worthiness and prayer you can rise like a PHOENIX from your past and be the WONDERFUL ~ BEAUTIFUL ~ EXCITING LADY God created you to be ! You are a WOMAN therfor better than any MAN and you deserve the best ! Your resolve should be \"Forgetting the the things in the PAST ~ I resolve to PRESS ON to be ME and take my rightful place in Society and pray that GOD will send me a loving MAN who is worthy of ME ~ AMEN\". Thinking of you ~ praying for you ~ loving You ~ BRIAN (UK)

July 5th, 2017 01:24

Dear Dad
FredPeyer said:

Lost girl you are a \"Hang Ten\" as we say here in Hawaii for somebody who surfes with all then toes hanging over the front of the surfboard. If you can do that, you are good! So you really are a Queen and you are GOOD!
Your poem is so well written, thank you for sharing!

July 4th, 2017 04:33

Dear Dad
Poetic Dan said:

Thank you so much for letting it out
Tears that follow were for that same day
When I wished for my real dad
Not the drunken mess my mum was with
Maybe then we would of all been safe

Sadly he was never going to come
When me teen shoes hit
I went out on my own

You have spirit writing so well
Definitely his loss in this world
Not knowing the passion you possess
But there is plenty of us
That appreciate what you have

Be the light you need ;)

July 4th, 2017 01:39

Pain💔
FredPeyer said:

A very emotional and well written poem. Congratulations and welcome to our forum.
Regarding the questions at the end of your poem, please read \"A Father\'s Love\" Ruth Fadairo posted yesterday.
In one of her stanzas she writes:
I\'ve learned to be more forgiving,
More sympathetic,
More emphatic,
For I cannot let the damage you\'ve caused,
Invade my entire life you see.
Very good advice for a broken heart I think.
But then, what do I know, I am just an old man :-)

July 3rd, 2017 02:59