Comments received on poems by Its Raskolnikov
Again
charlesbarrett said:
I enjoyed this one. Loved the repetition of “could we do it again?” to emphasize the love. We never want those feelings to end. Hope yours doesn’t have to. Keep writing.
July 21st, 2017 00:19
charlesbarrett said:
I enjoyed this one. Loved the repetition of “could we do it again?” to emphasize the love. We never want those feelings to end. Hope yours doesn’t have to. Keep writing.
July 21st, 2017 00:19
Sit and Think
FredPeyer said:
I do like your poem. There is a great difference between thinking about and doing. So, go do it, live your dream. Life is too short for regrets.
July 20th, 2017 13:39
FredPeyer said:
I do like your poem. There is a great difference between thinking about and doing. So, go do it, live your dream. Life is too short for regrets.
July 20th, 2017 13:39
Sit and Think
lastbadbrad6 said:
great write, really enjoyed your truthful inner thoughts that we all have, the best
July 20th, 2017 05:14
lastbadbrad6 said:
great write, really enjoyed your truthful inner thoughts that we all have, the best
July 20th, 2017 05:14
We March
Michael Edwards said:
Not something we have here in the UK but I recognise what a great activity it is as this super ode aptly demonstrates.
July 18th, 2017 10:58
Michael Edwards said:
Not something we have here in the UK but I recognise what a great activity it is as this super ode aptly demonstrates.
July 18th, 2017 10:58
We March
Tony36 said:
Well written and expressed, Having been in a marching band in Highschool. This brought back some memories
July 18th, 2017 10:45
Tony36 said:
Well written and expressed, Having been in a marching band in Highschool. This brought back some memories
July 18th, 2017 10:45
We March
FredPeyer said:
Inspiring poem, well written. What is nice is my kids went to high-school here in Mililani, Hawaii and they too were Trojans.
July 18th, 2017 01:58
FredPeyer said:
Inspiring poem, well written. What is nice is my kids went to high-school here in Mililani, Hawaii and they too were Trojans.
July 18th, 2017 01:58
Monster
Michael Edwards said:
I am not usually a lover of poems about personal experiences (the woe is me genre) nut this one is so well written it really comes off. Will look at your previous posting.
July 18th, 2017 00:11
Michael Edwards said:
I am not usually a lover of poems about personal experiences (the woe is me genre) nut this one is so well written it really comes off. Will look at your previous posting.
July 18th, 2017 00:11
Monster
FredPeyer said:
Excellent R., and two words in your poem seem to apply to a lot of us here: Creative disillusion! Well, can\'t talk for the others, only me then!
July 17th, 2017 23:33
FredPeyer said:
Excellent R., and two words in your poem seem to apply to a lot of us here: Creative disillusion! Well, can\'t talk for the others, only me then!
July 17th, 2017 23:33
Monster
Stumped said:
I know how you feel dude. I hope you can\'t sort all those crazy thoughts out. Great poem.
July 17th, 2017 23:15
Stumped said:
I know how you feel dude. I hope you can\'t sort all those crazy thoughts out. Great poem.
July 17th, 2017 23:15
Loving Fire
Heather T said:
I hope above all hope that Miss Jenna Edwards has been allowed to read this, because if I had been immortalized in verse at your ages this way, I would be in swoonly puddles.
July 15th, 2017 15:07
Heather T said:
I hope above all hope that Miss Jenna Edwards has been allowed to read this, because if I had been immortalized in verse at your ages this way, I would be in swoonly puddles.
July 15th, 2017 15:07
Loving Fire
FredPeyer said:
I think this is your first poem here, so welcome!
I like how you compare love to a flame, there is certainly a lot of similarities to the two. I also like your last stanza, the way you move from excitement to more longer lasting impressions.
Very good poem, I would like to read more from you.
July 15th, 2017 04:01
FredPeyer said:
I think this is your first poem here, so welcome!
I like how you compare love to a flame, there is certainly a lot of similarities to the two. I also like your last stanza, the way you move from excitement to more longer lasting impressions.
Very good poem, I would like to read more from you.
July 15th, 2017 04:01
Loving Fire
Nicholas Browning said:
Even if it hurts, huh? Sometimes there\'s no other choice. Hey, sometimes I think dying with the one you love wouldn\'t be a bad way to end it all. Not on purpose though, just in case the apocalypse happened. Good poem, good subject. Endearing love. Happy writing to you.
July 15th, 2017 00:50
Nicholas Browning said:
Even if it hurts, huh? Sometimes there\'s no other choice. Hey, sometimes I think dying with the one you love wouldn\'t be a bad way to end it all. Not on purpose though, just in case the apocalypse happened. Good poem, good subject. Endearing love. Happy writing to you.
July 15th, 2017 00:50
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