Comments received on poems by Its Raskolnikov
Bullish Dreams
dusk arising said:
Lovely thoughts which most of us poets have tried to express at one time or another. I think my most recent effort was called \'the plate\' - unsure if its worthy but the sentiments we share are for sure very noble indeed.
Nice writing.
January 8th, 2018 20:53
dusk arising said:
Lovely thoughts which most of us poets have tried to express at one time or another. I think my most recent effort was called \'the plate\' - unsure if its worthy but the sentiments we share are for sure very noble indeed.
Nice writing.
January 8th, 2018 20:53
Bullish Dreams
FredPeyer said:
You are expressing what we all would like to see! Nice poem!
January 8th, 2018 18:25
FredPeyer said:
You are expressing what we all would like to see! Nice poem!
January 8th, 2018 18:25
Relationships
Michael Edwards said:
Not sure if its my screen or the chosen font but I can\'t read this - sorry.
December 17th, 2017 11:05
Michael Edwards said:
Not sure if its my screen or the chosen font but I can\'t read this - sorry.
December 17th, 2017 11:05
Thank You
FredPeyer said:
Every relationship is give and take. If it is only one of the two, then goodbyes are in order.
December 8th, 2017 03:42
FredPeyer said:
Every relationship is give and take. If it is only one of the two, then goodbyes are in order.
December 8th, 2017 03:42
Time
FredPeyer said:
Well written, Ras! Sometimes we wish we could slow down time, and at other times we would rather speed it up.
December 5th, 2017 13:10
FredPeyer said:
Well written, Ras! Sometimes we wish we could slow down time, and at other times we would rather speed it up.
December 5th, 2017 13:10
Make Up For The Love
Shadowbox15 said:
That would make a good rap. Very fast paced, and a very a nice rhythm. Well done.
December 4th, 2017 19:24
Shadowbox15 said:
That would make a good rap. Very fast paced, and a very a nice rhythm. Well done.
December 4th, 2017 19:24
Do I Love You Too Much?
Goldfinch60 said:
Loving somebody too much is not a problem it is the cure for many troubles.
November 30th, 2017 02:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Loving somebody too much is not a problem it is the cure for many troubles.
November 30th, 2017 02:20
Do I Love You Too Much?
FredPeyer said:
Ras, the ONE thing you cannot do too much of is LOVE! Everything else is negotiable.
November 29th, 2017 22:10
FredPeyer said:
Ras, the ONE thing you cannot do too much of is LOVE! Everything else is negotiable.
November 29th, 2017 22:10
Graves
Syd said:
Love this. Really like the message and the way it rhymes, I\'m a sucker for poems that rhyme. Great write - Syd
November 28th, 2017 13:04
Syd said:
Love this. Really like the message and the way it rhymes, I\'m a sucker for poems that rhyme. Great write - Syd
November 28th, 2017 13:04
You\'re My Heaven
FredPeyer said:
Very well written, Ras! A beautiful declaration of love.
November 16th, 2017 21:04
FredPeyer said:
Very well written, Ras! A beautiful declaration of love.
November 16th, 2017 21:04
You\'re My Heaven
marielababy said:
I love and relate to this , for I used to have someone who made me feel the same way , excelent write!!
November 15th, 2017 18:16
marielababy said:
I love and relate to this , for I used to have someone who made me feel the same way , excelent write!!
November 15th, 2017 18:16
If I\'d Been God
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, Ras! It\'s not easy being God, isn\'t it?
October 29th, 2017 04:16
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, Ras! It\'s not easy being God, isn\'t it?
October 29th, 2017 04:16
Ignorant Eyes - 8/31/16
FredPeyer said:
Your well written poem made me stop and think, Ras!
October 25th, 2017 11:10
FredPeyer said:
Your well written poem made me stop and think, Ras!
October 25th, 2017 11:10
So Scared
FredPeyer said:
You really put in a lot of work on this one, Ras!
The last stanza says it all!
October 16th, 2017 00:30
FredPeyer said:
You really put in a lot of work on this one, Ras!
The last stanza says it all!
October 16th, 2017 00:30
So Scared
Christina8 said:
Such a very sad write! Cherish the time you have together. I wish I had more sage advice.
October 15th, 2017 00:38
Christina8 said:
Such a very sad write! Cherish the time you have together. I wish I had more sage advice.
October 15th, 2017 00:38
Down
FredPeyer said:
So, Ras, you \'just started writing\'? And the result is something with a lot of food for thought. Well done!
October 11th, 2017 13:35
FredPeyer said:
So, Ras, you \'just started writing\'? And the result is something with a lot of food for thought. Well done!
October 11th, 2017 13:35
Come Home
FredPeyer said:
Ras, this is such a nice way to say: \'I want to love you today!\'
Thoroughly enjoyed your poem. Kudos!
October 9th, 2017 20:16
FredPeyer said:
Ras, this is such a nice way to say: \'I want to love you today!\'
Thoroughly enjoyed your poem. Kudos!
October 9th, 2017 20:16
Now
dusk arising said:
Great expression of those risks we know we are taking when our hearts are so profoundly drawn to a person in whom we see risks. That wonderful state of being out of control and knowing it.... go with the flow and enjoy the ride... or walk safely away and spend your life regretting it (and you know you would).
October 7th, 2017 00:19
dusk arising said:
Great expression of those risks we know we are taking when our hearts are so profoundly drawn to a person in whom we see risks. That wonderful state of being out of control and knowing it.... go with the flow and enjoy the ride... or walk safely away and spend your life regretting it (and you know you would).
October 7th, 2017 00:19
Now
FredPeyer said:
Very well penned, with a lot of feeling, and great structure. Really like the last three lines.
October 6th, 2017 22:22
FredPeyer said:
Very well penned, with a lot of feeling, and great structure. Really like the last three lines.
October 6th, 2017 22:22
Rose
FredPeyer said:
Ras, looks like you are dancing all the way to heaven here!
Nice writing!
October 1st, 2017 15:37
FredPeyer said:
Ras, looks like you are dancing all the way to heaven here!
Nice writing!
October 1st, 2017 15:37
Loose Laces
FredPeyer said:
Ras, you tried! By writing this very well written poem! Just one question regarding your use of the word \'flied\' (I know it rhymes), but where would you fly to? :-)
October 1st, 2017 15:24
FredPeyer said:
Ras, you tried! By writing this very well written poem! Just one question regarding your use of the word \'flied\' (I know it rhymes), but where would you fly to? :-)
October 1st, 2017 15:24
Loose Laces
HeartfullyFallen said:
Shoot man, I love this. It\'s really powerful, and I like the bits of repetition you put in it. I\'m not really good at appreciative notes to people but this is great. Thank you for sharing
October 1st, 2017 14:56
HeartfullyFallen said:
Shoot man, I love this. It\'s really powerful, and I like the bits of repetition you put in it. I\'m not really good at appreciative notes to people but this is great. Thank you for sharing
October 1st, 2017 14:56
Rose
Edward Charles McDevitt said:
Good write Its! Love is a tricky thing, and I believe you seem to have it mastered. It is the wooing and cooing of a courtship that makes Love so tricky yet exciting! I loved this! Well done!!!
October 1st, 2017 08:06
Edward Charles McDevitt said:
Good write Its! Love is a tricky thing, and I believe you seem to have it mastered. It is the wooing and cooing of a courtship that makes Love so tricky yet exciting! I loved this! Well done!!!
October 1st, 2017 08:06
My Life
FredPeyer said:
Very well written Ras, you certainly had your ups and downs!
And we will see what that promised stanza will bring!
September 23rd, 2017 22:19
FredPeyer said:
Very well written Ras, you certainly had your ups and downs!
And we will see what that promised stanza will bring!
September 23rd, 2017 22:19
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