Comments received on poems by Its Raskolnikov
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orchidee said:
Me clock stopped going tick tock. Erm, it needed a new battery! heehee.
January 6th, 2019 07:19
orchidee said:
Me clock stopped going tick tock. Erm, it needed a new battery! heehee.
January 6th, 2019 07:19
Last Show
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Extremely profound.
An excellent write on suicide.
Your words tug at the strings of the readers\' hearts.
Thanks for posting :-)
October 31st, 2018 14:12
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Extremely profound.
An excellent write on suicide.
Your words tug at the strings of the readers\' hearts.
Thanks for posting :-)
October 31st, 2018 14:12
Day After Tomorrow
HangingbyaHalo said:
Wow, this is lovely. Wise beyond your years for sure. Thank you for sharing.
August 8th, 2018 19:54
HangingbyaHalo said:
Wow, this is lovely. Wise beyond your years for sure. Thank you for sharing.
August 8th, 2018 19:54
Day After Tomorrow
Crystal Hope said:
A beautiful poem. Definitely didn\'t expect it from a 15 year old. :) Awesome!
August 8th, 2018 17:02
Crystal Hope said:
A beautiful poem. Definitely didn\'t expect it from a 15 year old. :) Awesome!
August 8th, 2018 17:02
If I Could Be Your Bed Tonight
elizabethshadow said:
This was a very thoughtfully written poem, so very sweet and sensitive. Great job with it, and please do keep writing! Your usage of figurative language was creative overall.
May 5th, 2018 18:13
elizabethshadow said:
This was a very thoughtfully written poem, so very sweet and sensitive. Great job with it, and please do keep writing! Your usage of figurative language was creative overall.
May 5th, 2018 18:13
Questions
Lorna said:
A Poet with a great Pseudonym........Raskolnikov....... cold winter nights and wolves chasing sleighs.............
March 24th, 2018 14:26
Lorna said:
A Poet with a great Pseudonym........Raskolnikov....... cold winter nights and wolves chasing sleighs.............
March 24th, 2018 14:26
The Rose
brokenmirrors said:
Really enjoyed this read.
“And I try to become more than what I\'ve done” - Genius!
March 22nd, 2018 16:42
brokenmirrors said:
Really enjoyed this read.
“And I try to become more than what I\'ve done” - Genius!
March 22nd, 2018 16:42
Fatalist Lullaby
ghostrat said:
i think the use of pauses and the belief of freedom compliment each other well :))
March 20th, 2018 16:48
ghostrat said:
i think the use of pauses and the belief of freedom compliment each other well :))
March 20th, 2018 16:48
I Can\'t Wait
willyweed said:
I think you are on to something grand here, good write. ww
March 13th, 2018 12:36
willyweed said:
I think you are on to something grand here, good write. ww
March 13th, 2018 12:36
Safe
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
sweet and lovely write ! well expressed .. :-)
February 25th, 2018 18:57
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
sweet and lovely write ! well expressed .. :-)
February 25th, 2018 18:57
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Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
great piece of writing !! :-) a great flow and beat to this one .. well done
February 22nd, 2018 14:53
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
great piece of writing !! :-) a great flow and beat to this one .. well done
February 22nd, 2018 14:53
Untitled
FredPeyer said:
You\'re not gonna die, your writing makes you immortal!
February 19th, 2018 11:56
FredPeyer said:
You\'re not gonna die, your writing makes you immortal!
February 19th, 2018 11:56
Someone
FredPeyer said:
Looks like you really, totally fell in love, Ras! Good for you! And the poem is nice too!!! :-)
February 13th, 2018 20:25
FredPeyer said:
Looks like you really, totally fell in love, Ras! Good for you! And the poem is nice too!!! :-)
February 13th, 2018 20:25
First Place
Lorna said:
All the yearning for recognition are in this poem R..... but the best accomplishment is giving love! Lovely poem.
February 5th, 2018 05:41
Lorna said:
All the yearning for recognition are in this poem R..... but the best accomplishment is giving love! Lovely poem.
February 5th, 2018 05:41
First Place
orchidee said:
A good write. Maybe a final line,? Something like:
\'And now I\'m in first place!\'
Or be more melodramatic with:
\'Oh, and now I\'m in the wonderful first place for ever with her!\'
February 5th, 2018 03:35
orchidee said:
A good write. Maybe a final line,? Something like:
\'And now I\'m in first place!\'
Or be more melodramatic with:
\'Oh, and now I\'m in the wonderful first place for ever with her!\'
February 5th, 2018 03:35
First Place
FredPeyer said:
Very nicely written, Ras, good flow, and the best thing is that you will always be number one for the one that loves you!
February 5th, 2018 01:36
FredPeyer said:
Very nicely written, Ras, good flow, and the best thing is that you will always be number one for the one that loves you!
February 5th, 2018 01:36
Bullish Dreams
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true, we would all like this to be the way we live. Make love not war.
January 9th, 2018 02:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true, we would all like this to be the way we live. Make love not war.
January 9th, 2018 02:04
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