Comments received on poems by Its Raskolnikov
Dear God
FredPeyer said:
This is a beautifully written poem, Ras. So much emotion, a cry for help. I just hope that for you too it is a poem only and not real life!
September 15th, 2017 11:34
FredPeyer said:
This is a beautifully written poem, Ras. So much emotion, a cry for help. I just hope that for you too it is a poem only and not real life!
September 15th, 2017 11:34
I Love You
Accidental Poet said:
When a woman inspires a man to write poetry for her, she is something very special. ; )
September 14th, 2017 19:21
Accidental Poet said:
When a woman inspires a man to write poetry for her, she is something very special. ; )
September 14th, 2017 19:21
I Love You
FredPeyer said:
Judging from your well written poem, she must be one heck of a great woman!
September 14th, 2017 13:40
FredPeyer said:
Judging from your well written poem, she must be one heck of a great woman!
September 14th, 2017 13:40
Belief
lost-but-not-broken17 said:
This made me smile. I could feel your passion and emotions flow through your work! Can\'t wait to read more
August 22nd, 2017 22:27
lost-but-not-broken17 said:
This made me smile. I could feel your passion and emotions flow through your work! Can\'t wait to read more
August 22nd, 2017 22:27
Make Them Stand
Nicholas Browning said:
I get the feeling you\'re in a marching band. I was in one in middle school. Never marched though. lol.
Nice write.
You might try using synonyms to spice up the style a bit! Just a suggestion.
August 19th, 2017 11:47
Nicholas Browning said:
I get the feeling you\'re in a marching band. I was in one in middle school. Never marched though. lol.
Nice write.
You might try using synonyms to spice up the style a bit! Just a suggestion.
August 19th, 2017 11:47
Let It Be
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, Ras! Don\'t know why you consider it \'lower quality\'.
You are right that \'Wir sind alle eins\', the problem is that some people think \'Ich bin eine zwei\', therefore feel they have to load it over the \'ein\'.
Am fully with you, \'leben und leben lassen!\'
August 17th, 2017 16:55
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, Ras! Don\'t know why you consider it \'lower quality\'.
You are right that \'Wir sind alle eins\', the problem is that some people think \'Ich bin eine zwei\', therefore feel they have to load it over the \'ein\'.
Am fully with you, \'leben und leben lassen!\'
August 17th, 2017 16:55
Let It Be
Nicholas Browning said:
True that. It\'s cool to believe in something, but rubbing it in someone\'s face out in the open, is contradictory to most beliefs about what leading a peaceful life is about. That\'s right, just let it be. Good stuff.
August 17th, 2017 07:04
Nicholas Browning said:
True that. It\'s cool to believe in something, but rubbing it in someone\'s face out in the open, is contradictory to most beliefs about what leading a peaceful life is about. That\'s right, just let it be. Good stuff.
August 17th, 2017 07:04
Roads
FredPeyer said:
Ras, your excellent poem is making me look the street in front of my house in wholly different way!
August 15th, 2017 17:00
FredPeyer said:
Ras, your excellent poem is making me look the street in front of my house in wholly different way!
August 15th, 2017 17:00
Midnight Owl
Edward Charles McDevitt said:
14 and talented as well! We have little gray owls that roost on the stump of a limb on an Oak tree. They truly are amazing creatures. Good write for reading!
August 7th, 2017 16:08
Edward Charles McDevitt said:
14 and talented as well! We have little gray owls that roost on the stump of a limb on an Oak tree. They truly are amazing creatures. Good write for reading!
August 7th, 2017 16:08
Midnight Owl
WriteBeLight said:
Who Who! I love owls! Great job on this. You are very wise :)
August 5th, 2017 09:14
WriteBeLight said:
Who Who! I love owls! Great job on this. You are very wise :)
August 5th, 2017 09:14
Come With Me
FredPeyer said:
Well Ras, since you ask so nicely, I would come with you, am afraid though you are not looking for an old guy here. :-)
August 1st, 2017 20:21
FredPeyer said:
Well Ras, since you ask so nicely, I would come with you, am afraid though you are not looking for an old guy here. :-)
August 1st, 2017 20:21
Maybe
FredPeyer said:
Ras, your very well written poem opens up a pandora\'s box of questions. I do understand that when we look at the world today, some people might question the existence of God, or weather a God is good or bad, or even cares.
As far as I personally am concerned, I believe my thing and I let everybody else believe their thing.
July 31st, 2017 11:56
FredPeyer said:
Ras, your very well written poem opens up a pandora\'s box of questions. I do understand that when we look at the world today, some people might question the existence of God, or weather a God is good or bad, or even cares.
As far as I personally am concerned, I believe my thing and I let everybody else believe their thing.
July 31st, 2017 11:56
Maybe
Michael Edwards said:
Even having read this I am still not sure whether you would class yourself as a believer - all I do know is that you have questioned the perceived view and in doing so have written a fine poem. As an atheist I sometimes think I am in a minority of one on this site and I do find it hard to comment on poems with a religious base. Having said that I had no difficulties in commenting on this one,
July 30th, 2017 23:30
Michael Edwards said:
Even having read this I am still not sure whether you would class yourself as a believer - all I do know is that you have questioned the perceived view and in doing so have written a fine poem. As an atheist I sometimes think I am in a minority of one on this site and I do find it hard to comment on poems with a religious base. Having said that I had no difficulties in commenting on this one,
July 30th, 2017 23:30
Friends
Goldfinch60 said:
Good friends are priceless may you keep them close to you. Good write.
July 29th, 2017 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Good friends are priceless may you keep them close to you. Good write.
July 29th, 2017 00:49
Friends
FredPeyer said:
A very nice poem about friendship. Hang on to these friends, they are hard to find.
My definition of a friend is a person who will come pick you up wherever at any time of day or night and help. Then after they help you the say: \"Why did you do that you dumb s**t!\"
July 28th, 2017 15:17
FredPeyer said:
A very nice poem about friendship. Hang on to these friends, they are hard to find.
My definition of a friend is a person who will come pick you up wherever at any time of day or night and help. Then after they help you the say: \"Why did you do that you dumb s**t!\"
July 28th, 2017 15:17
The Artist
charlesbarrett said:
“If she is to die, then so am I”. Beautifully written. Bravo. Thanks for sharing.
July 25th, 2017 16:45
charlesbarrett said:
“If she is to die, then so am I”. Beautifully written. Bravo. Thanks for sharing.
July 25th, 2017 16:45
Causes
Louis Gibbs said:
Indeed, why do we make a \'god\' the scapegoat for what we ourselves create? Are we not, collectively, creating our version of \'reality\' and everything in it as we go along? Your poem speaks to a deep philosophic question, Raskolnikov. Well done!
July 23rd, 2017 14:28
Louis Gibbs said:
Indeed, why do we make a \'god\' the scapegoat for what we ourselves create? Are we not, collectively, creating our version of \'reality\' and everything in it as we go along? Your poem speaks to a deep philosophic question, Raskolnikov. Well done!
July 23rd, 2017 14:28
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