Comments received on poems by Domi
Alone
FredPeyer said:
Domi, there is so much emotion in your well written poem.
This might be kind of harsh, but sometimes it is the only solution:
If you realize you are barking up the wrong tree, go look for another tree. :-)
July 21st, 2017 16:29
FredPeyer said:
Domi, there is so much emotion in your well written poem.
This might be kind of harsh, but sometimes it is the only solution:
If you realize you are barking up the wrong tree, go look for another tree. :-)
July 21st, 2017 16:29
Rose Pedal
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine poetic expression of longing through analogy. Well done, Domi!
July 18th, 2017 13:51
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine poetic expression of longing through analogy. Well done, Domi!
July 18th, 2017 13:51
Rose Pedal
FredPeyer said:
Very beautiful poem Domi, love how you describe your fish. I even understand why you would want to slip into that role, but don\'t forget, fish have only a 3-second memory. You really want that? :-)
July 18th, 2017 12:23
FredPeyer said:
Very beautiful poem Domi, love how you describe your fish. I even understand why you would want to slip into that role, but don\'t forget, fish have only a 3-second memory. You really want that? :-)
July 18th, 2017 12:23
Cold Heart Dream
FredPeyer said:
Very well said Domi, there is a lot of emotion in your writing.
July 17th, 2017 16:29
FredPeyer said:
Very well said Domi, there is a lot of emotion in your writing.
July 17th, 2017 16:29
The Closet
FredPeyer said:
Domi, I can read the pain and anguish between the lines. You write so well!
I am glad that all this abuse is behind you. Yes, the scars will remain, but hopefully even those will hopefully heal over time. No child should have to go through what you went through. I admire your strength and resolve.
July 16th, 2017 16:51
FredPeyer said:
Domi, I can read the pain and anguish between the lines. You write so well!
I am glad that all this abuse is behind you. Yes, the scars will remain, but hopefully even those will hopefully heal over time. No child should have to go through what you went through. I admire your strength and resolve.
July 16th, 2017 16:51
The Closet
burning-embers said:
Nice work. Please have a glimpse of my poem \'Breaking the chain\' published couple of days ago.
July 16th, 2017 16:37
burning-embers said:
Nice work. Please have a glimpse of my poem \'Breaking the chain\' published couple of days ago.
July 16th, 2017 16:37
Death
Nicholas Browning said:
Last stanza hit hard. The grandeur of death is a mystery indeed. Well written, well done.
July 16th, 2017 01:04
Nicholas Browning said:
Last stanza hit hard. The grandeur of death is a mystery indeed. Well written, well done.
July 16th, 2017 01:04
Death
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to the site Domi!
You are a good writer and you tackled a, in my opinion, very difficult subject matter admirably.
July 15th, 2017 18:02
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to the site Domi!
You are a good writer and you tackled a, in my opinion, very difficult subject matter admirably.
July 15th, 2017 18:02
