Comments received on poems by gina~
Eliminate Don’t Fake
FredPeyer said:
Gina, your well written poem touches on some deep truth. We all see the world differently, depending on our internalizations, our background, our history. Well penned!
February 25th, 2018 19:20
FredPeyer said:
Gina, your well written poem touches on some deep truth. We all see the world differently, depending on our internalizations, our background, our history. Well penned!
February 25th, 2018 19:20
Selfish
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
so sad .. so much pain within this , but you expressed it well x
February 25th, 2018 15:47
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
so sad .. so much pain within this , but you expressed it well x
February 25th, 2018 15:47
Eliminate Don’t Fake
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
short but such a powerfully strong piece of writing .. great poem :-)
February 25th, 2018 15:46
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
short but such a powerfully strong piece of writing .. great poem :-)
February 25th, 2018 15:46
Dependency
Fay Slimm. said:
A good example of perceptive rhyming and I love the message ending this verse - - well done Gina.
August 21st, 2017 16:42
Fay Slimm. said:
A good example of perceptive rhyming and I love the message ending this verse - - well done Gina.
August 21st, 2017 16:42
Last Gasp
burning-embers said:
Thought provoking work. Wotever is it about..... mind pictures, you created lots here.
August 13th, 2017 23:22
burning-embers said:
Thought provoking work. Wotever is it about..... mind pictures, you created lots here.
August 13th, 2017 23:22
Last Gasp
FredPeyer said:
Even though it was written fast and is short, doesn\'t mean it cannot be a great poem! And this one fits the bill.
August 13th, 2017 18:19
FredPeyer said:
Even though it was written fast and is short, doesn\'t mean it cannot be a great poem! And this one fits the bill.
August 13th, 2017 18:19
Last Gasp
Azura Nightsong said:
Sometimes even the shortest poems can convey a world of meaning.
Nice poem!
August 13th, 2017 14:43
Azura Nightsong said:
Sometimes even the shortest poems can convey a world of meaning.
Nice poem!
August 13th, 2017 14:43
Drained
Fay Slimm. said:
Your write clearly outlines the need for allowing time and chance to be cleansed so light will flow better after shadows depart. Good short-line form for slowing the read. Well done Gina.
August 12th, 2017 17:17
Fay Slimm. said:
Your write clearly outlines the need for allowing time and chance to be cleansed so light will flow better after shadows depart. Good short-line form for slowing the read. Well done Gina.
August 12th, 2017 17:17
Drained
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully written, Gina! I love the first stanza, the way you described the lifting of darkness. Made me think that we all should go through this cleansing every so often, not only clean the dirty water, but get rid of excess baggage as well.
August 12th, 2017 12:24
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully written, Gina! I love the first stanza, the way you described the lifting of darkness. Made me think that we all should go through this cleansing every so often, not only clean the dirty water, but get rid of excess baggage as well.
August 12th, 2017 12:24
Drained
Louis Gibbs said:
I sense an awakening of spirit here. Well expressed, Gina!
August 12th, 2017 11:56
Louis Gibbs said:
I sense an awakening of spirit here. Well expressed, Gina!
August 12th, 2017 11:56
Irony
Louis Gibbs said:
You draw an acute difference between functioning and living, Gina. Well observed in this fine poem! Thanks for sharing it.
August 10th, 2017 10:43
Louis Gibbs said:
You draw an acute difference between functioning and living, Gina. Well observed in this fine poem! Thanks for sharing it.
August 10th, 2017 10:43
Why Settle for Less?
Accidental Poet said:
It\'s like seeing the glass as half full, or half empty. A half glass is just that. A half glass. Even an empty glass if full of air. *smiles*
August 2nd, 2017 19:11
Accidental Poet said:
It\'s like seeing the glass as half full, or half empty. A half glass is just that. A half glass. Even an empty glass if full of air. *smiles*
August 2nd, 2017 19:11
You Have it All Wrong
burning-embers said:
Many days of rain have rinsed my soul. I find it cleanses and, just as you describe, takes away the cold cold surface its so easy to live beneath.
July 27th, 2017 03:27
burning-embers said:
Many days of rain have rinsed my soul. I find it cleanses and, just as you describe, takes away the cold cold surface its so easy to live beneath.
July 27th, 2017 03:27
You Can\'t Cover Up The Truth
charlesbarrett said:
That last line was tremendous. Great piece. Thanks for sharing.
July 25th, 2017 14:47
charlesbarrett said:
That last line was tremendous. Great piece. Thanks for sharing.
July 25th, 2017 14:47
Red
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to the site.
Your first poem here is making quite an impression. I like the powerful writing and especially the last sentence.
July 24th, 2017 18:30
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to the site.
Your first poem here is making quite an impression. I like the powerful writing and especially the last sentence.
July 24th, 2017 18:30
Red
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME GINA ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ powerfully written ! The plight of your subject is alas the plight of many vulnerable ladies who fall prey to violent Men. My MUM taught me to respect Ladies always be \"gentle\" with them and give them lots of TLC. I thank God i always have ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
July 24th, 2017 13:17
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME GINA ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ powerfully written ! The plight of your subject is alas the plight of many vulnerable ladies who fall prey to violent Men. My MUM taught me to respect Ladies always be \"gentle\" with them and give them lots of TLC. I thank God i always have ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
July 24th, 2017 13:17
