Comments received on poems by Sugiura Asuna

Your Love
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Lovely words , ))

December 26th, 2021 15:49

Your Love
Laya Pens said:


December 26th, 2021 13:38

Monster Born By Night
L. B. Mek said:

\'woosah\', take it slow dear poet
life still has a lot to throw your way, I fear
just take a glimpse of those history pages..
still, personally: I found this a delightfully poetic read
one thing is for sure, your write showcases unquestionable talent
thanks for choosing to share..
\'keep that keyboard dancing and enjoy the ride
remember to grip ambition\'s reins - loosely
before it skins your innate whimsy: bloody...\'

April 27th, 2021 04:46

Monster Born By Night
Goldfinch60 said:

If that monster has now emerged from within you let it go and continue with your better life.


April 27th, 2021 00:15

Monster Born By Night
Doggerel Dave said:

If sadness has that reaction I hate to think what any stronger emotion would do to you....
And what do you learn in your history class?
Apart from those reservations I found it an interesting but terrifying read.

April 26th, 2021 19:17

psychofemale said:

been there....hope you are ok.

February 4th, 2019 22:00


Good Afternoon SUGIURA ~ Thanks for your sad Poem ! My advice is \"Always stay away from the Edge\". Humpty Dumpty was a Seige Gun on the walls of the City. The soldiers pushed him too close to the edge and he fell off and BROKE irreparably ! It has happened to Friends of Mine who let Circumstances of Life etc push them too close to the edge (of Breakdown) and like Humpty they fell off & died. Some acctually jumped off Bridges & Tall Buildings ! Im 35 (Single) and have been close to the edge several times for a variety of reasons. I am a Christian so I haven\'t resorted to Drugs & Alcohol etc to ease the Pain but have sought help from People who Councelled & prayed with me and gently brought me back from the EDGE ~ AMEN How do you cope and move away from the edge ? Yours BRIAN Please check our site ANGELA is my FIANCEE

February 4th, 2019 18:03

Thinking of life
Lee Renard Caspian said:

Very lovely :)

August 8th, 2018 23:49

A Broken Teacup
Crystal Hope said:

Really great piece. You did a remarkable job!

August 7th, 2018 14:19

Time\'s Truths
HangingbyaHalo said:

Great read.
Consider time wisely and use it accordingly.
Could you imagine knowing how much time you had? How differently people would live?
We take it for granted as if all we have is time. Yet no one is promised tomorrow.
This piece is thought provoking.

June 12th, 2018 23:05

What\'s in your Cup?
WL Schuett said:

Very intriguing write , good work ... coffee black or tea with honey

January 3rd, 2018 08:49

What\'s in your Cup?
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 2nd, 2018 13:41

The Sea\'s Heart
WL Schuett said:

Very interesting definitely poetic 😎

October 20th, 2017 22:22

Beach Cries
WL Schuett said:

Yes very fine poetry sweet and tragic...

October 18th, 2017 13:59

Beach Cries
Christina8 said:

I agree, this is so beautiful! A masterpiece in such few words. Loved the last line. Great job!!

October 18th, 2017 12:31

The Edge of Time
Laura🌻 said:

Creatively insightful !

October 17th, 2017 14:17

The Edge of Time
WL Schuett said:

This is very nice, I really like it good poem 😎

October 17th, 2017 14:04

The Edge of Time
Poetic Dan said:

Your words cleared all mine from my head. Great job!

October 17th, 2017 12:09

WL Schuett said:

A very lovely poem , faded light mourned by the stars , that\'s very poetic . Loved it !

October 13th, 2017 16:21

Tony36 said:


October 13th, 2017 13:23

FredPeyer said:

SA, I like the structure of your poem. It is short, but to the point, a kind of minimalism, but it tells the whole story. Very well written!

September 29th, 2017 22:51

Time\'s Midnight Ride
WL Schuett said:

Strong poetry ... well done I liked this a lot

September 26th, 2017 11:01

Adam Shirley said:

I\'ve recently had to say goodbye to my friend in school who is a guy, this brought back old memories of us. Simple yet beautiful. Well done.

August 20th, 2017 18:54

myself and me said:

Be careful with our words, since in \"sword\" there is a \"word\".

August 18th, 2017 23:38

Nicholas Browning said:

We don\'t really think about the effect that our words will have on other people when we say them. When I was still in school 4 years ago, it was similar. You brought up a valid point, and I commend you for doing so. Also, is \"piers\" supposed to be \"peers\" in the last line?

August 18th, 2017 07:27

myself and me said:

I guess you are their brains. Stressful indeed. Take some deep breath, let the fish go.

August 15th, 2017 22:06

sue.evans said:

I feel your frustration through your poem.

August 15th, 2017 16:22

Accidental Poet said:

Short & sweet is nice too.

August 12th, 2017 20:51

Louis Gibbs said:

Nice little short one, Pinecone! I like!

August 12th, 2017 19:09

The Lonely
sue.evans said:

You can sense your loneliness from your words. Everyone has a right to belong - you will find your place. We should celebrate who we are and what we have to offer no matter how small we think that is!

August 12th, 2017 08:46

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