Comments received on poems by Sugiura Asuna
I Hang my Hope on Orion\'s Belt
David Wakeling said:
A nice reflection.Well done
November 14th, 2023 02:29
David Wakeling said:
A nice reflection.Well done
November 14th, 2023 02:29
Monster Born By Night
L. B. Mek said:
\'woosah\', take it slow dear poet
life still has a lot to throw your way, I fear
just take a glimpse of those history pages..
still, personally: I found this a delightfully poetic read
one thing is for sure, your write showcases unquestionable talent
thanks for choosing to share..
\'keep that keyboard dancing and enjoy the ride
remember to grip ambition\'s reins - loosely
before it skins your innate whimsy: bloody...\'
April 27th, 2021 04:46
L. B. Mek said:
\'woosah\', take it slow dear poet
life still has a lot to throw your way, I fear
just take a glimpse of those history pages..
still, personally: I found this a delightfully poetic read
one thing is for sure, your write showcases unquestionable talent
thanks for choosing to share..
\'keep that keyboard dancing and enjoy the ride
remember to grip ambition\'s reins - loosely
before it skins your innate whimsy: bloody...\'
April 27th, 2021 04:46
Monster Born By Night
Goldfinch60 said:
If that monster has now emerged from within you let it go and continue with your better life.
Andy
April 27th, 2021 00:15
Goldfinch60 said:
If that monster has now emerged from within you let it go and continue with your better life.
Andy
April 27th, 2021 00:15
Monster Born By Night
Doggerel Dave said:
If sadness has that reaction I hate to think what any stronger emotion would do to you....
And what do you learn in your history class?
Apart from those reservations I found it an interesting but terrifying read.
April 26th, 2021 19:17
Doggerel Dave said:
If sadness has that reaction I hate to think what any stronger emotion would do to you....
And what do you learn in your history class?
Apart from those reservations I found it an interesting but terrifying read.
April 26th, 2021 19:17
Humpty-Dumpty
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Afternoon SUGIURA ~ Thanks for your sad Poem ! My advice is \"Always stay away from the Edge\". Humpty Dumpty was a Seige Gun on the walls of the City. The soldiers pushed him too close to the edge and he fell off and BROKE irreparably ! It has happened to Friends of Mine who let Circumstances of Life etc push them too close to the edge (of Breakdown) and like Humpty they fell off & died. Some acctually jumped off Bridges & Tall Buildings ! Im 35 (Single) and have been close to the edge several times for a variety of reasons. I am a Christian so I haven\'t resorted to Drugs & Alcohol etc to ease the Pain but have sought help from People who Councelled & prayed with me and gently brought me back from the EDGE ~ AMEN How do you cope and move away from the edge ? Yours BRIAN Please check our site ANGELA is my FIANCEE
February 4th, 2019 18:03
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Afternoon SUGIURA ~ Thanks for your sad Poem ! My advice is \"Always stay away from the Edge\". Humpty Dumpty was a Seige Gun on the walls of the City. The soldiers pushed him too close to the edge and he fell off and BROKE irreparably ! It has happened to Friends of Mine who let Circumstances of Life etc push them too close to the edge (of Breakdown) and like Humpty they fell off & died. Some acctually jumped off Bridges & Tall Buildings ! Im 35 (Single) and have been close to the edge several times for a variety of reasons. I am a Christian so I haven\'t resorted to Drugs & Alcohol etc to ease the Pain but have sought help from People who Councelled & prayed with me and gently brought me back from the EDGE ~ AMEN How do you cope and move away from the edge ? Yours BRIAN Please check our site ANGELA is my FIANCEE
February 4th, 2019 18:03
A Broken Teacup
Crystal Hope said:
Really great piece. You did a remarkable job!
August 7th, 2018 14:19
Crystal Hope said:
Really great piece. You did a remarkable job!
August 7th, 2018 14:19
Time\'s Truths
HangingbyaHalo said:
Great read.
Consider time wisely and use it accordingly.
Could you imagine knowing how much time you had? How differently people would live?
We take it for granted as if all we have is time. Yet no one is promised tomorrow.
This piece is thought provoking.
June 12th, 2018 23:05
HangingbyaHalo said:
Great read.
Consider time wisely and use it accordingly.
Could you imagine knowing how much time you had? How differently people would live?
We take it for granted as if all we have is time. Yet no one is promised tomorrow.
This piece is thought provoking.
June 12th, 2018 23:05
What\'s in your Cup?
WL Schuett said:
Very intriguing write , good work ... coffee black or tea with honey
January 3rd, 2018 08:49
WL Schuett said:
Very intriguing write , good work ... coffee black or tea with honey
January 3rd, 2018 08:49
Beach Cries
Christina8 said:
I agree, this is so beautiful! A masterpiece in such few words. Loved the last line. Great job!!
October 18th, 2017 12:31
Christina8 said:
I agree, this is so beautiful! A masterpiece in such few words. Loved the last line. Great job!!
October 18th, 2017 12:31
The Edge of Time
WL Schuett said:
This is very nice, I really like it good poem 😎
October 17th, 2017 14:04
WL Schuett said:
This is very nice, I really like it good poem 😎
October 17th, 2017 14:04
The Edge of Time
Poetic Dan said:
Your words cleared all mine from my head. Great job!
October 17th, 2017 12:09
Poetic Dan said:
Your words cleared all mine from my head. Great job!
October 17th, 2017 12:09
Fading
WL Schuett said:
A very lovely poem , faded light mourned by the stars , that\'s very poetic . Loved it !
October 13th, 2017 16:21
WL Schuett said:
A very lovely poem , faded light mourned by the stars , that\'s very poetic . Loved it !
October 13th, 2017 16:21
Sea
FredPeyer said:
SA, I like the structure of your poem. It is short, but to the point, a kind of minimalism, but it tells the whole story. Very well written!
September 29th, 2017 22:51
FredPeyer said:
SA, I like the structure of your poem. It is short, but to the point, a kind of minimalism, but it tells the whole story. Very well written!
September 29th, 2017 22:51
Time\'s Midnight Ride
WL Schuett said:
Strong poetry ... well done I liked this a lot
September 26th, 2017 11:01
WL Schuett said:
Strong poetry ... well done I liked this a lot
September 26th, 2017 11:01
Missing
Adam Shirley said:
I\'ve recently had to say goodbye to my friend in school who is a guy, this brought back old memories of us. Simple yet beautiful. Well done.
August 20th, 2017 18:54
Adam Shirley said:
I\'ve recently had to say goodbye to my friend in school who is a guy, this brought back old memories of us. Simple yet beautiful. Well done.
August 20th, 2017 18:54
Words
myself and me said:
Be careful with our words, since in \"sword\" there is a \"word\".
August 18th, 2017 23:38
myself and me said:
Be careful with our words, since in \"sword\" there is a \"word\".
August 18th, 2017 23:38
Words
Nicholas Browning said:
We don\'t really think about the effect that our words will have on other people when we say them. When I was still in school 4 years ago, it was similar. You brought up a valid point, and I commend you for doing so. Also, is \"piers\" supposed to be \"peers\" in the last line?
August 18th, 2017 07:27
Nicholas Browning said:
We don\'t really think about the effect that our words will have on other people when we say them. When I was still in school 4 years ago, it was similar. You brought up a valid point, and I commend you for doing so. Also, is \"piers\" supposed to be \"peers\" in the last line?
August 18th, 2017 07:27
Change
myself and me said:
I guess you are their brains. Stressful indeed. Take some deep breath, let the fish go.
August 15th, 2017 22:06
myself and me said:
I guess you are their brains. Stressful indeed. Take some deep breath, let the fish go.
August 15th, 2017 22:06
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