Comments received on poems by Sugiura Asuna



Humpty-Dumpty
psychofemale said:

been there....hope you are ok.

February 4th, 2019 22:00

Humpty-Dumpty
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Good Afternoon SUGIURA ~ Thanks for your sad Poem ! My advice is \"Always stay away from the Edge\". Humpty Dumpty was a Seige Gun on the walls of the City. The soldiers pushed him too close to the edge and he fell off and BROKE irreparably ! It has happened to Friends of Mine who let Circumstances of Life etc push them too close to the edge (of Breakdown) and like Humpty they fell off & died. Some acctually jumped off Bridges & Tall Buildings ! Im 35 (Single) and have been close to the edge several times for a variety of reasons. I am a Christian so I haven\'t resorted to Drugs & Alcohol etc to ease the Pain but have sought help from People who Councelled & prayed with me and gently brought me back from the EDGE ~ AMEN How do you cope and move away from the edge ? Yours BRIAN Please check our site ANGELA is my FIANCEE

February 4th, 2019 18:03

The Shit-show of What Feels like the Century
Unsub said:

Pinecone

time to find a new group or try going it alone. getting dragged into egotistic & drama queens is never a healthy existence.

Think you\'ve spelt like wrong in your title unless that\'s a new hip way of spelling it.

Enjoy finding some sane friends; that won\'t be easy.

Unsub.

August 15th, 2018 14:25

Thinking of life
Lee Renard Caspian said:

Very lovely :)

August 8th, 2018 23:49

A Broken Teacup
Crystal Hope said:

Really great piece. You did a remarkable job!

August 7th, 2018 14:19

Time\'s Truths
HangingbyaHalo said:

Great read.
Consider time wisely and use it accordingly.
Could you imagine knowing how much time you had? How differently people would live?
We take it for granted as if all we have is time. Yet no one is promised tomorrow.
This piece is thought provoking.


June 12th, 2018 23:05

What\'s in your Cup?
WL Schuett said:

Very intriguing write , good work ... coffee black or tea with honey

January 3rd, 2018 08:49

What\'s in your Cup?
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 2nd, 2018 13:41

The Sea\'s Heart
WL Schuett said:

Very interesting definitely poetic 😎

October 20th, 2017 22:22

Beach Cries
WL Schuett said:

Yes very fine poetry sweet and tragic...

October 18th, 2017 13:59

Beach Cries
Christina8 said:

I agree, this is so beautiful! A masterpiece in such few words. Loved the last line. Great job!!

October 18th, 2017 12:31

The Edge of Time
Laura said:

Creatively insightful !

October 17th, 2017 14:17

The Edge of Time
WL Schuett said:

This is very nice, I really like it good poem 😎

October 17th, 2017 14:04

The Edge of Time
Poetic Dan said:

Your words cleared all mine from my head. Great job!

October 17th, 2017 12:09

Fading
Dear--JaneDoe said:

Lovely!

October 14th, 2017 16:29

Fading
WL Schuett said:

A very lovely poem , faded light mourned by the stars , that\'s very poetic . Loved it !

October 13th, 2017 16:21

Fading
Tony36 said:

Beautiful

October 13th, 2017 13:23

Sea
FredPeyer said:

SA, I like the structure of your poem. It is short, but to the point, a kind of minimalism, but it tells the whole story. Very well written!

September 29th, 2017 22:51

Time\'s Midnight Ride
WL Schuett said:

Strong poetry ... well done I liked this a lot

September 26th, 2017 11:01

Missing
Adam Shirley said:

I\'ve recently had to say goodbye to my friend in school who is a guy, this brought back old memories of us. Simple yet beautiful. Well done.

August 20th, 2017 18:54

Words
myself and me said:

Be careful with our words, since in \"sword\" there is a \"word\".



August 18th, 2017 23:38

Words
Nicholas Browning said:

We don\'t really think about the effect that our words will have on other people when we say them. When I was still in school 4 years ago, it was similar. You brought up a valid point, and I commend you for doing so. Also, is \"piers\" supposed to be \"peers\" in the last line?

August 18th, 2017 07:27

Change
myself and me said:

I guess you are their brains. Stressful indeed. Take some deep breath, let the fish go.

August 15th, 2017 22:06

Change
sue.evans said:

I feel your frustration through your poem.

August 15th, 2017 16:22

Seasons
Accidental Poet said:

Short & sweet is nice too.

August 12th, 2017 20:51

Seasons
Louis Gibbs said:

Nice little short one, Pinecone! I like!

August 12th, 2017 19:09

The Lonely
sue.evans said:

You can sense your loneliness from your words. Everyone has a right to belong - you will find your place. We should celebrate who we are and what we have to offer no matter how small we think that is!

August 12th, 2017 08:46

The Lonely
myself and me said:

There is always someone, the right one for you. Be patient, all the lonely waiting is worth it. Like this one.

August 11th, 2017 20:42

A Silent Howl
Accidental Poet said:

A very real feeling of being in the forest hearing that lonely wolf. Great poem pinecone.

August 9th, 2017 20:23