Comments received on poems by Andrew Guzaldo



            “Just a Memory Away”
Laura said:

Andrew,
Although your poem is a somewhat sad, it is a beautiful piece of writing to read!

So sorry about your “three pieces” of heart being “ripped out”! I see that the quarter that’s left is pure gold and amazing!

~Laura~


April 22nd, 2018 16:02

\"Why POETRY?
Andrew Guzaldo said:

Laura Thank you, I am writing a poetry book soon to be published. I have that on the inside cover.
Name of the book is \"The Ardor of a Poet\" Poems from the heart..

April 21st, 2018 13:27

\"Why POETRY?
Laura said:

Andrew,
What an extraordinary write about POETRY!
Thank you for sharing!

~Laura~

April 21st, 2018 11:51

“Antipathy of Abandonment”
JamieDayDream said:

great choice of words here vocabulary very strong.

March 18th, 2018 17:54

“Antidote to Optimism”
yellowrose said:

hello andrew, this is a great piece of write, really truly enjoyed reading this ! :-) i loved your reference to the rocks and the flower ... optimism .. pessimism .. both always exist . i especially love these lines .. \'\'The stones of the rock will bear a flower,
Rain will fall and so kisses the flower, \'\'

February 23rd, 2018 17:36

“NEVER PRETEND\"
Andrew Guzaldo said:

Thank you and we are deep thinkers, for expression of words is a spiritual and endorphin embodiment

February 10th, 2018 02:17

\"GOLDEN HOURS\"
dusk arising said:

Oh yes a very clever piece. Nice one.

January 30th, 2018 18:39

\"GOLDEN HOURS\"
Laura said:

Great write!
Will use the hours
gifted to us wisely!


January 30th, 2018 17:04

\"Goodbyes are HARD\"
Andrew Guzaldo said:

WHY is this for 18 and over ?//

January 30th, 2018 16:53

\"Goodbyes are HARD\"
Goldfinch60 said:

Good emotive write.

January 27th, 2018 01:10

\"Goodbyes are HARD\"
Laura said:

Spot on Andrew!
It hurts more than
a serrated heart
wound! Very relatable!


January 26th, 2018 14:14

 “WHISPER GOODBYE”
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

January 17th, 2018 16:28

“Nightmare of Fear”
Chloe Rachel Flisher said:

So relatable. Thank you for sharing. CR x

January 14th, 2018 17:01

“Nightmare of Fear”
Tony36 said:

Deep write

January 14th, 2018 16:09

“Nightmare of Fear”
Anthony Stafford said:

Deep and many can relate

January 14th, 2018 16:00

\"No Canvas, No Ink\"
Resa71 said:

Good read !

January 13th, 2018 18:32

\"No Canvas, No Ink\"
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 13th, 2018 16:49

\"Strangest Circumstances\"
draculazy said:

Nice work!! :) - b

January 11th, 2018 19:18

\"Strangest Circumstances\"
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 11th, 2018 17:10

\"PROPITIATION\"
Shadowbox15 said:

Beautiful.

January 9th, 2018 18:04

\"PASSIONATELY\"
dusk arising said:

hmmm.... your words left me thinking of that wonderful feeling of waking from a dream of falling in love. A reality more perfect than reality itself.
Your writing is really intense and enjoyable.

January 8th, 2018 20:58

\"PASSIONATELY\"
FredPeyer said:

Your poem really gets across the loss, the memories, the emotions of a lost love. Well written!

January 8th, 2018 18:29

\"PASSIONATELY\"
Shadowbox15 said:

Very emotive.

January 8th, 2018 18:07

“POETIC HORIZON”
Goldfinch60 said:

The excitement of the New Year will bring new words to your mind for your to transfer onto these pages.

January 8th, 2018 01:49

\"ENDLESS SKIES ABOVE\"
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, the love shines through these words.

January 7th, 2018 01:56

\"ENDLESS SKIES ABOVE\"
Shadowbox15 said:

I can’t tell if this is about a long-distance realationship or simply a relationship in distress.

January 6th, 2018 18:20

\"ENDLESS SKIES ABOVE\"
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 6th, 2018 15:44

\" Cards I was Dealt\"
Shadowbox15 said:

Yep. Love is indeed a gamble. You can either hit the jackpot, or lose everything.

December 30th, 2017 12:56

ENDURE
Shadowbox15 said:

Pretty good.

December 18th, 2017 22:03

Celibate she Knows not?
Andrew Guzaldo said:

I am new here I see someone posted my poem, can you tell me How I can publish my poems, and make friends..

December 16th, 2017 14:23