Comments received on poems by LukeCoomer
Twoface
orchidee said:
A fine write Luke. We can see through some people. They say \'Oh, it\'s no problem; it doesn\'t bother me\', but they have a blustering attitude and go off in a huff.
October 28th, 2018 02:08
orchidee said:
A fine write Luke. We can see through some people. They say \'Oh, it\'s no problem; it doesn\'t bother me\', but they have a blustering attitude and go off in a huff.
October 28th, 2018 02:08
Knight Fall
Caring dove said:
i enjoyed reading this luke.. a sad thing when the hero loses his life...they should have displayed him as a hero
May 18th, 2018 04:07
Caring dove said:
i enjoyed reading this luke.. a sad thing when the hero loses his life...they should have displayed him as a hero
May 18th, 2018 04:07
Knight Fall
orchidee said:
A fine write Luke. Well, balancing this with my Christian faith hopefully, we hear in the UK a murderer of long ago has died. He mostly killed homeless young gay men. Good news - good riddance?! In a fire-and-brimstone type of saying: \'Oh well, the worms in hell have more festering food to feed on now!\' Yet we\'re all sinners needing forgiveness. (Rant over!).
May 14th, 2018 12:39
orchidee said:
A fine write Luke. Well, balancing this with my Christian faith hopefully, we hear in the UK a murderer of long ago has died. He mostly killed homeless young gay men. Good news - good riddance?! In a fire-and-brimstone type of saying: \'Oh well, the worms in hell have more festering food to feed on now!\' Yet we\'re all sinners needing forgiveness. (Rant over!).
May 14th, 2018 12:39
I’m Not Afraid
dusk arising said:
So true. Do we question the mental health of our leaders when they send our young people to die in foreign lands?
No, but we should.
Really enjoyed your writing here.
May 13th, 2018 07:42
dusk arising said:
So true. Do we question the mental health of our leaders when they send our young people to die in foreign lands?
No, but we should.
Really enjoyed your writing here.
May 13th, 2018 07:42
I’m Not Afraid
orchidee said:
A fine write Luke. You afraid of my singing? That\'s pretty terrifying, ya know. Well, it\'s like two cats fighting! heehee.
May 13th, 2018 01:37
orchidee said:
A fine write Luke. You afraid of my singing? That\'s pretty terrifying, ya know. Well, it\'s like two cats fighting! heehee.
May 13th, 2018 01:37
I’m Not Afraid
SLR said:
So true. Sometimes animals are more humane than humans. It would never occur to an animal to do some of the stuff that humans do to hurt each other. Good write.
May 12th, 2018 21:52
SLR said:
So true. Sometimes animals are more humane than humans. It would never occur to an animal to do some of the stuff that humans do to hurt each other. Good write.
May 12th, 2018 21:52
Blood on my hands ( Part 1 )
orchidee said:
Now what you up to? Why didn\'t you stay indoors by the fire last night, with a nice cup of cocoa before bed! That\'s killed the atmosphere of the poem - doh! heehee. A fine write Luke.
April 25th, 2018 01:47
orchidee said:
Now what you up to? Why didn\'t you stay indoors by the fire last night, with a nice cup of cocoa before bed! That\'s killed the atmosphere of the poem - doh! heehee. A fine write Luke.
April 25th, 2018 01:47
Mad Science
Laura🌻 said:
Luke,
The difference you ask?
...a very fine line...that’s it!
A brilliant write! Don’t take it down!
The only thing I ask is...
If you “destroy this planet in” your “venture” and “will slip through time and space to another”...
please take a few of us with you! Lol
~Laura~
April 15th, 2018 10:52
Laura🌻 said:
Luke,
The difference you ask?
...a very fine line...that’s it!
A brilliant write! Don’t take it down!
The only thing I ask is...
If you “destroy this planet in” your “venture” and “will slip through time and space to another”...
please take a few of us with you! Lol
~Laura~
April 15th, 2018 10:52
Mad Science
orchidee said:
A fine write Luke. I\'ve gone mad already - talking to the cat. Well, we talk to pets. But it answered me back in English! I\'m sure it did! lol.
April 15th, 2018 08:35
orchidee said:
A fine write Luke. I\'ve gone mad already - talking to the cat. Well, we talk to pets. But it answered me back in English! I\'m sure it did! lol.
April 15th, 2018 08:35
Garden of Souls
Resa71 said:
So I’m alone in a very creepy, very old house.
I couldn’t sleep, as I am to creeped out.
I decide to read some poems, help distract myself from my silly fears.
Then, I read your poem!
Holy sh*t!
I’m even more scared than before.
But, it was worth it!
Really intense, frightening piece.
I could picture the woman in the trunk of the car.
And the pyscopath driving, pure evil within him.
Really well done !
Resa
April 3rd, 2018 03:03
Resa71 said:
So I’m alone in a very creepy, very old house.
I couldn’t sleep, as I am to creeped out.
I decide to read some poems, help distract myself from my silly fears.
Then, I read your poem!
Holy sh*t!
I’m even more scared than before.
But, it was worth it!
Really intense, frightening piece.
I could picture the woman in the trunk of the car.
And the pyscopath driving, pure evil within him.
Really well done !
Resa
April 3rd, 2018 03:03
Unconditional
Laura🌻 said:
Luke,
An awesome write!
You’ve expressed exactly
how my husband and I
feel about our children!
As long as we remember
and remind ourselves of the
UNCONDITIONAL LOVE
our children deserve when
everything is not so honky
dory, we’ll be just fine!
Thank you for this great
poem I loved reading!
~Laura~
March 31st, 2018 10:47
Laura🌻 said:
Luke,
An awesome write!
You’ve expressed exactly
how my husband and I
feel about our children!
As long as we remember
and remind ourselves of the
UNCONDITIONAL LOVE
our children deserve when
everything is not so honky
dory, we’ll be just fine!
Thank you for this great
poem I loved reading!
~Laura~
March 31st, 2018 10:47
Unconditional
Patricia LaFazia said:
“Even when you out grow me and have a kid of your own
I’ll always have your back and where I am is your home”
My favorite part!! This is beautiful
March 31st, 2018 10:16
Patricia LaFazia said:
“Even when you out grow me and have a kid of your own
I’ll always have your back and where I am is your home”
My favorite part!! This is beautiful
March 31st, 2018 10:16
No Excuses
Lorna said:
Wow - good one....... great message of no self pity....... great sign of character!
March 18th, 2018 04:47
Lorna said:
Wow - good one....... great message of no self pity....... great sign of character!
March 18th, 2018 04:47
Monkey on a Typewriter
Caring dove said:
hi luke .. i love this !:-) i sense there is a feeling of difference here , not being understood, nobody seeing you . really great poem
March 12th, 2018 15:04
Caring dove said:
hi luke .. i love this !:-) i sense there is a feeling of difference here , not being understood, nobody seeing you . really great poem
March 12th, 2018 15:04
Dollar
LukeCoomer said:
I’ve already got two more songs lined up the next one will be in a rock style
February 12th, 2018 14:38
LukeCoomer said:
I’ve already got two more songs lined up the next one will be in a rock style
February 12th, 2018 14:38
Self Contained
zooy22 said:
This is truly deep and I can relate to it and it makes me feel like I\'m not alone...
January 25th, 2018 23:28
zooy22 said:
This is truly deep and I can relate to it and it makes me feel like I\'m not alone...
January 25th, 2018 23:28
Dry
Laura🌻 said:
I think you’ll find the “right spell”!
A great write and awesome visual, Luke!
January 19th, 2018 19:45
Laura🌻 said:
I think you’ll find the “right spell”!
A great write and awesome visual, Luke!
January 19th, 2018 19:45
Die Trying
orchidee said:
Good write Luke. On the other hand; \'If at first you don\'t succeed - give up! \' heehee. I not quite got the plot of this poem. In fact, I may have lost the plot! lol.
January 9th, 2018 10:35
orchidee said:
Good write Luke. On the other hand; \'If at first you don\'t succeed - give up! \' heehee. I not quite got the plot of this poem. In fact, I may have lost the plot! lol.
January 9th, 2018 10:35
What’s Good?
LukeCoomer said:
I disagree my friend sing loud for the world to hear!!
January 7th, 2018 14:37
LukeCoomer said:
I disagree my friend sing loud for the world to hear!!
January 7th, 2018 14:37
What’s Good?
orchidee said:
What\'s good is me not singing - heehee! Meoowwoo, Oh no, I just started!
January 7th, 2018 11:41
orchidee said:
What\'s good is me not singing - heehee! Meoowwoo, Oh no, I just started!
January 7th, 2018 11:41
What’s Good?
Laura🌻 said:
Luke,
I’m amazed at your
artwork! It’s awesome!!
Your writing is chock full
of what’s good!
My favorite...
I like a friend who doesn’t
pretend and gives a hoot
of what I have to say!
Thank you for sharing!
Happy 2018!
~Laura~
January 7th, 2018 10:31
Laura🌻 said:
Luke,
I’m amazed at your
artwork! It’s awesome!!
Your writing is chock full
of what’s good!
My favorite...
I like a friend who doesn’t
pretend and gives a hoot
of what I have to say!
Thank you for sharing!
Happy 2018!
~Laura~
January 7th, 2018 10:31
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