Comments received on poems by LukeCoomer



Hurting
Unsub said:

LC,

yes this has a great temp & dance to it plus the theme is well delivered.

Nice work for sure.

Unsub.

April 23rd, 2019 10:19

Twoface
orchidee said:

A fine write Luke. We can see through some people. They say \'Oh, it\'s no problem; it doesn\'t bother me\', but they have a blustering attitude and go off in a huff.

October 28th, 2018 02:08

How to be a Brother
orchidee said:

A fine write Luke.

June 10th, 2018 01:39

How to be a Brother
Heartwriter said:

Loved this touching write.

June 9th, 2018 19:54

Knight Fall
yellowrose said:

i enjoyed reading this luke.. a sad thing when the hero loses his life...they should have displayed him as a hero

May 18th, 2018 04:07

Knight Fall
orchidee said:

A fine write Luke. Well, balancing this with my Christian faith hopefully, we hear in the UK a murderer of long ago has died. He mostly killed homeless young gay men. Good news - good riddance?! In a fire-and-brimstone type of saying: \'Oh well, the worms in hell have more festering food to feed on now!\' Yet we\'re all sinners needing forgiveness. (Rant over!).

May 14th, 2018 12:39

I’m Not Afraid
dusk arising said:

So true. Do we question the mental health of our leaders when they send our young people to die in foreign lands?
No, but we should.
Really enjoyed your writing here.

May 13th, 2018 07:42

I’m Not Afraid
orchidee said:

A fine write Luke. You afraid of my singing? That\'s pretty terrifying, ya know. Well, it\'s like two cats fighting! heehee.

May 13th, 2018 01:37

I’m Not Afraid
SLR said:

So true. Sometimes animals are more humane than humans. It would never occur to an animal to do some of the stuff that humans do to hurt each other. Good write.

May 12th, 2018 21:52

I’m Not Afraid
w c said:

enjoyed it

May 12th, 2018 21:27

Blood on my hands ( Part 1 )
orchidee said:

Now what you up to? Why didn\'t you stay indoors by the fire last night, with a nice cup of cocoa before bed! That\'s killed the atmosphere of the poem - doh! heehee. A fine write Luke.

April 25th, 2018 01:47

Mad Science
Maxine Smith said:

Awsome write.

April 15th, 2018 12:50

Mad Science
Laura said:

Luke,
The difference you ask?
...a very fine line...that’s it!
A brilliant write! Don’t take it down!

The only thing I ask is...

If you “destroy this planet in” your “venture” and “will slip through time and space to another”...
please take a few of us with you! Lol

~Laura~


April 15th, 2018 10:52

Mad Science
orchidee said:

A fine write Luke. I\'ve gone mad already - talking to the cat. Well, we talk to pets. But it answered me back in English! I\'m sure it did! lol.

April 15th, 2018 08:35

Jessica
Maxine Smith said:

Clever light hearted read. Really enjoyed this, thanks for sharing.

April 12th, 2018 17:14

Garden of Souls
Resa71 said:

So I’m alone in a very creepy, very old house.
I couldn’t sleep, as I am to creeped out.
I decide to read some poems, help distract myself from my silly fears.
Then, I read your poem!
Holy sh*t!
I’m even more scared than before.
But, it was worth it!
Really intense, frightening piece.
I could picture the woman in the trunk of the car.
And the pyscopath driving, pure evil within him.
Really well done !
Resa

April 3rd, 2018 03:03

Unconditional
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, love for family has no bounds.

April 1st, 2018 00:31

Unconditional
Laura said:

Luke,
An awesome write!
You’ve expressed exactly
how my husband and I
feel about our children!
As long as we remember
and remind ourselves of the
UNCONDITIONAL LOVE
our children deserve when
everything is not so honky
dory, we’ll be just fine!
Thank you for this great
poem I loved reading!

~Laura~

March 31st, 2018 10:47

Unconditional
Patricia LaFazia said:

“Even when you out grow me and have a kid of your own
I’ll always have your back and where I am is your home”

My favorite part!! This is beautiful

March 31st, 2018 10:16

Unconditional
orchidee said:

A fine write Luke.

March 31st, 2018 10:07

No Excuses
orchidee said:

A fine write Luke.

March 18th, 2018 05:40

No Excuses
Lorna said:

Wow - good one....... great message of no self pity....... great sign of character!

March 18th, 2018 04:47

Monkey on a Typewriter
yellowrose said:

hi luke .. i love this !:-) i sense there is a feeling of difference here , not being understood, nobody seeing you . really great poem

March 12th, 2018 15:04

Dollar
LukeCoomer said:

I’ve already got two more songs lined up the next one will be in a rock style

February 12th, 2018 14:38

Self Contained
zooy22 said:

This is truly deep and I can relate to it and it makes me feel like I\'m not alone...

January 25th, 2018 23:28

The Reapers Game
poetboy5454 said:

A well written piece on a stark reality!

January 22nd, 2018 22:35

Dry
yellowrose said:

hi luke ! :-) i love this .. nicely done !

January 20th, 2018 05:29

Dry
Laura said:

I think you’ll find the “right spell”!
A great write and awesome visual, Luke!


January 19th, 2018 19:45

Dry
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

January 19th, 2018 19:36

Die Trying
orchidee said:

Good write Luke. On the other hand; \'If at first you don\'t succeed - give up! \' heehee. I not quite got the plot of this poem. In fact, I may have lost the plot! lol.

January 9th, 2018 10:35

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