Comments received on poems by LukeCoomer
Jack Frost
orchidee said:
Good write Luke. Why isn\'t it Fred Frost, or John Frost, or...?! I wish I would shut up being boring sometimes. lol.
December 30th, 2017 02:53
orchidee said:
Good write Luke. Why isn\'t it Fred Frost, or John Frost, or...?! I wish I would shut up being boring sometimes. lol.
December 30th, 2017 02:53
The Clause
Laura🌻 said:
Great write Luke! Enjoyed it very much! Very creative! Awesome illustration! Bravo!
December 25th, 2017 22:40
Laura🌻 said:
Great write Luke! Enjoyed it very much! Very creative! Awesome illustration! Bravo!
December 25th, 2017 22:40
Tyrant
orchidee said:
Oohh, don\'t fancy meeting him. Looks a bit shifty to me! heehee.
December 24th, 2017 03:12
orchidee said:
Oohh, don\'t fancy meeting him. Looks a bit shifty to me! heehee.
December 24th, 2017 03:12
Hunter Cole
orchidee said:
Ohhh I should meet him. As I\'ve said, a cup of tea and slice of cake might solve his bad-hair day! heehee.
December 20th, 2017 09:48
orchidee said:
Ohhh I should meet him. As I\'ve said, a cup of tea and slice of cake might solve his bad-hair day! heehee.
December 20th, 2017 09:48
Porcelain Doll
orchidee said:
Did she look in the mirror, and her face cracked, rather than the mirror cracking?! Was she Humpty Dumpty\'s sister?! lol.
December 16th, 2017 06:40
orchidee said:
Did she look in the mirror, and her face cracked, rather than the mirror cracking?! Was she Humpty Dumpty\'s sister?! lol.
December 16th, 2017 06:40
The Bard
deepthoughts said:
I love this poem, it rhymes so well. Really, really good work.
December 13th, 2017 20:39
deepthoughts said:
I love this poem, it rhymes so well. Really, really good work.
December 13th, 2017 20:39
Fight or Flight
deepthoughts said:
I love this poem, going to print it out and put it on my wall as a reminder.
December 13th, 2017 17:12
deepthoughts said:
I love this poem, going to print it out and put it on my wall as a reminder.
December 13th, 2017 17:12
Victory
Laura🌻 said:
Luke,
Your poem is great in its entirety!
I especially liked the lines...
“...we must brush off the rust and turn these creatures to dust...
“...we will prevail, we shall overcome...
“...wrap the enemy in a sheet and encase it in concrete...**
“Push through the misery with passion and unity”
**As a Roman, this line is especially meaningful! According to history, the Romans invited cement...and you know what we like to do with cement! Lol
Awesome artwork, of course!
~Laura~
December 12th, 2017 16:24
Laura🌻 said:
Luke,
Your poem is great in its entirety!
I especially liked the lines...
“...we must brush off the rust and turn these creatures to dust...
“...we will prevail, we shall overcome...
“...wrap the enemy in a sheet and encase it in concrete...**
“Push through the misery with passion and unity”
**As a Roman, this line is especially meaningful! According to history, the Romans invited cement...and you know what we like to do with cement! Lol
Awesome artwork, of course!
~Laura~
December 12th, 2017 16:24
What is Evil?
deepthoughts said:
This is a good poem, I like the last sentence because it\'s very true. Evil can\'t be defined very well today. As poetboy5454 said, it\'s a blurry grey. Do you mind checking out a few of my poems and telling me what you think?
December 10th, 2017 22:35
deepthoughts said:
This is a good poem, I like the last sentence because it\'s very true. Evil can\'t be defined very well today. As poetboy5454 said, it\'s a blurry grey. Do you mind checking out a few of my poems and telling me what you think?
December 10th, 2017 22:35
What is Evil?
Laura🌻 said:
A great write Luke!
You’re so right and bright!
Evil takes on many shapes
andwears many disguises.
Awesome illustration!
December 10th, 2017 21:44
Laura🌻 said:
A great write Luke!
You’re so right and bright!
Evil takes on many shapes
andwears many disguises.
Awesome illustration!
December 10th, 2017 21:44
What is Evil?
poetboy123 said:
Brilliant poem, evil is too often represented as a black and white line in society, a blurry grey fits much better.
December 10th, 2017 21:16
poetboy123 said:
Brilliant poem, evil is too often represented as a black and white line in society, a blurry grey fits much better.
December 10th, 2017 21:16
State of the World
orchidee said:
Ask a silly question maybe - have things got worse? Or was the past \'the bad old days\' too?
December 2nd, 2017 02:59
orchidee said:
Ask a silly question maybe - have things got worse? Or was the past \'the bad old days\' too?
December 2nd, 2017 02:59
State of the World
Laura🌻 said:
Bull’s eye, Luke!
A sad but...Great write!
Awesome artwork!
December 1st, 2017 21:23
Laura🌻 said:
Bull’s eye, Luke!
A sad but...Great write!
Awesome artwork!
December 1st, 2017 21:23
Fight or Flight
orchidee said:
Wish I would shut up waffling sometimes. I go on and on you see. I said, I go...... See what I mean?! lol.
November 30th, 2017 15:29
orchidee said:
Wish I would shut up waffling sometimes. I go on and on you see. I said, I go...... See what I mean?! lol.
November 30th, 2017 15:29
The King
Laura🌻 said:
Luke,
You ARE a KING my dear man!! I love your craft! You’re a very gifted individual! Pursue your craft to the full extent! Let no one tell you otherwise! Let that magic pump through your veins!
~Laura~
November 27th, 2017 10:53
Laura🌻 said:
Luke,
You ARE a KING my dear man!! I love your craft! You’re a very gifted individual! Pursue your craft to the full extent! Let no one tell you otherwise! Let that magic pump through your veins!
~Laura~
November 27th, 2017 10:53
X On My Heart
Laura🌻 said:
Luke,
As painful as it was to read, this is an outstanding write! Of course, the artwork is exceptional! So painful to be “...hanging by the neck for so long...” and no one who’ll make the decision...
Watching one suffer is a double edged act...one of COWARDICE or one of BRAVERY!
What to do???
A BRAVEHEART you are!
~Laura~
November 27th, 2017 10:19
Laura🌻 said:
Luke,
As painful as it was to read, this is an outstanding write! Of course, the artwork is exceptional! So painful to be “...hanging by the neck for so long...” and no one who’ll make the decision...
Watching one suffer is a double edged act...one of COWARDICE or one of BRAVERY!
What to do???
A BRAVEHEART you are!
~Laura~
November 27th, 2017 10:19
Standing in the Dark
Laura🌻 said:
Luke,
I don’t know 🤷🏻‍♀️ how I missed this one...but I’m glad I found it! Your artwork in phenomenal and the write exceptional! Knowing what you are, who you are, and what you aim to be is admirable! I’ll definitely take a ride with this untraditional shooting star! The last line rings so true and very relatable at this time in my life!!
“...And the sense to find the light when I’m standing in the dark...”
~Laura~
November 27th, 2017 09:35
Laura🌻 said:
Luke,
I don’t know 🤷🏻‍♀️ how I missed this one...but I’m glad I found it! Your artwork in phenomenal and the write exceptional! Knowing what you are, who you are, and what you aim to be is admirable! I’ll definitely take a ride with this untraditional shooting star! The last line rings so true and very relatable at this time in my life!!
“...And the sense to find the light when I’m standing in the dark...”
~Laura~
November 27th, 2017 09:35
The King
LukeCoomer said:
I just realized this write might seem like I’m stroking my ego, this was not my intention!
It’s almost a direct response for someone putting me down for pursuing my craft.
I realize I’m a king amongst many other kings and queens
I love you all
November 27th, 2017 05:24
LukeCoomer said:
I just realized this write might seem like I’m stroking my ego, this was not my intention!
It’s almost a direct response for someone putting me down for pursuing my craft.
I realize I’m a king amongst many other kings and queens
I love you all
November 27th, 2017 05:24
X On My Heart
LukeCoomer said:
Thank you Santi, this Write was inspired by a quote
“ to help the hanging man die” I think I captured the feeling I was hoping more people would see it!
I’m actual really waiting for hood to see it I’m curios what he will say lol
November 26th, 2017 05:47
LukeCoomer said:
Thank you Santi, this Write was inspired by a quote
“ to help the hanging man die” I think I captured the feeling I was hoping more people would see it!
I’m actual really waiting for hood to see it I’m curios what he will say lol
November 26th, 2017 05:47
Standing in the Dark
b-LAH-que said:
Your non-traditional methods and desire to shake the foundation of the world with your poetic input resonate greatly with me. You seem to have a great sense of self-awareness in this poem. And I always dig some good rhymes too. I really enjoyed reading this great write, well done.
November 23rd, 2017 16:31
b-LAH-que said:
Your non-traditional methods and desire to shake the foundation of the world with your poetic input resonate greatly with me. You seem to have a great sense of self-awareness in this poem. And I always dig some good rhymes too. I really enjoyed reading this great write, well done.
November 23rd, 2017 16:31
A Genie\'s Promise
FineB said:
Wonderful.
Thank you LukeCoomer.
Mr Genie rocks and is out of this world.
Keep writing
FineB
November 18th, 2017 14:16
FineB said:
Wonderful.
Thank you LukeCoomer.
Mr Genie rocks and is out of this world.
Keep writing
FineB
November 18th, 2017 14:16
A Genie\'s Promise
kevin browne said:
I\'m holding on as tight as I can and I\'m ready to \'just rub the bottle and strap in for a ride\' let\'s go djinn, lets fly high, my fiend because your poem has told us to. brilliantly written, need more of this please.
November 18th, 2017 05:58
kevin browne said:
I\'m holding on as tight as I can and I\'m ready to \'just rub the bottle and strap in for a ride\' let\'s go djinn, lets fly high, my fiend because your poem has told us to. brilliantly written, need more of this please.
November 18th, 2017 05:58
Me & The Dragon
Laura🌻 said:
You are the hero, Luke!
So glad you killed it!
Great write and pic!
November 14th, 2017 14:41
Laura🌻 said:
You are the hero, Luke!
So glad you killed it!
Great write and pic!
November 14th, 2017 14:41
For You
orchidee said:
I\'m responsible, you know, for Harold\'s one in the eye at Hastings (UK) in 1066. I was there in person, as I\'m millions of years old, so I say! I told him to \'Look up\' at a fateful moment, and he did! (heehee).
November 10th, 2017 03:10
orchidee said:
I\'m responsible, you know, for Harold\'s one in the eye at Hastings (UK) in 1066. I was there in person, as I\'m millions of years old, so I say! I told him to \'Look up\' at a fateful moment, and he did! (heehee).
November 10th, 2017 03:10
The Smoking Gun
Laura🌻 said:
Luke,
Wow! That’s a great write!
Emotive and heartfelt.
I can relate to the feeling of being pulled in different directions and being told...
not good enough...
not doing enough...
don’t understand...,etc.
I’m feeling that pull these days!
Stay on your path...
no matter how difficult!
~Laura~
November 8th, 2017 10:26
Laura🌻 said:
Luke,
Wow! That’s a great write!
Emotive and heartfelt.
I can relate to the feeling of being pulled in different directions and being told...
not good enough...
not doing enough...
don’t understand...,etc.
I’m feeling that pull these days!
Stay on your path...
no matter how difficult!
~Laura~
November 8th, 2017 10:26
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