Comments received on poems by LukeCoomer
Detroit Homicide
LukeCoomer said:
I want to do some kind of contest, not sure what the prize will be yet but the rules of the game are
1. Watch for poems called Detroit Homicide and if you can solve the crime before the detective does or any other player you win
2. There is no time limit and the crime will unfold over time
and don\'t worry I will make it difficult but I will give all the clues and I will worn everyone before the detective solves the crime
LukeCoomer
November 3rd, 2017 14:53
LukeCoomer said:
I want to do some kind of contest, not sure what the prize will be yet but the rules of the game are
1. Watch for poems called Detroit Homicide and if you can solve the crime before the detective does or any other player you win
2. There is no time limit and the crime will unfold over time
and don\'t worry I will make it difficult but I will give all the clues and I will worn everyone before the detective solves the crime
LukeCoomer
November 3rd, 2017 14:53
I\'m Staying
Louis Gibbs said:
This is not only impactful and beautiful, Luke, it is remarkable in the fact that it\'s a rhyme poem, but the rhyme is so well done and subtle it wasn\'t until the third read that I noticed it. Brilliant write, my friend!
November 1st, 2017 16:16
Louis Gibbs said:
This is not only impactful and beautiful, Luke, it is remarkable in the fact that it\'s a rhyme poem, but the rhyme is so well done and subtle it wasn\'t until the third read that I noticed it. Brilliant write, my friend!
November 1st, 2017 16:16
I\'m Staying
Laura🌻 said:
Luke,
This is heart wrenching!
My sympathies for the
loss of your father!
I didn’t lose my dad
So tragically...but a loss
is a loss. It hurts...a lot!
Loosing my dad was
devastating! Expressing
the loss of a loved one
is so personal and difficult
to do! You did it so
beautifully and eloquently!
I cannot stop looking at
the illustration! It’s
mesmerizing! The more
I look at it, the more it
pulls me in!
This is my favorite saver
from your writes!!!
Thank your for putting
such personal feelings
into words! This is one
write I will read every day
not only to myself...but also
to my mom!
She hasn’t been
the same ever since my
dad died!! Your write will
be very comforting!
November 1st, 2017 09:10
Laura🌻 said:
Luke,
This is heart wrenching!
My sympathies for the
loss of your father!
I didn’t lose my dad
So tragically...but a loss
is a loss. It hurts...a lot!
Loosing my dad was
devastating! Expressing
the loss of a loved one
is so personal and difficult
to do! You did it so
beautifully and eloquently!
I cannot stop looking at
the illustration! It’s
mesmerizing! The more
I look at it, the more it
pulls me in!
This is my favorite saver
from your writes!!!
Thank your for putting
such personal feelings
into words! This is one
write I will read every day
not only to myself...but also
to my mom!
She hasn’t been
the same ever since my
dad died!! Your write will
be very comforting!
November 1st, 2017 09:10
Devil\'s Night
orchidee said:
Oohh, we best stay in tonight then! I got scared of an apparition, but it was only a black cat in the coal shed! lol.
October 31st, 2017 09:11
orchidee said:
Oohh, we best stay in tonight then! I got scared of an apparition, but it was only a black cat in the coal shed! lol.
October 31st, 2017 09:11
Devil\'s Night
Laura🌻 said:
Luke,
Great imagination...
Awesome illustration...
Formidable!!
Enjoyed the read!
Thank you!
October 31st, 2017 07:11
Laura🌻 said:
Luke,
Great imagination...
Awesome illustration...
Formidable!!
Enjoyed the read!
Thank you!
October 31st, 2017 07:11
Glass Half Full
orchidee said:
Erm, not the usual glass of water there. Oops! A fine write Luke.
October 30th, 2017 09:03
orchidee said:
Erm, not the usual glass of water there. Oops! A fine write Luke.
October 30th, 2017 09:03
Glass Half Full
Christina8 said:
Always love your graphics! Great poem. You know I don\'t think love should be so hard. Sorry for what you are going through. Great write though
October 30th, 2017 08:29
Christina8 said:
Always love your graphics! Great poem. You know I don\'t think love should be so hard. Sorry for what you are going through. Great write though
October 30th, 2017 08:29
From the Ashes
Laura🌻 said:
Luke,
One of your best writings!
I love it! I could visualize
YOU as the Phoenix...
G
N
I
S
I
R
...from the ashes!
Awesome job!
October 29th, 2017 07:04
Laura🌻 said:
Luke,
One of your best writings!
I love it! I could visualize
YOU as the Phoenix...
G
N
I
S
I
R
...from the ashes!
Awesome job!
October 29th, 2017 07:04
A Storm is Coming
Laura🌻 said:
Once again, Luke, I see the
magic pen at work.
The metaphors you used to
create the images and the
artwork is ingenious!
Enjoyed the poem
in its entirety! Thank you
for sharing!
October 28th, 2017 15:22
Laura🌻 said:
Once again, Luke, I see the
magic pen at work.
The metaphors you used to
create the images and the
artwork is ingenious!
Enjoyed the poem
in its entirety! Thank you
for sharing!
October 28th, 2017 15:22
A Storm is Coming
Christina8 said:
First, excellent image of the moving snow to accompany your piece. And then you used beautiful imagery to get your point across in a wintery tale, up until the meteor shower. Great ways of telling your mood. Fantastic piece!
October 28th, 2017 14:16
Christina8 said:
First, excellent image of the moving snow to accompany your piece. And then you used beautiful imagery to get your point across in a wintery tale, up until the meteor shower. Great ways of telling your mood. Fantastic piece!
October 28th, 2017 14:16
A Storm is Coming
w c said:
i thoroughly enjoyed this poem. Very nice rhythm and rhyme!
October 28th, 2017 12:23
w c said:
i thoroughly enjoyed this poem. Very nice rhythm and rhyme!
October 28th, 2017 12:23
A Storm is Coming
orchidee said:
Will it \'blow over\' quickly, and turn Spring-like or Summer-like, maybe unexpectedly or surprisingly?!
October 28th, 2017 08:02
orchidee said:
Will it \'blow over\' quickly, and turn Spring-like or Summer-like, maybe unexpectedly or surprisingly?!
October 28th, 2017 08:02
A Storm is Coming
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - loud applause for this collection of different weather conditions which your poetic mind saw could describe states of mind. A first class write Luke - great title too and I love the moving image of snow.
October 28th, 2017 05:21
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - loud applause for this collection of different weather conditions which your poetic mind saw could describe states of mind. A first class write Luke - great title too and I love the moving image of snow.
October 28th, 2017 05:21
Path of the Poet
w c said:
Thanks LC! \"the pen is mightier than the sword\"
October 27th, 2017 11:49
w c said:
Thanks LC! \"the pen is mightier than the sword\"
October 27th, 2017 11:49
Path of the Poet
Laura🌻 said:
Another fine write, Luke!
Two of my favorite lines...
The ones that bring an ink pen
to a gun fight.
The key is as easy as asking for
a pen to borrow.
Of course , your illustrations are superb.
I like to following the Path of the Poet
October 27th, 2017 09:53
Laura🌻 said:
Another fine write, Luke!
Two of my favorite lines...
The ones that bring an ink pen
to a gun fight.
The key is as easy as asking for
a pen to borrow.
Of course , your illustrations are superb.
I like to following the Path of the Poet
October 27th, 2017 09:53
Path of the Poet
Louis Gibbs said:
\"The ones that bring an ink pen to a gunfight\" ... What a great tribute to the power of writing, Luke! Deep thoughts, and a touching, great write!
October 27th, 2017 09:43
Louis Gibbs said:
\"The ones that bring an ink pen to a gunfight\" ... What a great tribute to the power of writing, Luke! Deep thoughts, and a touching, great write!
October 27th, 2017 09:43
Touch of Madness
Fay Slimm. said:
Writing it our is a good way to clear the head Luke - - a son usually admires his Dad more when he is shown that no one is perfect on this earth.... I like the one line at a time style used in this cry in the wilderness - keep that ink flowing my friend.
October 26th, 2017 12:57
Fay Slimm. said:
Writing it our is a good way to clear the head Luke - - a son usually admires his Dad more when he is shown that no one is perfect on this earth.... I like the one line at a time style used in this cry in the wilderness - keep that ink flowing my friend.
October 26th, 2017 12:57
Touch of Madness
WL Schuett said:
A very formidable write , sons love their Fathers be the best you can be for him and it will be alright , nobody just knows how to be a Father , just be the Father you wish you had ....
October 26th, 2017 12:49
WL Schuett said:
A very formidable write , sons love their Fathers be the best you can be for him and it will be alright , nobody just knows how to be a Father , just be the Father you wish you had ....
October 26th, 2017 12:49
Touch of Madness
A.C Doomcraft said:
Really moving
I\'m not a father myself
But this really hit me
I respect your openness
October 26th, 2017 11:48
A.C Doomcraft said:
Really moving
I\'m not a father myself
But this really hit me
I respect your openness
October 26th, 2017 11:48
Touch of Madness
orchidee said:
I could do the same at times, with my daftness, and some madcap-style poems - when I\'m not singing me hymn-poems, that is!
I went barmy ages ago! lol. But seriously - we might all kick ourselves around the floor as rubbish at times (on a bad hair day?!). But you\'re a \'good man\'. A phrase that\'s sometimes just said, but it makes me feel warm inside if someone says it to me!
October 26th, 2017 11:41
orchidee said:
I could do the same at times, with my daftness, and some madcap-style poems - when I\'m not singing me hymn-poems, that is!
I went barmy ages ago! lol. But seriously - we might all kick ourselves around the floor as rubbish at times (on a bad hair day?!). But you\'re a \'good man\'. A phrase that\'s sometimes just said, but it makes me feel warm inside if someone says it to me!
October 26th, 2017 11:41
Touch of Madness
Laura🌻 said:
Your writings and artwork
show us how gifted you are!
I could never write
as well as you do...
...and your artwork...
I wouldn’t even attempt it!
You can reflect...
but then leave the dark!
Go toward that ray of light...
YOUR SON!
He is your LIGHT!
It’s a difficult journey...
I will admit!
Do it! Do it all for HIM!
October 26th, 2017 10:11
Laura🌻 said:
Your writings and artwork
show us how gifted you are!
I could never write
as well as you do...
...and your artwork...
I wouldn’t even attempt it!
You can reflect...
but then leave the dark!
Go toward that ray of light...
YOUR SON!
He is your LIGHT!
It’s a difficult journey...
I will admit!
Do it! Do it all for HIM!
October 26th, 2017 10:11
Touch of Madness
Louis Gibbs said:
Nothing more therapeutic than letting it all out in a poem, Luke. Keep writing, my friend.
October 26th, 2017 09:38
Louis Gibbs said:
Nothing more therapeutic than letting it all out in a poem, Luke. Keep writing, my friend.
October 26th, 2017 09:38
In The Gears
Christina8 said:
Excellent poem and artwork Luke! It\'s hard for all of us to express emotions, trust me. Someday you\'ll find that special someone and before you know it, you\'ll be so full of joy, you\'ll be writing so many love poems, we\'ll be going nuts! LOL
October 25th, 2017 17:09
Christina8 said:
Excellent poem and artwork Luke! It\'s hard for all of us to express emotions, trust me. Someday you\'ll find that special someone and before you know it, you\'ll be so full of joy, you\'ll be writing so many love poems, we\'ll be going nuts! LOL
October 25th, 2017 17:09
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