Comments received on poems by LukeCoomer



Touch of Madness
Laura🌻 said:

Your writings and artwork
show us how gifted you are!
I could never write
as well as you do...
...and your artwork...
I wouldn’t even attempt it!
You can reflect...
but then leave the dark!
Go toward that ray of light...
YOUR SON!
He is your LIGHT!
It’s a difficult journey...
I will admit!
Do it! Do it all for HIM!



October 26th, 2017 10:11

Touch of Madness
Louis Gibbs said:

Nothing more therapeutic than letting it all out in a poem, Luke. Keep writing, my friend.

October 26th, 2017 09:38

In The Gears
Christina8 said:

Excellent poem and artwork Luke! It\'s hard for all of us to express emotions, trust me. Someday you\'ll find that special someone and before you know it, you\'ll be so full of joy, you\'ll be writing so many love poems, we\'ll be going nuts! LOL

October 25th, 2017 17:09

In The Gears
orchidee said:

Oh, I expect it will shift! Hope it\'s not just me being naïve!

October 25th, 2017 10:09

Starchild
LukeCoomer said:

Thank you I\'m so happy so many people like it! I couldn\'t wait to be able to post to mps again for this one because I get so much love here!

October 24th, 2017 11:39

Starchild
Fay Slimm. said:

Ah - such a warm message to a well loved son - with a Dad like this I should think the lad will not stay long away from that rock his loving papa is chained to. A delightful read about letting go what my Gran called the apron strings.

October 24th, 2017 10:57

Starchild
Louis Gibbs said:

I love this one, Luke, and can relate as the father of a son of whom I\'m so proud. Well done, Sir!

October 24th, 2017 10:30

Starchild
LukeCoomer said:

Wow Laura!, I\'m honored this poem effected you in such a way! I figure it\'s a win when I write something that invokes an emotional response of any kind.
My son liked it but I don\'t think he fully understood what I was saying to him in it, maybe he will appreciate it a lot more when he\'s older
Thank you so much and I hope your kids like it too

October 24th, 2017 09:53

Starchild
Laura🌻 said:

Luke,
I enjoyed this read tremendously!
As a mom, I can relate to it. It’s difficult and painful to let our children go! But then I think ...if we gave them wings to fly, we have to let them go and hope for the best!
Your poem has touched me and is pulling at my heartstrings! Thank you for the gift! Your illustration is heavenly! This is definitely a favorite that I will definitely share ... with my children!
I couldn’t write a better one! Kudos to you my friend!
~Laura~

October 24th, 2017 08:32

Starchild
orchidee said:

Good write Luke. He should get a move on. I\'m eating the universe - galaxy, milky way. Yummy! lol.

October 24th, 2017 08:29

Wild Demons
Laura🌻 said:

Luke,
Your illustrations are extraordinary!
Liked your writing a lot.
You do have a way with words !

Often we cannot study
to find the answers.

You will conquer!
You will find
enough answers to
make that cheat sheet
for your son!


October 23rd, 2017 17:54

My Super Sweet 16
orchidee said:

Good write Luke.

October 22nd, 2017 10:33

My Super Sweet 16
Laura🌻 said:

Luke,
Blow off all the steam you want. I’m on your team!
A Metaphorically pleasing read!
Great write!

October 22nd, 2017 10:16

My Super Sweet 16
Joseph M Marion said:

Love the way you write and poems really good I like to add as friend if u like be cool

October 22nd, 2017 10:07

Breakdown
orchidee said:

A fine write Luke. If you sing like me, just sing. That\'ll scare it off for sure! heehee.

October 21st, 2017 08:24

Breakdown
Laura🌻 said:

Luke,
Sometimes I can’t stand being me either...especially when those panic attacks take over!
Good thing we’re brave enough to seal that hole...until next time!
I do agree with Martina that this writing reads like a diary! After all, if what we write is based on our experiences, it is a diary!
The illustration is awesome for this great piece of writing!

October 21st, 2017 08:18

Breakdown
Live freely said:

Very deep Luke keep writing.

October 21st, 2017 04:47

Come At Me Bro!
orchidee said:

Aww, the monster is quite cute! (lol).

October 18th, 2017 09:26

Come At Me Bro!
Laura🌻 said:

This is a great read with an awesome illustration to accompany your poem! It reminded me of Maurice Sendak’s WHERE THE WILD THINGS ARE! Max was so brave to control those “wild things”!

October 18th, 2017 07:22

Bury The Hatchet
Goldfinch60 said:

Very strong write, that last line was full of passion.

October 16th, 2017 08:06

Bury The Hatchet
orchidee said:

Doh! I had a sense that this was where the hatchet was going to end up in this poem, before I read the last line!
I was about to comment \'As long you don\'t bury it in my skull!\'

October 16th, 2017 03:17

Elephant In The Room
LukeCoomer said:

Thank you Santi,
I find both religious people and there poems very poetic I\'m just disconnected on believing personally. I\'m glad you relate another trait we share. They seem to be stacking up lol

October 15th, 2017 09:46

Elephant In The Room
orchidee said:

When I starts off me hymn-poems (fairly frequently!) I admit I\'m fairly evangelistic in some of them. But as you say, not to force it on folk.
When they hears me singing, they may not think of heaven, but may think of... erm, the other place! heehee.

October 15th, 2017 08:28

Elephant In The Room
Laura🌻 said:

Hi! I\'m new to MPS.
So I can\'t quit, since I\'ve just begun!
My favorite line from your write that says it all is...
...I am a good person and I do right by others...
You said it best!
A pleasure to have made your acquaintance!
~Laura~


October 15th, 2017 03:25

Elephant In The Room
Goldfinch60 said:

Whether you believe or not is never an issue with me, we all go our own way, I do believe but will not thrust it down peoples throats, if they want to discuss it I will so do but only as a discussion not to try and change others. All I think we need to give to each other is respect - no religion is needed for that.
Good write poetry can transcend many beliefs.

October 15th, 2017 03:05

Goodboy
LukeCoomer said:

Thank you,
This poem was inspired by soldiers being reunited with there dogs after coming home!

October 14th, 2017 18:11

Goodboy
orchidee said:

Wonderful write Luke. I\'m sure it\'s two-way. Well, cats can be man\'s best friend too maybe, in different ways! But it\'s said that dogs are. I\'m bit sentimental too. Ahhh!

October 14th, 2017 10:09

Passing Through
LukeCoomer said:

Thanks Santi,
its easiest to see the light when your surrounded by the dark

October 13th, 2017 14:27

Out Of My Hands
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

October 13th, 2017 13:29

Out Of My Hands
Louis Gibbs said:

A strong, emotional piece, well delivered, Luke! Displays the wisdom gained with age. Kudos!

October 13th, 2017 09:44

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