Comments received on poems by LukeCoomer
In The Gears
orchidee said:
Oh, I expect it will shift! Hope it\'s not just me being naïve!
October 25th, 2017 10:09
orchidee said:
Oh, I expect it will shift! Hope it\'s not just me being naïve!
October 25th, 2017 10:09
Starchild
LukeCoomer said:
Thank you I\'m so happy so many people like it! I couldn\'t wait to be able to post to mps again for this one because I get so much love here!
October 24th, 2017 11:39
LukeCoomer said:
Thank you I\'m so happy so many people like it! I couldn\'t wait to be able to post to mps again for this one because I get so much love here!
October 24th, 2017 11:39
Starchild
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - such a warm message to a well loved son - with a Dad like this I should think the lad will not stay long away from that rock his loving papa is chained to. A delightful read about letting go what my Gran called the apron strings.
October 24th, 2017 10:57
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - such a warm message to a well loved son - with a Dad like this I should think the lad will not stay long away from that rock his loving papa is chained to. A delightful read about letting go what my Gran called the apron strings.
October 24th, 2017 10:57
Starchild
Louis Gibbs said:
I love this one, Luke, and can relate as the father of a son of whom I\'m so proud. Well done, Sir!
October 24th, 2017 10:30
Louis Gibbs said:
I love this one, Luke, and can relate as the father of a son of whom I\'m so proud. Well done, Sir!
October 24th, 2017 10:30
Starchild
LukeCoomer said:
Wow Laura!, I\'m honored this poem effected you in such a way! I figure it\'s a win when I write something that invokes an emotional response of any kind.
My son liked it but I don\'t think he fully understood what I was saying to him in it, maybe he will appreciate it a lot more when he\'s older
Thank you so much and I hope your kids like it too
October 24th, 2017 09:53
LukeCoomer said:
Wow Laura!, I\'m honored this poem effected you in such a way! I figure it\'s a win when I write something that invokes an emotional response of any kind.
My son liked it but I don\'t think he fully understood what I was saying to him in it, maybe he will appreciate it a lot more when he\'s older
Thank you so much and I hope your kids like it too
October 24th, 2017 09:53
Starchild
Laura🌻 said:
Luke,
I enjoyed this read tremendously!
As a mom, I can relate to it. It’s difficult and painful to let our children go! But then I think ...if we gave them wings to fly, we have to let them go and hope for the best!
Your poem has touched me and is pulling at my heartstrings! Thank you for the gift! Your illustration is heavenly! This is definitely a favorite that I will definitely share ... with my children!
I couldn’t write a better one! Kudos to you my friend!
~Laura~
October 24th, 2017 08:32
Laura🌻 said:
Luke,
I enjoyed this read tremendously!
As a mom, I can relate to it. It’s difficult and painful to let our children go! But then I think ...if we gave them wings to fly, we have to let them go and hope for the best!
Your poem has touched me and is pulling at my heartstrings! Thank you for the gift! Your illustration is heavenly! This is definitely a favorite that I will definitely share ... with my children!
I couldn’t write a better one! Kudos to you my friend!
~Laura~
October 24th, 2017 08:32
Starchild
orchidee said:
Good write Luke. He should get a move on. I\'m eating the universe - galaxy, milky way. Yummy! lol.
October 24th, 2017 08:29
orchidee said:
Good write Luke. He should get a move on. I\'m eating the universe - galaxy, milky way. Yummy! lol.
October 24th, 2017 08:29
Wild Demons
Laura🌻 said:
Luke,
Your illustrations are extraordinary!
Liked your writing a lot.
You do have a way with words !
Often we cannot study
to find the answers.
You will conquer!
You will find
enough answers to
make that cheat sheet
for your son!
October 23rd, 2017 17:54
Laura🌻 said:
Luke,
Your illustrations are extraordinary!
Liked your writing a lot.
You do have a way with words !
Often we cannot study
to find the answers.
You will conquer!
You will find
enough answers to
make that cheat sheet
for your son!
October 23rd, 2017 17:54
My Super Sweet 16
Laura🌻 said:
Luke,
Blow off all the steam you want. I’m on your team!
A Metaphorically pleasing read!
Great write!
October 22nd, 2017 10:16
Laura🌻 said:
Luke,
Blow off all the steam you want. I’m on your team!
A Metaphorically pleasing read!
Great write!
October 22nd, 2017 10:16
My Super Sweet 16
Joseph M Marion said:
Love the way you write and poems really good I like to add as friend if u like be cool
October 22nd, 2017 10:07
Joseph M Marion said:
Love the way you write and poems really good I like to add as friend if u like be cool
October 22nd, 2017 10:07
Breakdown
orchidee said:
A fine write Luke. If you sing like me, just sing. That\'ll scare it off for sure! heehee.
October 21st, 2017 08:24
orchidee said:
A fine write Luke. If you sing like me, just sing. That\'ll scare it off for sure! heehee.
October 21st, 2017 08:24
Breakdown
Laura🌻 said:
Luke,
Sometimes I can’t stand being me either...especially when those panic attacks take over!
Good thing we’re brave enough to seal that hole...until next time!
I do agree with Martina that this writing reads like a diary! After all, if what we write is based on our experiences, it is a diary!
The illustration is awesome for this great piece of writing!
October 21st, 2017 08:18
Laura🌻 said:
Luke,
Sometimes I can’t stand being me either...especially when those panic attacks take over!
Good thing we’re brave enough to seal that hole...until next time!
I do agree with Martina that this writing reads like a diary! After all, if what we write is based on our experiences, it is a diary!
The illustration is awesome for this great piece of writing!
October 21st, 2017 08:18
Come At Me Bro!
Laura🌻 said:
This is a great read with an awesome illustration to accompany your poem! It reminded me of Maurice Sendak’s WHERE THE WILD THINGS ARE! Max was so brave to control those “wild things”!
October 18th, 2017 07:22
Laura🌻 said:
This is a great read with an awesome illustration to accompany your poem! It reminded me of Maurice Sendak’s WHERE THE WILD THINGS ARE! Max was so brave to control those “wild things”!
October 18th, 2017 07:22
Bury The Hatchet
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong write, that last line was full of passion.
October 16th, 2017 08:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong write, that last line was full of passion.
October 16th, 2017 08:06
Bury The Hatchet
orchidee said:
Doh! I had a sense that this was where the hatchet was going to end up in this poem, before I read the last line!
I was about to comment \'As long you don\'t bury it in my skull!\'
October 16th, 2017 03:17
orchidee said:
Doh! I had a sense that this was where the hatchet was going to end up in this poem, before I read the last line!
I was about to comment \'As long you don\'t bury it in my skull!\'
October 16th, 2017 03:17
Elephant In The Room
LukeCoomer said:
Thank you Santi,
I find both religious people and there poems very poetic I\'m just disconnected on believing personally. I\'m glad you relate another trait we share. They seem to be stacking up lol
October 15th, 2017 09:46
LukeCoomer said:
Thank you Santi,
I find both religious people and there poems very poetic I\'m just disconnected on believing personally. I\'m glad you relate another trait we share. They seem to be stacking up lol
October 15th, 2017 09:46
Elephant In The Room
orchidee said:
When I starts off me hymn-poems (fairly frequently!) I admit I\'m fairly evangelistic in some of them. But as you say, not to force it on folk.
When they hears me singing, they may not think of heaven, but may think of... erm, the other place! heehee.
October 15th, 2017 08:28
orchidee said:
When I starts off me hymn-poems (fairly frequently!) I admit I\'m fairly evangelistic in some of them. But as you say, not to force it on folk.
When they hears me singing, they may not think of heaven, but may think of... erm, the other place! heehee.
October 15th, 2017 08:28
Elephant In The Room
Laura🌻 said:
Hi! I\'m new to MPS.
So I can\'t quit, since I\'ve just begun!
My favorite line from your write that says it all is...
...I am a good person and I do right by others...
You said it best!
A pleasure to have made your acquaintance!
~Laura~
October 15th, 2017 03:25
Laura🌻 said:
Hi! I\'m new to MPS.
So I can\'t quit, since I\'ve just begun!
My favorite line from your write that says it all is...
...I am a good person and I do right by others...
You said it best!
A pleasure to have made your acquaintance!
~Laura~
October 15th, 2017 03:25
Elephant In The Room
Goldfinch60 said:
Whether you believe or not is never an issue with me, we all go our own way, I do believe but will not thrust it down peoples throats, if they want to discuss it I will so do but only as a discussion not to try and change others. All I think we need to give to each other is respect - no religion is needed for that.
Good write poetry can transcend many beliefs.
October 15th, 2017 03:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Whether you believe or not is never an issue with me, we all go our own way, I do believe but will not thrust it down peoples throats, if they want to discuss it I will so do but only as a discussion not to try and change others. All I think we need to give to each other is respect - no religion is needed for that.
Good write poetry can transcend many beliefs.
October 15th, 2017 03:05
Goodboy
LukeCoomer said:
Thank you,
This poem was inspired by soldiers being reunited with there dogs after coming home!
October 14th, 2017 18:11
LukeCoomer said:
Thank you,
This poem was inspired by soldiers being reunited with there dogs after coming home!
October 14th, 2017 18:11
Goodboy
orchidee said:
Wonderful write Luke. I\'m sure it\'s two-way. Well, cats can be man\'s best friend too maybe, in different ways! But it\'s said that dogs are. I\'m bit sentimental too. Ahhh!
October 14th, 2017 10:09
orchidee said:
Wonderful write Luke. I\'m sure it\'s two-way. Well, cats can be man\'s best friend too maybe, in different ways! But it\'s said that dogs are. I\'m bit sentimental too. Ahhh!
October 14th, 2017 10:09
Passing Through
LukeCoomer said:
Thanks Santi,
its easiest to see the light when your surrounded by the dark
October 13th, 2017 14:27
LukeCoomer said:
Thanks Santi,
its easiest to see the light when your surrounded by the dark
October 13th, 2017 14:27
Out Of My Hands
Louis Gibbs said:
A strong, emotional piece, well delivered, Luke! Displays the wisdom gained with age. Kudos!
October 13th, 2017 09:44
Louis Gibbs said:
A strong, emotional piece, well delivered, Luke! Displays the wisdom gained with age. Kudos!
October 13th, 2017 09:44
We\'re All Mad Here!
LukeCoomer said:
Santi,
Great thank you! I was hoping you would like it!
October 11th, 2017 11:38
LukeCoomer said:
Santi,
Great thank you! I was hoping you would like it!
October 11th, 2017 11:38
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