Comments received on poems by Mugsdaddy



Just an Organ?
Fay Slimm. said:

Loud applause for this wise advice in such a beautiful poem. Such a good reminder of the heart\'s value.

October 4th, 2017 06:09

so many ask why
FredPeyer said:

Mugs, your short poem about this horrible, senseless tragedy in Las Vegas shows both the pain and the heroism. What makes a man do something like this? Thank you for posting it!

October 3rd, 2017 12:29

so many ask why
Louis Gibbs said:

Another sign of the (end?) times. Good post, Mugs.

October 3rd, 2017 10:09

so many ask why
Poetic Dan said:

You made think of a post I forgot
Stuggled to find it, nearly give up
Then I found it, how silly of me
It\'s called pen warriors needed
And that you just became too me
After reading your words
I\'d like all weapons to disappear!


October 3rd, 2017 02:18

so many ask why
Goldfinch60 said:

Strong write about an appalling atrocity. I agree with Michael about the gun laws in the US.

October 3rd, 2017 01:49

so many ask why
Michael Edwards said:

There is much debate here in the UK where we find the US gun laws beyond comprehension. Lets hope an answer is found soon but I doubt it. This is a super commentary on this tragic event.

October 3rd, 2017 01:10

The Wellspring (Not a Poem)
FredPeyer said:

Mugs you got the blood boiling with your tale. And that last sentence was totally unexpected, but I have to agree with what it says.

October 2nd, 2017 20:44

The Wellspring (Not a Poem)
orchidee said:

Ohh, should be 18+ poem I think.
now that\'s worse than KP (Santita knows! lol.

October 2nd, 2017 11:35

The Arch-Angel (not a poem)
FredPeyer said:

An interesting and exciting tale full of twists and turns! You and Martina seem both to descend to the underworld here!
Great writing, good tension, great subject!

October 1st, 2017 15:33

The Arch-Angel (not a poem)
Michael Edwards said:

Well crafted Mugsdaddy

October 1st, 2017 12:15

The Arch-Angel (not a poem)
Mugsdaddy said:

Thank you but your story is far better and so well written mine pales in comparison.

October 1st, 2017 11:36

Tasty Prey (Rictameter)
FredPeyer said:

Great writing, Mugsdaddy! And since I can only count to three, I did not bother checking your count! :-)
Very sensual poem, beautifully erotic! Just have an anatomy question: How do you slide \'down\' from knee to thigh?

September 27th, 2017 13:02

Tasty Prey (Rictameter)
Michael Edwards said:

Counts okay to me M. Strictly the first two syllables and the last two should be the same but otherwise a darn good write.

September 27th, 2017 08:42

Nina
FredPeyer said:

My condolences, Mugsdaddy. Your poem is a lovely tribute to your grandma. And it is so true, they all live on inside us and inside our children, and so forth, as will we one day!

September 26th, 2017 12:29

Nina
Michael Edwards said:

The love is shown in these super words.

September 26th, 2017 07:07

Government (Mirrored edone)
FredPeyer said:

Mugsdaddy, this is AWESOME! Just looking at it makes me dizzy! Kudos!

September 26th, 2017 00:01

Government (Mirrored edone)
Michael Edwards said:

You sure aint disowned - this takes it to a new level which I\'ll have a go at sometime - Great work and I\'d give you a toffee if I had one :)

September 25th, 2017 00:38

She Saved Me
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, loved the ending.

September 24th, 2017 00:33

She Saved Me
Michael Edwards said:

This reads so well and, yes, I smiled.

September 23rd, 2017 13:10

She Saved Me
Mugsdaddy said:

Thank you to Martina, I am glad you enjoyed it kind of a dark comedy. Hope you smiled.
Mugsdaddy

September 23rd, 2017 09:52

The Wisp
lasergraph said:

Slaying demons can be exhausting, glad you were fit for the task.

September 22nd, 2017 08:32

The Wisp
Michael Edwards said:

From dark to light - a great write M

September 22nd, 2017 02:18

The Wisp
Goldfinch60 said:

Superb dark write with a great ending.

September 22nd, 2017 01:43

The Wisp
FredPeyer said:

Your imagination is incredible and so is your writing. Like PD, I do lover the ending.

September 22nd, 2017 01:21

The Wisp
Poetic Dan said:

Beautifully chilling, loved the ending.

September 22nd, 2017 01:02

Taming of the Beast
dusk arising said:

You turned this around nicely and quite surprised me. This is a hero gets his girl story combined with beauty and the beast.
Good writing and riveting.

September 21st, 2017 17:07

Taming of the Beast
FredPeyer said:

This one really gripped me, M, and I would never have guessed the ending. After all the gore, you end with something beautiful and inspiring. Very well written!

September 21st, 2017 14:57

Taming of the Beast
Mugsdaddy said:

You are too kind.
Mugsy

September 21st, 2017 11:15

Taming of the Beast
Fay Slimm. said:

A power read with an amazing last line - a lead to follow from dark to light -
- - taming the beast indeed M.

September 21st, 2017 02:27

Taming of the Beast
Michael Edwards said:

Well crafted M

September 21st, 2017 01:38

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