Comments received on poems by Abora

emotionally unavailable
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

When the door i locked, no-one can get in
Like the emotion

June 28th, 2020 03:53

are you a tree?
Neville said:

very interesting indeed....

September 19th, 2019 07:51

another poem about sadness and pastries
dusk arising said:

I am picturing you writing this in a pleasant whiskey augmented aura when upon the breeze u catch a scent which turns your mind to lemon tart.
The graphite has me puzzled i admit.

June 17th, 2019 10:19

another poem about sadness and pastries

HI BS : ANGELA here from New Zealand (I*m on a Work Exchange). Its 10:30 pm here and time for bed after a hard days work in the CLINIC (Im a PHYSIOTERRORIST !) Love NEW YORK STATE especially in the Fall ! Love the STRUCTURE & SUBSTANCE of your elegant Poem and the oblique references to : Your Ancestors - Whiskey - Lemon Tart with a crumbly crust & wispy cream & sacrosant citrus mint jelly ! Of such things are dreams made. Be glad you*re filled with GRAPHITE which is a lubricant : and not CARBONS other allotrope DIAMOND which would surely grind you to a halt !

BLESSINGS & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA !
Please check my Poem on POSITIVITY ~ Thanks A !

June 17th, 2019 04:52

another poem about sadness and pastries
Neville said:

I really enjoyed these words...


June 17th, 2019 04:36

glass onion
lonelyraccoon said:

This is a very interesting peace, the way you describe all these things blend together very well, well done

May 27th, 2019 19:00

exactly one vicious time loop
Nicholas Browning said:

A bit of a bittersweet melody radiating from this. I did enjoy the read, and the message is crystal clear.
Best regards.

March 18th, 2019 00:30

i think of you every time i have a night terror
sylviasearcher said:

This piece made me feel a familiar pain, if it existed at all.

Good write 🌟

February 18th, 2019 02:11

online dating
dusk arising said:

Strange what the web can bring out in folk.

February 4th, 2019 01:20

joker’s cough
Neville said:

Now that aint funny...

December 29th, 2018 02:00

marble garages worn by feet in zen
Neville said:

I wish I knew why I like these words so much.. I now have a life time left to ponder and seek the truth...

December 28th, 2018 08:51

Neville said:

kinda creepy but I guess it is meant to be.. there are certainly some very good lines within this little composition... the concluding line is enough to cause nightmares...

December 19th, 2018 06:37

empty bones
sylviasearcher said:

So beautifully melancholic, it was like a warm drink which numbed my sorrow by tasting just like it

December 6th, 2018 02:49

slow rot
Lorna said:

Gruesome and so powerful

November 4th, 2018 04:23

idle humidity
Lorna said:

Good grief where did you come from...... a new kerouac........

November 4th, 2018 04:22

clement weather
Lorna said:

I think your poems should be movies..... love the quirky......

November 4th, 2018 04:21

an open letter to the town of Kane, PA
Lorna said:

Wow....... another one that caught me. I think Iove your writing.

November 4th, 2018 04:18

coyote escapism
Lorna said:

This is really intriguing...... love it.

November 4th, 2018 04:16

coyote escapism
Medusx said:

I love it.

September 17th, 2018 20:59

an open letter to the town of Kane, PA
Clark said:

I love this because you do not tell with your writing, you show. I admire that kind of imagery. Great write!

August 14th, 2018 22:35

trash fire at alcatraz
onepauly said:

maybe that\'s why they say
ashes to ashes.

August 12th, 2018 04:35

my tarot cards led me astray
orchidee said:

Oh, they only lead you down dark paths, even if the way may seem lightened at first.

July 17th, 2018 01:50

the park
Stan Rodriguez said:

interesting write - not sure how I feel about it -nice imagery- thank you for sharing.

July 15th, 2018 18:43

liquid brines
dusk arising said:

Hey, theres wonderful wildlife in a swamp and swamps change with the seasons.
But next spring the swamp will be just a bit different to last spring.
And so life goes on, ever changing, sometimes very slowly, sometimes staggeringly fast. No rules are there?
I enjoyed reading your piece today. Deep and murky.

July 7th, 2018 05:03

spake directly to the skull
minak said:

love this

June 13th, 2018 23:25

truly wonderful advice
Michael Edwards said:

Love this, a favourite for sure and a smile to start the day.

June 9th, 2018 00:11

truly horrible advice
dusk arising said:

Hey you forgot \"get a job, buy a car, take a drive, see how the other half live - aspire!\"

June 8th, 2018 14:06

burn your dead eyes on a pyre of bones
MLHnow said:

Your words bespeak a heart and mind big!

May 21st, 2018 11:58

MLHnow said:

Wow !You have brought me along with you
Very beautiful and full poem MLH

May 21st, 2018 11:56

pines and canaries
SLR said:

You paint a vivid picture. Grass, so much grass, laze about the roots. Sounds great. Good post.

May 13th, 2018 22:43

Page 1 of 212»

« Return to the profile of Abora