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Andrew Charles Forrest said:
When the door i locked, no-one can get in
Ouch!
Like the emotion
thanks
June 28th, 2020 03:53
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
When the door i locked, no-one can get in
Ouch!
Like the emotion
thanks
June 28th, 2020 03:53
another poem about sadness and pastries
dusk arising said:
I am picturing you writing this in a pleasant whiskey augmented aura when upon the breeze u catch a scent which turns your mind to lemon tart.
The graphite has me puzzled i admit.
June 17th, 2019 10:19
dusk arising said:
I am picturing you writing this in a pleasant whiskey augmented aura when upon the breeze u catch a scent which turns your mind to lemon tart.
The graphite has me puzzled i admit.
June 17th, 2019 10:19
another poem about sadness and pastries
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI BS : ANGELA here from New Zealand (I*m on a Work Exchange). Its 10:30 pm here and time for bed after a hard days work in the CLINIC (Im a PHYSIOTERRORIST !) Love NEW YORK STATE especially in the Fall ! Love the STRUCTURE & SUBSTANCE of your elegant Poem and the oblique references to : Your Ancestors - Whiskey - Lemon Tart with a crumbly crust & wispy cream & sacrosant citrus mint jelly ! Of such things are dreams made. Be glad you*re filled with GRAPHITE which is a lubricant : and not CARBONS other allotrope DIAMOND which would surely grind you to a halt !
BLESSINGS & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA !
Please check my Poem on POSITIVITY ~ Thanks A !
June 17th, 2019 04:52
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI BS : ANGELA here from New Zealand (I*m on a Work Exchange). Its 10:30 pm here and time for bed after a hard days work in the CLINIC (Im a PHYSIOTERRORIST !) Love NEW YORK STATE especially in the Fall ! Love the STRUCTURE & SUBSTANCE of your elegant Poem and the oblique references to : Your Ancestors - Whiskey - Lemon Tart with a crumbly crust & wispy cream & sacrosant citrus mint jelly ! Of such things are dreams made. Be glad you*re filled with GRAPHITE which is a lubricant : and not CARBONS other allotrope DIAMOND which would surely grind you to a halt !
BLESSINGS & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA !
Please check my Poem on POSITIVITY ~ Thanks A !
June 17th, 2019 04:52
another poem about sadness and pastries
Neville said:
I really enjoyed these words...
Neville
June 17th, 2019 04:36
Neville said:
I really enjoyed these words...
Neville
June 17th, 2019 04:36
glass onion
lonelyraccoon said:
This is a very interesting peace, the way you describe all these things blend together very well, well done
May 27th, 2019 19:00
lonelyraccoon said:
This is a very interesting peace, the way you describe all these things blend together very well, well done
May 27th, 2019 19:00
exactly one vicious time loop
Nicholas Browning said:
A bit of a bittersweet melody radiating from this. I did enjoy the read, and the message is crystal clear.
Best regards.
March 18th, 2019 00:30
Nicholas Browning said:
A bit of a bittersweet melody radiating from this. I did enjoy the read, and the message is crystal clear.
Best regards.
March 18th, 2019 00:30
i think of you every time i have a night terror
sylviasearcher said:
This piece made me feel a familiar pain, if it existed at all.
Good write 🌟
February 18th, 2019 02:11
sylviasearcher said:
This piece made me feel a familiar pain, if it existed at all.
Good write 🌟
February 18th, 2019 02:11
online dating
dusk arising said:
Strange what the web can bring out in folk.
February 4th, 2019 01:20
dusk arising said:
Strange what the web can bring out in folk.
February 4th, 2019 01:20
marble garages worn by feet in zen
Neville said:
I wish I knew why I like these words so much.. I now have a life time left to ponder and seek the truth...
December 28th, 2018 08:51
Neville said:
I wish I knew why I like these words so much.. I now have a life time left to ponder and seek the truth...
December 28th, 2018 08:51
floorboards
Neville said:
kinda creepy but I guess it is meant to be.. there are certainly some very good lines within this little composition... the concluding line is enough to cause nightmares...
December 19th, 2018 06:37
Neville said:
kinda creepy but I guess it is meant to be.. there are certainly some very good lines within this little composition... the concluding line is enough to cause nightmares...
December 19th, 2018 06:37
empty bones
sylviasearcher said:
So beautifully melancholic, it was like a warm drink which numbed my sorrow by tasting just like it
December 6th, 2018 02:49
sylviasearcher said:
So beautifully melancholic, it was like a warm drink which numbed my sorrow by tasting just like it
December 6th, 2018 02:49
idle humidity
Lorna said:
Good grief where did you come from...... a new kerouac........
November 4th, 2018 04:22
Lorna said:
Good grief where did you come from...... a new kerouac........
November 4th, 2018 04:22
clement weather
Lorna said:
I think your poems should be movies..... love the quirky......
November 4th, 2018 04:21
Lorna said:
I think your poems should be movies..... love the quirky......
November 4th, 2018 04:21
an open letter to the town of Kane, PA
Lorna said:
Wow....... another one that caught me. I think Iove your writing.
November 4th, 2018 04:18
Lorna said:
Wow....... another one that caught me. I think Iove your writing.
November 4th, 2018 04:18
an open letter to the town of Kane, PA
Clark said:
I love this because you do not tell with your writing, you show. I admire that kind of imagery. Great write!
August 14th, 2018 22:35
Clark said:
I love this because you do not tell with your writing, you show. I admire that kind of imagery. Great write!
August 14th, 2018 22:35
trash fire at alcatraz
onepauly said:
maybe that\'s why they say
ashes to ashes.
August 12th, 2018 04:35
onepauly said:
maybe that\'s why they say
ashes to ashes.
August 12th, 2018 04:35
my tarot cards led me astray
orchidee said:
Oh, they only lead you down dark paths, even if the way may seem lightened at first.
July 17th, 2018 01:50
orchidee said:
Oh, they only lead you down dark paths, even if the way may seem lightened at first.
July 17th, 2018 01:50
the park
Stan Rodriguez said:
interesting write - not sure how I feel about it -nice imagery- thank you for sharing.
July 15th, 2018 18:43
Stan Rodriguez said:
interesting write - not sure how I feel about it -nice imagery- thank you for sharing.
July 15th, 2018 18:43
liquid brines
dusk arising said:
Hey, theres wonderful wildlife in a swamp and swamps change with the seasons.
But next spring the swamp will be just a bit different to last spring.
And so life goes on, ever changing, sometimes very slowly, sometimes staggeringly fast. No rules are there?
I enjoyed reading your piece today. Deep and murky.
July 7th, 2018 05:03
dusk arising said:
Hey, theres wonderful wildlife in a swamp and swamps change with the seasons.
But next spring the swamp will be just a bit different to last spring.
And so life goes on, ever changing, sometimes very slowly, sometimes staggeringly fast. No rules are there?
I enjoyed reading your piece today. Deep and murky.
July 7th, 2018 05:03
truly wonderful advice
Michael Edwards said:
Love this, a favourite for sure and a smile to start the day.
June 9th, 2018 00:11
Michael Edwards said:
Love this, a favourite for sure and a smile to start the day.
June 9th, 2018 00:11
truly horrible advice
dusk arising said:
Hey you forgot \"get a job, buy a car, take a drive, see how the other half live - aspire!\"
June 8th, 2018 14:06
dusk arising said:
Hey you forgot \"get a job, buy a car, take a drive, see how the other half live - aspire!\"
June 8th, 2018 14:06
burn your dead eyes on a pyre of bones
MLHnow said:
Your words bespeak a heart and mind big!
MLH
May 21st, 2018 11:58
MLHnow said:
Your words bespeak a heart and mind big!
MLH
May 21st, 2018 11:58
blood
MLHnow said:
Wow !You have brought me along with you
Very beautiful and full poem MLH
May 21st, 2018 11:56
MLHnow said:
Wow !You have brought me along with you
Very beautiful and full poem MLH
May 21st, 2018 11:56
pines and canaries
SLR said:
You paint a vivid picture. Grass, so much grass, laze about the roots. Sounds great. Good post.
May 13th, 2018 22:43
SLR said:
You paint a vivid picture. Grass, so much grass, laze about the roots. Sounds great. Good post.
May 13th, 2018 22:43
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