Comments received on poems by G84
I Cant Fix You
Poets Dream said:
My dad would also get drunk and it was terrifying coming home to him from school. I would sneak up to my room while he had a drink in hand and the TV blaring loudly in his cold face… And this poem just really hit something deep.
January 9th, 2023 21:04
Poets Dream said:
My dad would also get drunk and it was terrifying coming home to him from school. I would sneak up to my room while he had a drink in hand and the TV blaring loudly in his cold face… And this poem just really hit something deep.
January 9th, 2023 21:04
I Cant Fix You
PurpleGlasses said:
I can\'t imagine what you must have gone through. But i think you found the right words to describe the pain, regret and worry.
I hope it gets better
January 9th, 2023 17:40
PurpleGlasses said:
I can\'t imagine what you must have gone through. But i think you found the right words to describe the pain, regret and worry.
I hope it gets better
January 9th, 2023 17:40
Paint
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Nice read ) I like your words
October 4th, 2021 15:53
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Nice read ) I like your words
October 4th, 2021 15:53
The Golden Season
Jennifer Martin said:
Absolutely lovely poem! Your use of imagery is beautifully accomplished!
September 11th, 2021 15:55
Jennifer Martin said:
Absolutely lovely poem! Your use of imagery is beautifully accomplished!
September 11th, 2021 15:55
The Golden Season
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I like the personification in this .., lovely poem . A season dancing and romance )
September 11th, 2021 14:54
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I like the personification in this .., lovely poem . A season dancing and romance )
September 11th, 2021 14:54
Reborn
MaddieJ said:
Wow such intentional words and images that you write here. I enjoyed the artistry in your arrangement and tone as well as relate to this darkness that you speak of. It does get better with time! You are so right! I am glad this is in the past, but see that even in the dark, you had talent!
June 11th, 2020 17:48
MaddieJ said:
Wow such intentional words and images that you write here. I enjoyed the artistry in your arrangement and tone as well as relate to this darkness that you speak of. It does get better with time! You are so right! I am glad this is in the past, but see that even in the dark, you had talent!
June 11th, 2020 17:48
Awoke
Goldfinch60 said:
That internal voice can show us the way but many do not listen to it. The way forward is there for us all.
December 16th, 2019 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
That internal voice can show us the way but many do not listen to it. The way forward is there for us all.
December 16th, 2019 01:12
Patiently Impatient
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write G84, understanding all about each other is the key to any full relationship.
November 24th, 2019 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write G84, understanding all about each other is the key to any full relationship.
November 24th, 2019 01:48
Patiently Impatient
FredPeyer said:
Communication is the key, but sometimes we need to listen to the silence, because there are answers in silence too. Very well written G84!
November 23rd, 2019 14:01
FredPeyer said:
Communication is the key, but sometimes we need to listen to the silence, because there are answers in silence too. Very well written G84!
November 23rd, 2019 14:01
I Held Your Hand
dusk arising said:
I am such an advocate of pieces recounting these times....
Forever your words will return you to this magic time and place from where you grew.
September 4th, 2019 11:11
dusk arising said:
I am such an advocate of pieces recounting these times....
Forever your words will return you to this magic time and place from where you grew.
September 4th, 2019 11:11
I Held Your Hand
Clara said:
G84,
This is simply wonderful. To look back at where it all started, where you fell in love and to always remember that time and how you felt when things get tough. Such a warm and comforting poem about love and family.
CLARA X
September 4th, 2019 08:18
Clara said:
G84,
This is simply wonderful. To look back at where it all started, where you fell in love and to always remember that time and how you felt when things get tough. Such a warm and comforting poem about love and family.
CLARA X
September 4th, 2019 08:18
I Held Your Hand
Fay Slimm. said:
A treasured memory and told with poetic rhyme the place will ever be special to you and your wife - thanks for sharing it. Love is what every family needs.
September 3rd, 2019 15:57
Fay Slimm. said:
A treasured memory and told with poetic rhyme the place will ever be special to you and your wife - thanks for sharing it. Love is what every family needs.
September 3rd, 2019 15:57
The Abyss
Clara said:
G84,
It takes such strength to come up from this. You can sense the journey, the emotions and the power of self will you employed to get you there. A great read. A story of self resilience.
CLARA X
September 3rd, 2019 08:42
Clara said:
G84,
It takes such strength to come up from this. You can sense the journey, the emotions and the power of self will you employed to get you there. A great read. A story of self resilience.
CLARA X
September 3rd, 2019 08:42
Child of Mine
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Great write G84. Family is monumental and the seed of happiness and joy!
May 14th, 2019 20:38
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Great write G84. Family is monumental and the seed of happiness and joy!
May 14th, 2019 20:38
The Climb
dusk arising said:
Life and lifes have taught me thus. It is not the high one achieves by which we are judged by the wise. Rather the obstacle we overcame along the way.
I agree, never stop.
A good, positive, compelling piece.
May 7th, 2019 17:21
dusk arising said:
Life and lifes have taught me thus. It is not the high one achieves by which we are judged by the wise. Rather the obstacle we overcame along the way.
I agree, never stop.
A good, positive, compelling piece.
May 7th, 2019 17:21
The Climb
Neville said:
that\'s the spirit sir.... and nicely penned too..... Neville
May 7th, 2019 07:33
Neville said:
that\'s the spirit sir.... and nicely penned too..... Neville
May 7th, 2019 07:33
Rain
Brycycle said:
Although I don’t like to be in rain, it’s very satisfying to watch from inside. Nice write
May 6th, 2019 08:48
Brycycle said:
Although I don’t like to be in rain, it’s very satisfying to watch from inside. Nice write
May 6th, 2019 08:48
Depth
orchidee said:
Yet I suppose in life some may know each other only at a shallow level. \'How are you?\' \'I\'m fine\', sort of thing. I think it\'s because we don\'t reveal everything to everyone, and need not do so.
April 13th, 2019 04:44
orchidee said:
Yet I suppose in life some may know each other only at a shallow level. \'How are you?\' \'I\'m fine\', sort of thing. I think it\'s because we don\'t reveal everything to everyone, and need not do so.
April 13th, 2019 04:44
Rise
Fay Slimm. said:
Good and solid advice for those who want to find positive thinking. A memorable red.
March 15th, 2019 07:51
Fay Slimm. said:
Good and solid advice for those who want to find positive thinking. A memorable red.
March 15th, 2019 07:51
Paint
Nicholas Browning said:
True, I can see how that would influence someone. Nice read.
March 14th, 2019 01:10
Nicholas Browning said:
True, I can see how that would influence someone. Nice read.
March 14th, 2019 01:10
THIS ISNT MY WORK...
Goldfinch60 said:
This was well worth sharing with us, a very moving poem.
November 21st, 2018 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
This was well worth sharing with us, a very moving poem.
November 21st, 2018 01:47
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