Comments received on poems by ForeverJesus7
The Woman On The Plane
orchidee said:
Good write Forever. Yes, we can\'t get off a train/boat/plane, etc until it stops/lands/comes into port, etc. So we\'re in an enclosed world for the duration of the trip.
January 30th, 2018 02:45
orchidee said:
Good write Forever. Yes, we can\'t get off a train/boat/plane, etc until it stops/lands/comes into port, etc. So we\'re in an enclosed world for the duration of the trip.
January 30th, 2018 02:45
Criticism
Aislinn Wilson said:
You will never meet someone without bias no matter how much they may boast it.
January 29th, 2018 13:51
Aislinn Wilson said:
You will never meet someone without bias no matter how much they may boast it.
January 29th, 2018 13:51
Criticism
dusk arising said:
Quite nicely presented. Some people just have to be negative don\'t they and then there are those who just proffer a pointless positive comment. Until one can make a judgement upon where the critic stands in this regard there is little point in bothering to acknowledge any criticism.
Constructive criticism is ok but..... in my book i\'d say just get on with it and do it your way. Nobody else has your viewpoint or your particular style. Be you.
January 29th, 2018 12:55
dusk arising said:
Quite nicely presented. Some people just have to be negative don\'t they and then there are those who just proffer a pointless positive comment. Until one can make a judgement upon where the critic stands in this regard there is little point in bothering to acknowledge any criticism.
Constructive criticism is ok but..... in my book i\'d say just get on with it and do it your way. Nobody else has your viewpoint or your particular style. Be you.
January 29th, 2018 12:55
Criticism
orchidee said:
But I know what you mean. I don\'t feel you are being \'preachy\' in your poem, which is good. I mean, preaching is preaching, and poetry is poetry!
January 29th, 2018 07:56
orchidee said:
But I know what you mean. I don\'t feel you are being \'preachy\' in your poem, which is good. I mean, preaching is preaching, and poetry is poetry!
January 29th, 2018 07:56
Criticism
orchidee said:
I\'m only gonna criticise that I never seen it spelt as \'critisize\' before! (heehee).
January 29th, 2018 07:55
orchidee said:
I\'m only gonna criticise that I never seen it spelt as \'critisize\' before! (heehee).
January 29th, 2018 07:55
How Did We Get This Far 2
orchidee said:
Well, I may know when it all started - with Adam and Eve, and the forbidden tree. Dunno if it was an apple tree or what. The record (the Bible) does not say.
I don\'t think it\'s suddenly become \'The bad days\'.
January 28th, 2018 14:07
orchidee said:
Well, I may know when it all started - with Adam and Eve, and the forbidden tree. Dunno if it was an apple tree or what. The record (the Bible) does not say.
I don\'t think it\'s suddenly become \'The bad days\'.
January 28th, 2018 14:07
My Only Regret
orchidee said:
He knows there\'s only one of each of us! That\'s enough for Him - one of each of us! And God our Creator too :)
January 26th, 2018 14:41
orchidee said:
He knows there\'s only one of each of us! That\'s enough for Him - one of each of us! And God our Creator too :)
January 26th, 2018 14:41
Win Her Heart
orchidee said:
Good write Forever. Erm I would like everything to be copastetic - I think. After I\'ve looked it up in my dictionary, that is! heehee.
December 31st, 2017 03:36
orchidee said:
Good write Forever. Erm I would like everything to be copastetic - I think. After I\'ve looked it up in my dictionary, that is! heehee.
December 31st, 2017 03:36
Win Her Heart
Christina8 said:
You do have a point here. Good write! Personality takes ya farther than looks, at least to me. Interesting topic.
December 30th, 2017 22:21
Christina8 said:
You do have a point here. Good write! Personality takes ya farther than looks, at least to me. Interesting topic.
December 30th, 2017 22:21
The Only Peaceful Night
Goldfinch60 said:
May he soon return to us to lead us once more.
December 25th, 2017 02:39
Goldfinch60 said:
May he soon return to us to lead us once more.
December 25th, 2017 02:39
The Inn keeper
orchidee said:
See what you mean, Forever. Could he have squeezed them in somewhere? Or asked someone else to give up a room?
Yet maybe he was compassionate in at least offering a stable? - \'that\'s all I have, I\'m afraid\'
December 24th, 2017 03:11
orchidee said:
See what you mean, Forever. Could he have squeezed them in somewhere? Or asked someone else to give up a room?
Yet maybe he was compassionate in at least offering a stable? - \'that\'s all I have, I\'m afraid\'
December 24th, 2017 03:11
Never Give Up
orchidee said:
A fine write Forever. Sometimes we (or I at least) may not even attempt some things to start with. So then I\'ve given up before I\'ve started. doh!
December 17th, 2017 02:58
orchidee said:
A fine write Forever. Sometimes we (or I at least) may not even attempt some things to start with. So then I\'ve given up before I\'ve started. doh!
December 17th, 2017 02:58
He Always Hears Me
orchidee said:
I don\'t have seizures myself. I wish you well.
December 4th, 2017 03:32
orchidee said:
I don\'t have seizures myself. I wish you well.
December 4th, 2017 03:32
He Always Hears Me
orchidee said:
I don\'t have seizures myself. I wish you well.
December 4th, 2017 03:32
orchidee said:
I don\'t have seizures myself. I wish you well.
December 4th, 2017 03:32
He Always Hears Me
orchidee said:
Good write - and as Goldfinch says.
Is this about you or someone else, or no-one in particular?
Some, or even many, seizures, are not related to demonic forces. I feel that people are rarely \'possessed\', yet it can happen.
December 4th, 2017 02:51
orchidee said:
Good write - and as Goldfinch says.
Is this about you or someone else, or no-one in particular?
Some, or even many, seizures, are not related to demonic forces. I feel that people are rarely \'possessed\', yet it can happen.
December 4th, 2017 02:51
He Always Hears Me
Goldfinch60 said:
May your prayer be answered. Good write.
December 4th, 2017 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
May your prayer be answered. Good write.
December 4th, 2017 01:58
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