Comments received on poems by ForeverJesus7
Every Hero Needs A Cause
orchidee said:
A fine write Forever. Can\'t understand how some celebrities are heroes. What have they done?!
February 23rd, 2018 09:56
orchidee said:
A fine write Forever. Can\'t understand how some celebrities are heroes. What have they done?!
February 23rd, 2018 09:56
Chivalry
orchidee said:
Oh I see - below a knight. I had taken it in the sense of \'it\'s below me, I\'m too grand to do those things\'.
February 20th, 2018 05:16
orchidee said:
Oh I see - below a knight. I had taken it in the sense of \'it\'s below me, I\'m too grand to do those things\'.
February 20th, 2018 05:16
Chivalry
orchidee said:
Good write Forever. Will knights do these things too, or are they too pompous?
February 20th, 2018 02:54
orchidee said:
Good write Forever. Will knights do these things too, or are they too pompous?
February 20th, 2018 02:54
Sometimes I Like It Simple
orchidee said:
Yep, no point in waffling (like I may do! lol).Let\'s always use 20 words when 5 will do, I say! heehee.
February 14th, 2018 03:59
orchidee said:
Yep, no point in waffling (like I may do! lol).Let\'s always use 20 words when 5 will do, I say! heehee.
February 14th, 2018 03:59
Am I A Rebel?
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, going your own way is always the way to go.
February 12th, 2018 02:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, going your own way is always the way to go.
February 12th, 2018 02:10
My Mom Works At The U
ForeverJesus7 said:
Thank you. I think so too. If you do believe in prayer, pray that she has perseverence. I am just asking a simple favor. Thank you again. Also, I read your profile. I love horses. I am just afraid of them. Haha
Persistence is key
February 3rd, 2018 07:03
ForeverJesus7 said:
Thank you. I think so too. If you do believe in prayer, pray that she has perseverence. I am just asking a simple favor. Thank you again. Also, I read your profile. I love horses. I am just afraid of them. Haha
Persistence is key
February 3rd, 2018 07:03
My Mom Works At The U
Lorna said:
God she\'s wonderful!!! What a fantastic lady!
February 3rd, 2018 06:42
Lorna said:
God she\'s wonderful!!! What a fantastic lady!
February 3rd, 2018 06:42
The Great War
orchidee said:
A fine historical write Forever. I never knew all that. or if I did, I\'ve forgotten half of it!
The thing is every side may say \'God is on our side\'.
February 2nd, 2018 09:23
orchidee said:
A fine historical write Forever. I never knew all that. or if I did, I\'ve forgotten half of it!
The thing is every side may say \'God is on our side\'.
February 2nd, 2018 09:23
Beware
orchidee said:
I know what you mean. No use just waving things - Bible or whatever it may be. Nor \'Bible-bashing\' (horrible phrase!) if we only make it mean what we want it to mean.
Yep, I heard - the devil tricks you at the front door. Then goes to the back door, and says, \'Why you thinking that?\' (the original lies he told you at the front door!).
January 31st, 2018 09:47
orchidee said:
I know what you mean. No use just waving things - Bible or whatever it may be. Nor \'Bible-bashing\' (horrible phrase!) if we only make it mean what we want it to mean.
Yep, I heard - the devil tricks you at the front door. Then goes to the back door, and says, \'Why you thinking that?\' (the original lies he told you at the front door!).
January 31st, 2018 09:47
Beware
FineB said:
Hi ForeverJesus6,
2 Colossians 2:10
And in Christ you have been brought to fullness. He is the head over every power and authority.
In God/Christ
We are complete and not through Satan and his lies.
Thank you for this excellent poem highlighting an everlasting problem for any spriritual believer. Satan and his weapons of attack.
Keep writing
FineB
January 31st, 2018 05:03
FineB said:
Hi ForeverJesus6,
2 Colossians 2:10
And in Christ you have been brought to fullness. He is the head over every power and authority.
In God/Christ
We are complete and not through Satan and his lies.
Thank you for this excellent poem highlighting an everlasting problem for any spriritual believer. Satan and his weapons of attack.
Keep writing
FineB
January 31st, 2018 05:03
The Woman On The Plane
dusk arising said:
What a great story with a really nice ending.
January 30th, 2018 07:04
dusk arising said:
What a great story with a really nice ending.
January 30th, 2018 07:04
The Woman On The Plane
orchidee said:
Good write Forever. Yes, we can\'t get off a train/boat/plane, etc until it stops/lands/comes into port, etc. So we\'re in an enclosed world for the duration of the trip.
January 30th, 2018 02:45
orchidee said:
Good write Forever. Yes, we can\'t get off a train/boat/plane, etc until it stops/lands/comes into port, etc. So we\'re in an enclosed world for the duration of the trip.
January 30th, 2018 02:45
Criticism
Aislinn Wilson said:
You will never meet someone without bias no matter how much they may boast it.
January 29th, 2018 13:51
Aislinn Wilson said:
You will never meet someone without bias no matter how much they may boast it.
January 29th, 2018 13:51
Criticism
dusk arising said:
Quite nicely presented. Some people just have to be negative don\'t they and then there are those who just proffer a pointless positive comment. Until one can make a judgement upon where the critic stands in this regard there is little point in bothering to acknowledge any criticism.
Constructive criticism is ok but..... in my book i\'d say just get on with it and do it your way. Nobody else has your viewpoint or your particular style. Be you.
January 29th, 2018 12:55
dusk arising said:
Quite nicely presented. Some people just have to be negative don\'t they and then there are those who just proffer a pointless positive comment. Until one can make a judgement upon where the critic stands in this regard there is little point in bothering to acknowledge any criticism.
Constructive criticism is ok but..... in my book i\'d say just get on with it and do it your way. Nobody else has your viewpoint or your particular style. Be you.
January 29th, 2018 12:55
Criticism
orchidee said:
But I know what you mean. I don\'t feel you are being \'preachy\' in your poem, which is good. I mean, preaching is preaching, and poetry is poetry!
January 29th, 2018 07:56
orchidee said:
But I know what you mean. I don\'t feel you are being \'preachy\' in your poem, which is good. I mean, preaching is preaching, and poetry is poetry!
January 29th, 2018 07:56
Criticism
orchidee said:
I\'m only gonna criticise that I never seen it spelt as \'critisize\' before! (heehee).
January 29th, 2018 07:55
orchidee said:
I\'m only gonna criticise that I never seen it spelt as \'critisize\' before! (heehee).
January 29th, 2018 07:55
How Did We Get This Far 2
orchidee said:
Well, I may know when it all started - with Adam and Eve, and the forbidden tree. Dunno if it was an apple tree or what. The record (the Bible) does not say.
I don\'t think it\'s suddenly become \'The bad days\'.
January 28th, 2018 14:07
orchidee said:
Well, I may know when it all started - with Adam and Eve, and the forbidden tree. Dunno if it was an apple tree or what. The record (the Bible) does not say.
I don\'t think it\'s suddenly become \'The bad days\'.
January 28th, 2018 14:07
My Only Regret
orchidee said:
He knows there\'s only one of each of us! That\'s enough for Him - one of each of us! And God our Creator too :)
January 26th, 2018 14:41
orchidee said:
He knows there\'s only one of each of us! That\'s enough for Him - one of each of us! And God our Creator too :)
January 26th, 2018 14:41
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