Comments received on poems by youngandnaive
Poetry
FredPeyer said:
I like your poem very much. Poetry is everything you write and it is not at all everything you write. You can do whatever pleases you, there is no right or wrong.
And you know what? We do not have to grasp that beautiful mystery, we can just enjoy it!
Well written, YAN!
October 31st, 2017 18:38
FredPeyer said:
I like your poem very much. Poetry is everything you write and it is not at all everything you write. You can do whatever pleases you, there is no right or wrong.
And you know what? We do not have to grasp that beautiful mystery, we can just enjoy it!
Well written, YAN!
October 31st, 2017 18:38
A Few Questions
Christina8 said:
I love the way you posed your questions. I think all of us have questions we are dying to ask and feel that we can\'t. I\'d ask one if I were you!
October 25th, 2017 17:29
Christina8 said:
I love the way you posed your questions. I think all of us have questions we are dying to ask and feel that we can\'t. I\'d ask one if I were you!
October 25th, 2017 17:29
A Few Questions
FredPeyer said:
I do like the way you wrote this, like the structure. Some guys are a little slow in \'getting it\', maybe it is time you pushed your luck a bit.
October 25th, 2017 11:22
FredPeyer said:
I do like the way you wrote this, like the structure. Some guys are a little slow in \'getting it\', maybe it is time you pushed your luck a bit.
October 25th, 2017 11:22
A Few Questions
kevin browne said:
I have the same problem with a daughter of my best and I feel in love with her the moment I met her, but, it was soon very apparent I was wanted and it hurt, it still does and having her be my neighbour things are really tough. you poem has brought the emotions back. thank you for sharing your poem.
October 25th, 2017 06:32
kevin browne said:
I have the same problem with a daughter of my best and I feel in love with her the moment I met her, but, it was soon very apparent I was wanted and it hurt, it still does and having her be my neighbour things are really tough. you poem has brought the emotions back. thank you for sharing your poem.
October 25th, 2017 06:32
That Day
Michael Edwards said:
Had to read more of your work. There is a certain naivety about it which is so captivating and which many strive to achieve and fail. I look forward to reading more in the future.
October 25th, 2017 02:53
Michael Edwards said:
Had to read more of your work. There is a certain naivety about it which is so captivating and which many strive to achieve and fail. I look forward to reading more in the future.
October 25th, 2017 02:53
A Few Questions
Michael Edwards said:
Contemplative, slightly sad - an engaging write - I hope he finds out pretty darn soon. Great work.
October 25th, 2017 02:44
Michael Edwards said:
Contemplative, slightly sad - an engaging write - I hope he finds out pretty darn soon. Great work.
October 25th, 2017 02:44
That Day
FredPeyer said:
Y&N, I had to make this a favorite. It is well written, but it is the subject and especially the last stanza that got me!
October 16th, 2017 16:17
FredPeyer said:
Y&N, I had to make this a favorite. It is well written, but it is the subject and especially the last stanza that got me!
October 16th, 2017 16:17
That Day
Poetic Dan said:
That it will writing this way.
Inspirational words, nice job
October 16th, 2017 15:47
Poetic Dan said:
That it will writing this way.
Inspirational words, nice job
October 16th, 2017 15:47
Quiet Strength
FredPeyer said:
Very well written, Y&N, tender, loving, flowing well, leading into the problem and ending with a heart warming solution.
I like it!
October 13th, 2017 17:32
FredPeyer said:
Very well written, Y&N, tender, loving, flowing well, leading into the problem and ending with a heart warming solution.
I like it!
October 13th, 2017 17:32
It\'s Time
FredPeyer said:
A sad, but beautifully written poem, Y&N. Good flow and structure.
But why the tears?
October 12th, 2017 17:27
FredPeyer said:
A sad, but beautifully written poem, Y&N. Good flow and structure.
But why the tears?
October 12th, 2017 17:27
Insignificant Things
FredPeyer said:
Very, very nice poem about young love, Y&N. I wrote something about the same subject titled \"First Love\", posted August 15th. Have a look and let me know what you think.
It is the insignificant little things that make life so beautiful and worth living.
October 11th, 2017 15:47
FredPeyer said:
Very, very nice poem about young love, Y&N. I wrote something about the same subject titled \"First Love\", posted August 15th. Have a look and let me know what you think.
It is the insignificant little things that make life so beautiful and worth living.
October 11th, 2017 15:47
Outstretched
FredPeyer said:
I like the metaphors you are using in this well written poem, Y&N. Too often, even though we know we should change, we are too afraid to do so. But believe me, nobody who can write that well leads a \'painfully average\' life.
October 10th, 2017 17:15
FredPeyer said:
I like the metaphors you are using in this well written poem, Y&N. Too often, even though we know we should change, we are too afraid to do so. But believe me, nobody who can write that well leads a \'painfully average\' life.
October 10th, 2017 17:15
Blind
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to MPS, Y&N! Well written, like the short/long/short line structure.
Love makes blind, and you expressed that beautifully.
October 6th, 2017 22:30
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to MPS, Y&N! Well written, like the short/long/short line structure.
Love makes blind, and you expressed that beautifully.
October 6th, 2017 22:30
