Comments received on poems by Canticle
Another sad poem
orchidee said:
An expressive poem. Yes indeed! May next poem be cheery, and canticle-like.
March 14th, 2019 07:19
orchidee said:
An expressive poem. Yes indeed! May next poem be cheery, and canticle-like.
March 14th, 2019 07:19
Another sad poem
Nicholas Browning said:
Well, I can definitely see the reflection of what the narrator thinks of themselves. That much is clear. If such a place existed it would be off limits to the presence of man. Oh well, I\'m sure a place like that exists. I enjoyed the read, and best regards. May the next poem be one of triumph and joy.
March 14th, 2019 00:16
Nicholas Browning said:
Well, I can definitely see the reflection of what the narrator thinks of themselves. That much is clear. If such a place existed it would be off limits to the presence of man. Oh well, I\'m sure a place like that exists. I enjoyed the read, and best regards. May the next poem be one of triumph and joy.
March 14th, 2019 00:16
A good mood?
vvnrose said:
INSightful comment sylviaseacher. Enjoyed reading this poem.
January 25th, 2019 12:47
vvnrose said:
INSightful comment sylviaseacher. Enjoyed reading this poem.
January 25th, 2019 12:47
A good mood?
sylviasearcher said:
I think you capture something here about the fight between light and dark and the lack of simplicity in knowing whether one path is right and the other wrong. Is darkness bad? What is the light that controls us? Is it the light that makes the happiness uneasy or is it the dark?
Why are do many people afraid of the dark?
Hope me waffling here is okay.
Hope you are feeling some release of relief after writing this.
Keep writing it out. That is how I learn what I need.
January 25th, 2019 03:02
sylviasearcher said:
I think you capture something here about the fight between light and dark and the lack of simplicity in knowing whether one path is right and the other wrong. Is darkness bad? What is the light that controls us? Is it the light that makes the happiness uneasy or is it the dark?
Why are do many people afraid of the dark?
Hope me waffling here is okay.
Hope you are feeling some release of relief after writing this.
Keep writing it out. That is how I learn what I need.
January 25th, 2019 03:02
Si supieras lo mucho que te amo (If only you knew how much I love you)
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful love lorn write Canticle.
November 28th, 2018 02:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful love lorn write Canticle.
November 28th, 2018 02:12
Depressed
sylviasearcher said:
Oh I hope there was some catharsis in writing it out. Writing helps me with these kinds of feelings.
I was \'disgnosed\' with depression when I was younger and continue to be inflicted by waves of sadness in life. I sometimes wonder whether I am just more attuned and responsive to the world which is not always happy and nice. Is it more human to know sorrow and feel it than to ignore it and go on.
So when I feel.rhe wave come I let it take me for a while. I try not to apologise or feel shame.
I.am mostly \'lucky\'. I function relatively okay and can keep on.
I hope you find a way to live with depression.
August 29th, 2018 01:46
sylviasearcher said:
Oh I hope there was some catharsis in writing it out. Writing helps me with these kinds of feelings.
I was \'disgnosed\' with depression when I was younger and continue to be inflicted by waves of sadness in life. I sometimes wonder whether I am just more attuned and responsive to the world which is not always happy and nice. Is it more human to know sorrow and feel it than to ignore it and go on.
So when I feel.rhe wave come I let it take me for a while. I try not to apologise or feel shame.
I.am mostly \'lucky\'. I function relatively okay and can keep on.
I hope you find a way to live with depression.
August 29th, 2018 01:46
No dance...
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
this is a good poem it makes me wonder who the girl is that you see everyday
May 4th, 2018 07:32
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
this is a good poem it makes me wonder who the girl is that you see everyday
May 4th, 2018 07:32
Broken Strings
rrodriguez said:
what did you see on that quest? I loved your poem. Don\'t stay away, come back and wow us with your canticles.
November 5th, 2017 12:07
rrodriguez said:
what did you see on that quest? I loved your poem. Don\'t stay away, come back and wow us with your canticles.
November 5th, 2017 12:07
