Comments received on poems by Anna Marg
Back to the beginning..
FredPeyer said:
Anna, whether the heroine in this poem is you or somebody else, it is the right decision!
Beautifully written, well thought out, great flow.
November 6th, 2017 14:40
FredPeyer said:
Anna, whether the heroine in this poem is you or somebody else, it is the right decision!
Beautifully written, well thought out, great flow.
November 6th, 2017 14:40
Unsteady
FredPeyer said:
Anna, this is a great poem! The stanza starting with \'conflict...\' is why you are here on MPS. You read what others write and it helps you grow with your own writing.
So, maybe you can!
November 4th, 2017 19:32
FredPeyer said:
Anna, this is a great poem! The stanza starting with \'conflict...\' is why you are here on MPS. You read what others write and it helps you grow with your own writing.
So, maybe you can!
November 4th, 2017 19:32
War
FredPeyer said:
Sad, but true! War is an ugly thing and so totally senseless. Throughout history wars were fought just to replace one bad situation with another bad situation, with much suffering on both sides.
Your epic poem is very well written and covers a lot of ground. Kudos!
November 3rd, 2017 11:44
FredPeyer said:
Sad, but true! War is an ugly thing and so totally senseless. Throughout history wars were fought just to replace one bad situation with another bad situation, with much suffering on both sides.
Your epic poem is very well written and covers a lot of ground. Kudos!
November 3rd, 2017 11:44
War
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANNA for a very poignant Poem ~ WAR takes no prisoners and affects all who are tainted by it ~ Military and Civilians alike ! I live near a Garrison Town so we see the effects ~ Young Men with missing limbs ~ and the traumatic effect on Young Families and even worse those who return in Coffins. I am much too young (34) to remember WW2 (1939 ~ 45) but the effects still haunt the UK and on 11 November 2017 \"We will remember them\" Yours as always ~ BRIAN (UK)
November 3rd, 2017 11:05
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANNA for a very poignant Poem ~ WAR takes no prisoners and affects all who are tainted by it ~ Military and Civilians alike ! I live near a Garrison Town so we see the effects ~ Young Men with missing limbs ~ and the traumatic effect on Young Families and even worse those who return in Coffins. I am much too young (34) to remember WW2 (1939 ~ 45) but the effects still haunt the UK and on 11 November 2017 \"We will remember them\" Yours as always ~ BRIAN (UK)
November 3rd, 2017 11:05
Come on little children..
FredPeyer said:
One heck of a scary children\'s poem here! But so well written. Even I wanted a taste of that evil house.
November 2nd, 2017 13:16
FredPeyer said:
One heck of a scary children\'s poem here! But so well written. Even I wanted a taste of that evil house.
November 2nd, 2017 13:16
Wolf\'s Cry
FredPeyer said:
Wow! What a story, Anna! You drew me in and did not let me go!
Very well written, love it!
November 1st, 2017 04:21
FredPeyer said:
Wow! What a story, Anna! You drew me in and did not let me go!
Very well written, love it!
November 1st, 2017 04:21
Broken souls
FredPeyer said:
Unfortunately, Anna, broken souls are everywhere. Out in the world and here on MPS. The last two lines of your poem are so important, but most of us shy away from getting involved.
Very good writing!
November 1st, 2017 04:17
FredPeyer said:
Unfortunately, Anna, broken souls are everywhere. Out in the world and here on MPS. The last two lines of your poem are so important, but most of us shy away from getting involved.
Very good writing!
November 1st, 2017 04:17
Goodbye
FredPeyer said:
Anna, your first line says it all. Love really is happiness and pain! I also like the last line. You are a good writer!
November 1st, 2017 04:14
FredPeyer said:
Anna, your first line says it all. Love really is happiness and pain! I also like the last line. You are a good writer!
November 1st, 2017 04:14
Goodbye
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ANNA ~ Thanks for your first Poem ~ which is somewhat of \"Greek Tragedy\" I am old enough (34) to have sampled (several times) the AGONY & ECSTASY of LOVE ~ so I can empathise. With my current Lady (Angela 29) we are still in ecstasy mode ~ thank God ! As your poem indicated ~ when you discover the \"true character\" of your Lover ~ the World and everything in it ends for a Season ! I have a MANTRA (which is easier for Men than Ladies ?) \"Better to have Loved & Lost ~ Than never to have Loved at all\" I love GREECE and everything GREEK ! Every Blessing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
October 30th, 2017 10:01
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ANNA ~ Thanks for your first Poem ~ which is somewhat of \"Greek Tragedy\" I am old enough (34) to have sampled (several times) the AGONY & ECSTASY of LOVE ~ so I can empathise. With my current Lady (Angela 29) we are still in ecstasy mode ~ thank God ! As your poem indicated ~ when you discover the \"true character\" of your Lover ~ the World and everything in it ends for a Season ! I have a MANTRA (which is easier for Men than Ladies ?) \"Better to have Loved & Lost ~ Than never to have Loved at all\" I love GREECE and everything GREEK ! Every Blessing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
October 30th, 2017 10:01
