Comments received on poems by kingdaniel
Of Love and happiness
L. B. Mek said:
an illusive read to identify with, sadly
but the writer\'s skill shines through, effortlessly
thanks for sharing
May 14th, 2021 04:59
L. B. Mek said:
an illusive read to identify with, sadly
but the writer\'s skill shines through, effortlessly
thanks for sharing
May 14th, 2021 04:59
Guiltiness
L. B. Mek said:
intriguing write, part confessionary - part socio-political commentary, but a large part: braved inked veracity..
a good read and a timely write
(I too fear the volatile scenes of heinous - vigilante - barbaric, rioting that dares to ignite in the coming days)
(while tabloids are busily scouting those perfect angles to insure they cover it all in ultra HD - depravity)...
April 20th, 2021 04:23
L. B. Mek said:
intriguing write, part confessionary - part socio-political commentary, but a large part: braved inked veracity..
a good read and a timely write
(I too fear the volatile scenes of heinous - vigilante - barbaric, rioting that dares to ignite in the coming days)
(while tabloids are busily scouting those perfect angles to insure they cover it all in ultra HD - depravity)...
April 20th, 2021 04:23
My past is my life
L. B. Mek said:
when all is said and done, may love: prevail!
truly, a wonderful message in your write..
but I feel we need to start removing words like evil and demon from our verbiage when addressing our fellow humans, see
whatever your theologically belief\'s, even those who may have none
the very wording we choose to categorise or explain the actions of our fellow humans is misleading,
for the fact is: everything we\'ve experienced and taken for granted in our lives can be flipped, had we merely been born into a different situation,
therefore those who commit heinous crimes, that we title animals and judge so harshly, could have easily been you and me,
should we have been subjected to the same experiences/influences of life and made the same wrong choices that resulted in their humanity being corrupted so drastically..
ultimately, the difference between good and bad is in the choices we make, not in some abstract notion of evil and demon possession to explain away the crimes and hateful actions of our \'fellow human beings\',
its easy to box other\'s away into convenient labels that dissociate them from us, when all humans share 99% of the same DNA - as a starting point,
we too easily forget: fascism first conquered the mind\'s of its own nation, by dehumanising those in opposition of its ideologies,
Franco - Mussolini and hitler\'s first objective was to imbed enough social division so that no - single group could oppose its rise, while busily fighting each other and so unable to gather to form a unified front, before it was too late..
I know, I know I\'m being overtly dramatic but its for a purpose - see, each day we see our own society being fragmented into an ever more fractured state, in real time
maybe it will all work out, or sadly my fears will be realised...
but what matters most I think is that we inject words like humility and empathy at very opportunity and do what we can individually and collectively, to fight against that tide of hate and segregation that\'s threatening our way of life..
(I apologise for my scribbled tirade, in no way was I targeting you directly dear poet, feel free to delete my comment)
April 13th, 2021 04:37
L. B. Mek said:
when all is said and done, may love: prevail!
truly, a wonderful message in your write..
but I feel we need to start removing words like evil and demon from our verbiage when addressing our fellow humans, see
whatever your theologically belief\'s, even those who may have none
the very wording we choose to categorise or explain the actions of our fellow humans is misleading,
for the fact is: everything we\'ve experienced and taken for granted in our lives can be flipped, had we merely been born into a different situation,
therefore those who commit heinous crimes, that we title animals and judge so harshly, could have easily been you and me,
should we have been subjected to the same experiences/influences of life and made the same wrong choices that resulted in their humanity being corrupted so drastically..
ultimately, the difference between good and bad is in the choices we make, not in some abstract notion of evil and demon possession to explain away the crimes and hateful actions of our \'fellow human beings\',
its easy to box other\'s away into convenient labels that dissociate them from us, when all humans share 99% of the same DNA - as a starting point,
we too easily forget: fascism first conquered the mind\'s of its own nation, by dehumanising those in opposition of its ideologies,
Franco - Mussolini and hitler\'s first objective was to imbed enough social division so that no - single group could oppose its rise, while busily fighting each other and so unable to gather to form a unified front, before it was too late..
I know, I know I\'m being overtly dramatic but its for a purpose - see, each day we see our own society being fragmented into an ever more fractured state, in real time
maybe it will all work out, or sadly my fears will be realised...
but what matters most I think is that we inject words like humility and empathy at very opportunity and do what we can individually and collectively, to fight against that tide of hate and segregation that\'s threatening our way of life..
(I apologise for my scribbled tirade, in no way was I targeting you directly dear poet, feel free to delete my comment)
April 13th, 2021 04:37
My past is my life
Goldfinch60 said:
May that peace be forever with you KD and with us all.
Andy
April 13th, 2021 00:22
Goldfinch60 said:
May that peace be forever with you KD and with us all.
Andy
April 13th, 2021 00:22
In the shadow of darknesss
L. B. Mek said:
well considered thoughts, expressed confidently and accessibly worded
March 25th, 2021 03:54
L. B. Mek said:
well considered thoughts, expressed confidently and accessibly worded
March 25th, 2021 03:54
In the shadow of darknesss
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic flow, had me gripping for breath!
Thank you
March 23rd, 2021 16:16
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic flow, had me gripping for breath!
Thank you
March 23rd, 2021 16:16
World of Dreams
Goldfinch60 said:
That path in your life may diverge many times but it will eventually lead to that place in your life where you are meant to be.
Andy
December 1st, 2020 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
That path in your life may diverge many times but it will eventually lead to that place in your life where you are meant to be.
Andy
December 1st, 2020 01:49
War among Friends
Goldfinch60 said:
May that brotherhood come to us all in this world and peace reigns.
Andy
September 30th, 2020 00:21
Goldfinch60 said:
May that brotherhood come to us all in this world and peace reigns.
Andy
September 30th, 2020 00:21
Life and Love
dusk arising said:
Often we start out following a well trodden road only to become disallusioned and seek something else. The beginnings of finding ones own road which as you describe, is far more rewarding.
January 7th, 2020 18:23
dusk arising said:
Often we start out following a well trodden road only to become disallusioned and seek something else. The beginnings of finding ones own road which as you describe, is far more rewarding.
January 7th, 2020 18:23
To fall in Love
MissileOfUncertainty said:
I felt like I was transported back to a simpler time. Like I was in the middle ages or something like that. It was an enthralling and interesting write. Thank you for sharing.
October 1st, 2018 22:05
MissileOfUncertainty said:
I felt like I was transported back to a simpler time. Like I was in the middle ages or something like that. It was an enthralling and interesting write. Thank you for sharing.
October 1st, 2018 22:05
Where the is light
orchidee said:
A fine write Daniel. Should title read \'there\', instead of \'the\'?
September 10th, 2018 03:02
orchidee said:
A fine write Daniel. Should title read \'there\', instead of \'the\'?
September 10th, 2018 03:02
Where the is light
MaggieF said:
Light does shine in the darkness, we sometimes take it for granted. Good strong poem. Maggie
September 10th, 2018 02:47
MaggieF said:
Light does shine in the darkness, we sometimes take it for granted. Good strong poem. Maggie
September 10th, 2018 02:47
Where the is light
Goldfinch60 said:
The light is always there for us, some do not see it though. Good uplifting write.
September 10th, 2018 02:31
Goldfinch60 said:
The light is always there for us, some do not see it though. Good uplifting write.
September 10th, 2018 02:31
Peace and Love
rrodriguez said:
This is great... similar to my poem Love is all. I enjoy it very much.
February 25th, 2018 15:22
rrodriguez said:
This is great... similar to my poem Love is all. I enjoy it very much.
February 25th, 2018 15:22
Peace and Love
orchidee said:
A fine birthday write - so I see! Good wishes!
February 23rd, 2018 13:30
orchidee said:
A fine birthday write - so I see! Good wishes!
February 23rd, 2018 13:30
BREAD ALONE
orchidee said:
The poem has not uploaded - or not when I last looked!
November 3rd, 2017 14:42
orchidee said:
The poem has not uploaded - or not when I last looked!
November 3rd, 2017 14:42
