Comments received on poems by Poetic_Pixel
Together Forever
Yorelzinala said:
Here\'s an idea: \"Endless Endeavor\"
And GO!
May 22nd, 2018 21:35
Yorelzinala said:
Here\'s an idea: \"Endless Endeavor\"
And GO!
May 22nd, 2018 21:35
Together Forever
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks PIXEL ~ love the LOVE POEM ! very elegantly written ~ full of rhyme & rhythm ! Five balanced QUATRAINS and a consistent Rhyming pattern (xaxa xbxb xcxc etc) Love the content too ~ each stanza introduces a new togetherness ! S1 Snuggle tight day & night ! S2 Games & a Moovie ~ groovy ! S3 Hurt or sick ~ I\'ll stick ! S4 Sad ? I\'ll make you glad ! S5 Together ~ Forever ! Great Promises ~ we\'re all looking for a Partner like that ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) ~ Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B !
May 22nd, 2018 18:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks PIXEL ~ love the LOVE POEM ! very elegantly written ~ full of rhyme & rhythm ! Five balanced QUATRAINS and a consistent Rhyming pattern (xaxa xbxb xcxc etc) Love the content too ~ each stanza introduces a new togetherness ! S1 Snuggle tight day & night ! S2 Games & a Moovie ~ groovy ! S3 Hurt or sick ~ I\'ll stick ! S4 Sad ? I\'ll make you glad ! S5 Together ~ Forever ! Great Promises ~ we\'re all looking for a Partner like that ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) ~ Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B !
May 22nd, 2018 18:48
Cats
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME PP ~ Thanks for a wonderful tribute to CATS ! Awesome Creatures I always had them at home ~ but now I\'m in a FLAT I have to be content with tropical fish ! I agree with every catty point you have made ~ more poems please ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
November 14th, 2017 11:03
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME PP ~ Thanks for a wonderful tribute to CATS ! Awesome Creatures I always had them at home ~ but now I\'m in a FLAT I have to be content with tropical fish ! I agree with every catty point you have made ~ more poems please ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
November 14th, 2017 11:03
Moonlit Night
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to MPS, PP! Don\'t worry, nobody will judge you or your writing. We are here to encourage each other, and, if requested, to give gentle advice. Your rhyming is good, your structure is good. Maybe you could try to find synonyms for the word \'shining\' which seems to repeat maybe a little bit too often, unless it was done on purpose. You do have artistic freedom!
November 8th, 2017 22:31
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to MPS, PP! Don\'t worry, nobody will judge you or your writing. We are here to encourage each other, and, if requested, to give gentle advice. Your rhyming is good, your structure is good. Maybe you could try to find synonyms for the word \'shining\' which seems to repeat maybe a little bit too often, unless it was done on purpose. You do have artistic freedom!
November 8th, 2017 22:31
