Comments received on poems by drea

I fell for a boy I won’t let myself have
Goldfinch60 said:

Emotive write but if he does not know how you feel he may be lost. He may feel the same way about you but has those same feelings. Do not let the chance of love fail.

December 16th, 2019 01:15

‘She was asking for it’
Goldfinch60 said:

You must be yourself and don\'t worry about what others think. See my poem \"Not My Problem\" put on here three days ago.
Good rant though.

December 12th, 2019 01:49

‘She was asking for it’
Unsub said:

just wear your shorts, crop top & make-up & simply stick a finger up to the world.

Be you; not what you\'re told to be.

Nice angry rant! Loved it!

One thing, men also wear clothes & make-up to express themselves so we shouldn\'t take that away from them too!


December 11th, 2019 13:49

Explaining what goes on in my head
Nicholas Browning said:

Seems to me that one thing you must find content with is who you are. They always say no one will ever love you if you don\'t love yourself. That means that if you don\'t accept yourself you won\'t ever truly know what it means for another person to love you. Well, all that pertains to the poem and its message, not you individually. I don\'t know you, so I can\'t say. Haha. Well, best luck in your endeavors, and thanks for the share.

March 13th, 2019 15:57

My heart can’t help it
onepauly said:

quite heartwarming.

November 14th, 2018 17:33

My heart can’t help it
Cali Kittana said:

My heart skipped a beat reading this. I understand this feeling... Wanting someone with all your heart despite knowing how bad the past was, wanting to try and break through the memories of bad relationships.. Letting your walls come down for what feels like the first time in a long time. It\'s a scary and beautiful feeling, isn\'t it?

November 14th, 2018 12:02

If I was prettier...
Jooles said:

Take it from someone that\'s older than you,
You are pretty
Boys don\'t stick around just for looks
Looks fade
What is pretty to one is not pretty to another
Confidence, personality and humour will get you far and will get you there will honesty and good feeling
Not make up, lack of clothes or changing who you are

November 10th, 2018 03:46

If I was prettier...
Goldfinch60 said:

Beauty comes from within, if people cannot see the beauty inside of you it is their problem, not yours.

November 10th, 2018 00:57

If I was prettier...
Debsspot said:

I am so sad that you feel like this. Who decides on those standards anyway? I spent my younger years feeling the same way. Wasted so long caring about what others thought of me. When i stopped caring and stopped giving off that \"vibe\" of someone not happy in her own skin my whole world changed to acceptance and \"normality\". It can be hard at first but it really does happen.

November 9th, 2018 16:08

The R word
Claudelle DeLuna said:

Great writing!
I liked it because it is a reality that most often than not goes on between first time relationships.
When it supposed to be a sweet discovery it can turn into a nightmare of misunderstood feelings.(not being on the same page)
Like a young girl expecting love & respect not aggression.
Perhaps some boys and girls for that matter, need to be taught about how to deal with love, sexuality and the overall relationship deal, I think it should begin at home with the parents.

August 11th, 2018 11:08

The R word
Crystal Hope said:

Wow! Just wow!

August 11th, 2018 00:46

I am just a girl
sharda92 said:

I loved it!!

April 20th, 2018 16:14

I am just a girl
onepauly said:

let me care for you.

April 20th, 2018 15:37

I am just a girl
yellowrose said:

sad but so well expressed. a lot of insecurity is showing up here, a need to cover up and hide yourself but you know wha5 if you show your true self and people don\'t accept , then they are not worth knowing anyway

April 20th, 2018 15:17

I am just a girl
Maxine Smith said:

An emotive write, thank you so much for sharing.

April 20th, 2018 15:06

I am just a girl
Lee Renard Caspian said:

Thank you for sharing you heart. I know it can be really hard, but I hope you find someone who accepts and loves every part of who you are.

April 20th, 2018 14:48

Society\'s defintion of beauty
Brii Zeiger said:

beautifully written, i agree.

March 7th, 2018 12:33

I loved you
lovelydove said:

Sometimes you just have to distance yourself. lovely poem

February 16th, 2018 22:29

MY youth
Goldfinch60 said:

What Diamond has said is right. Good write.

February 16th, 2018 01:16

Who am I?
dusk arising said:

i like this. its so true of many of us, self included.
very clever, goes into my favourites

February 12th, 2018 16:13