Comments received on poems by Ivory
Speak To Me .. by Ivory
Goldfinch60 said:
Words can be so powerful. Good write.
March 9th, 2018 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Words can be so powerful. Good write.
March 9th, 2018 01:30
Just One Kiss ... by Ivory
Carmine Branco said:
Perfect picture of the beauty of lust. nothing to be ashamed of and no hypocrisy. freedom to enjoy pleasure and to enjoy giving pleasure. humanity at its best without false moralities of which women and men alike hide their passions with inhibition. pleasure and passion are freedom, as long as there is respect for each other and mutual agreement and no one overcomes the other. excellent and very delightful. well done. C.
March 8th, 2018 20:43
Carmine Branco said:
Perfect picture of the beauty of lust. nothing to be ashamed of and no hypocrisy. freedom to enjoy pleasure and to enjoy giving pleasure. humanity at its best without false moralities of which women and men alike hide their passions with inhibition. pleasure and passion are freedom, as long as there is respect for each other and mutual agreement and no one overcomes the other. excellent and very delightful. well done. C.
March 8th, 2018 20:43
Speak To Me .. by Ivory
Carmine Branco said:
What is poetry, if not life which flows through the veins of the poet. Beauty, pain, love, passion is the blood, the words which flow from the poets heart to the hand and the ink that maculates the paper, is his/her way of transmitting that life that gives meaning to what everyone else see as common. The poet looks beyond and transmits feelings, captures moments, elements of time and emotions. He/She is an instrument in the hands of inspiration and can see what common people can\'t. Your true essence is here a vision that should be observed with respect due to a holy ceremony. I look forward to reading you again. C
March 8th, 2018 16:56
Carmine Branco said:
What is poetry, if not life which flows through the veins of the poet. Beauty, pain, love, passion is the blood, the words which flow from the poets heart to the hand and the ink that maculates the paper, is his/her way of transmitting that life that gives meaning to what everyone else see as common. The poet looks beyond and transmits feelings, captures moments, elements of time and emotions. He/She is an instrument in the hands of inspiration and can see what common people can\'t. Your true essence is here a vision that should be observed with respect due to a holy ceremony. I look forward to reading you again. C
March 8th, 2018 16:56
Speak To Me .. by Ivory
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
SHE SPEAKS and the sound of Her Voice
Is so sweet ~ that the Birds hush their singing
And the Voice I hear falling on my ear
Within my Heart is ringing .....................
And She walks with Me and she talks with ME
And She tell Me I am Her OWN
And the JOY We share ~ as We tarry there
NO OTHER has ever known !
I can empathise with your lovely poem IVORY
When you find Your Perfect LOVE ~ Life is Perfect too !
Yours ~ Brotherly HUGS BRIAN @@@
March 8th, 2018 11:30
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
SHE SPEAKS and the sound of Her Voice
Is so sweet ~ that the Birds hush their singing
And the Voice I hear falling on my ear
Within my Heart is ringing .....................
And She walks with Me and she talks with ME
And She tell Me I am Her OWN
And the JOY We share ~ as We tarry there
NO OTHER has ever known !
I can empathise with your lovely poem IVORY
When you find Your Perfect LOVE ~ Life is Perfect too !
Yours ~ Brotherly HUGS BRIAN @@@
March 8th, 2018 11:30
Just One Kiss ... by Ivory
ForeverJesus7 said:
I like you piece. It flows together really well. It is literally poetry in motion. Keep writing.
Persistence is key
March 7th, 2018 22:46
ForeverJesus7 said:
I like you piece. It flows together really well. It is literally poetry in motion. Keep writing.
Persistence is key
March 7th, 2018 22:46
Just One Kiss ... by Ivory
willyweed said:
Wow is it hot in here
nice flow and rhyme
write on Ivory...ww
March 7th, 2018 20:56
willyweed said:
Wow is it hot in here
nice flow and rhyme
write on Ivory...ww
March 7th, 2018 20:56
Ocean
rrodriguez said:
I invite you to read The Ocean Storm. A poem I wrote recently.
March 7th, 2018 14:48
rrodriguez said:
I invite you to read The Ocean Storm. A poem I wrote recently.
March 7th, 2018 14:48
Catch & Release / Caged ... by Ivory
rrodriguez said:
Wow, this is powerful. Thanks!
March 7th, 2018 14:41
rrodriguez said:
Wow, this is powerful. Thanks!
March 7th, 2018 14:41
Just One Kiss ... by Ivory
rrodriguez said:
Your poem certainty is very well written. Very descritive in form. Well fone.
March 7th, 2018 14:39
rrodriguez said:
Your poem certainty is very well written. Very descritive in form. Well fone.
March 7th, 2018 14:39
Just One Kiss ... by Ivory
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL IVORY ~ I can empathise with
every sensual word of your poem!
At an early age I learned
Just one KISS ~ triggered all I yearned
Just one KISS opened up the Petal Gate
To love and sensual BLISS
Thanks for caring & sharing
Hugs ~ BRIAN @@@
March 7th, 2018 10:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL IVORY ~ I can empathise with
every sensual word of your poem!
At an early age I learned
Just one KISS ~ triggered all I yearned
Just one KISS opened up the Petal Gate
To love and sensual BLISS
Thanks for caring & sharing
Hugs ~ BRIAN @@@
March 7th, 2018 10:48
Just One Kiss ... by Ivory
FineB said:
Thank you Ivory.
A magical, beautiful and sexy poem on the power of a kiss!
Keep writing
FineB
March 7th, 2018 08:48
FineB said:
Thank you Ivory.
A magical, beautiful and sexy poem on the power of a kiss!
Keep writing
FineB
March 7th, 2018 08:48
Catch & Release / Caged ... by Ivory
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong emotive write. I do hope that the gate to that cage is opened very soon.
March 7th, 2018 02:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong emotive write. I do hope that the gate to that cage is opened very soon.
March 7th, 2018 02:12
The Midnight Hour ... by Ivory
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love always be there. Good loving write Ivory.
March 6th, 2018 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love always be there. Good loving write Ivory.
March 6th, 2018 01:50
The Midnight Hour ... by Ivory
Jamie said:
Nice job! This is emotionally and physically exciting
March 5th, 2018 14:56
Jamie said:
Nice job! This is emotionally and physically exciting
March 5th, 2018 14:56
Our Song / I Surrender..by Ivory
ForeverJesus7 said:
That is a very well written poem. Keep writing my friend.
Persistence is key
March 5th, 2018 00:10
ForeverJesus7 said:
That is a very well written poem. Keep writing my friend.
Persistence is key
March 5th, 2018 00:10
Ocean
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME IVORY (nice name !) Thanks for your first Poem ! Most of US have fallen IN & OUT of Love several times ~ so we can empathise ! Love the metaphor you use ~ very powerful ! I have drowned in an Ocean of \"Love\'s endless Tears\" following a break up ! I think Men recover quicker than Ladies ~ but it\'s just as painful ~ I\'m in a good relationship now (read my Poems) ! Thinking of you ~ Yours BRIAN.
March 3rd, 2018 16:45
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME IVORY (nice name !) Thanks for your first Poem ! Most of US have fallen IN & OUT of Love several times ~ so we can empathise ! Love the metaphor you use ~ very powerful ! I have drowned in an Ocean of \"Love\'s endless Tears\" following a break up ! I think Men recover quicker than Ladies ~ but it\'s just as painful ~ I\'m in a good relationship now (read my Poems) ! Thinking of you ~ Yours BRIAN.
March 3rd, 2018 16:45
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