Comments received on poems by Gabriella



Frustration
Goldfinch60 said:

Inspiration can come from so many different places in our lives.

October 18th, 2018 23:43

A Poem To You
dusk arising said:

Ouch at the contrasting past tense in line four! Is this looking back at a lost love (past tense) or glorifying in a present love (all other lines are in present tense). Confusing.

October 13th, 2018 08:26

A Poem To You
Goldfinch60 said:

Good loving write.

October 13th, 2018 00:36

The battle of life
Goldfinch60 said:

The key to your cage is within you, and it seems that you have found it, open that cage and fly towards your dreams of wonder.

August 2nd, 2018 00:36

Broken
dusk arising said:

Been there, done that, musta liked it some cos found myself there a few times.... ain\'t goin back (i hope).
Awful times as you describe, once survived, bring us into focus of just what we are worth.

July 25th, 2018 16:54

Broken
poetboy5454 said:

Everyone goes through different joys and sorrows, this piece was a spectacular description of the latter!

July 25th, 2018 13:03

THE DARK
dusk arising said:

Have you read the piece Candle witch published on here today? I think shes writing about your visitor.
Your writing certainly made me think so.

July 11th, 2018 15:52

Dear future husband
Crimson_Sights said:

Truly captures blissful love

June 25th, 2018 18:17

Don\'t let the mirror define you
Goldfinch60 said:

That person you see in the mirror is not you, it is a reflection of you, only others see you as you are and only God really knows who you are.

June 22nd, 2018 00:27

Don\'t let the mirror define you
Frogspoetry said:

we all often seek approval from other people,we forget that God seesus differently.gret poem and message,gabriella,keep spreading the positive messages.

June 21st, 2018 12:00

The path
Frogspoetry said:

I AM SO GLAD THAT YOU ARE IN A BETTER PLACE NOW.BY THE GRACE OF GOD WE WILL SURVIVE.IN THE WORDS OF OUR FRIEND FOREVERJESUS6 PERSISTENCE IS KEY VERY WISE WORDS TO HANG ON TO. YOUR FRIEND AND SISTER IN CHRIST MELISSA

June 20th, 2018 10:42

The Funeral
Frogspoetry said:

THAT IS REALLY GOOD GABRIELLA,WE WILL ALL BE THERE SOMEDAY,BUT WE KNOW WHERE WE ARE GOING,UNLIKE OTHERS.I HAVE A MISSION TO REACH AS MANY HEARTS THAT I CAN BEFORE I DIE,TO SHARE MY FAITH WITH AS MANY PEOPLE IN THE WORLD THAT I CAN.I THINK THAT GOD BROUGHT ME TO THIS SITE,FOR THIS VERY PURPOSE.BEFORE MY GREAT GRANDMOTHER PASSED AWAY,SHE TOLD ME THAT I WILL DO GREAT THINGS,AND I THINK I FINALLY KNOW WHAT SHE WAS TALKING ABOUT,

June 19th, 2018 12:16

That Blade won’t help
Frogspoetry said:

thatis an excellent message to spread around

June 16th, 2018 20:23

That Blade won’t help
minak said:

thank you for sharing

June 16th, 2018 09:47

A Note From The Weapon
Goldfinch60 said:

Clever write and point of view.

June 16th, 2018 00:42

Time to let go
here said:

very brave and desisive poem- a song and we\'ll delivered write

June 15th, 2018 09:03

No longer daddy’s girl part two and three
minak said:

powerful poem . write on

June 14th, 2018 19:01

No Longer Daddy\'s Girl
Maxine Smith said:

Wow, powerful. A raw, gripping story, hits you hard.
It may be short BUT massive impact.


May 4th, 2018 12:35

No Longer Daddy\'s Girl
onepauly said:

what a story.

May 4th, 2018 10:30

True Love
GON said:

Feels like I have that feeling too much really.

May 2nd, 2018 14:16

Time to let go
Maxine Smith said:

You begin after you say goodbye. Thrive and succeed, putting the negativity well behind.

May 2nd, 2018 10:51

Beauty
Maxine Smith said:

Powerful, emotive and inspiring hunny.

May 2nd, 2018 10:48

True Love
Maxine Smith said:

I am still looking and dreaming of such love. A beautiful write hunny.

May 2nd, 2018 10:39

True Love
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for sharing GABRIELLA ~ I was also 16 a few years ago ~ O yes I remember it well ! First chance ~ first glance ~ first dance ~ first trance etc etc and it did last two years (on & off) ! Yes it was True Love ~ while it lasted ~ perhaps it was TOO SOON ? Angela & I have found lasting TRUE LOVE and hope to marry soon ~ Please check my POEMS ~ Yours BRIAN

May 2nd, 2018 10:19

Battle cry
onepauly said:

you are the only one
that knows
of your invincibility

May 1st, 2018 14:13

Beauty
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks GABRIELLA ~ For a very powerful Poem ! It made me question my motives and the reasons I write poetry ! The question is ~ \"Am I an inspiration ?\" The answer is ~ \"I hope so !\" Thanks for sharing ~ Please check my POEMS ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)

April 28th, 2018 17:28

lies
Simple-Man87 said:

Sounds like history repeating itself. I love this one. Great job, and in so few words.

April 27th, 2018 16:36

lies
onepauly said:

church bells?

April 27th, 2018 10:38

lies
Gabriella said:

I have a better one to post later

April 27th, 2018 09:50

The Beauty Of The World
blessednloved said:

This is wonderful! I have synesthesia so this makes me think of how I felt when I discovered it. I wondered what it was like inside of people’s heads since everything is so colorful for me. I thought it seemed sad for people who don’t process things like me.

March 25th, 2018 22:53

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