Comments received on poems by Gabriella
Frustration
Goldfinch60 said:
Inspiration can come from so many different places in our lives.
October 18th, 2018 23:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Inspiration can come from so many different places in our lives.
October 18th, 2018 23:43
A Poem To You
dusk arising said:
Ouch at the contrasting past tense in line four! Is this looking back at a lost love (past tense) or glorifying in a present love (all other lines are in present tense). Confusing.
October 13th, 2018 08:26
dusk arising said:
Ouch at the contrasting past tense in line four! Is this looking back at a lost love (past tense) or glorifying in a present love (all other lines are in present tense). Confusing.
October 13th, 2018 08:26
The battle of life
Goldfinch60 said:
The key to your cage is within you, and it seems that you have found it, open that cage and fly towards your dreams of wonder.
August 2nd, 2018 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
The key to your cage is within you, and it seems that you have found it, open that cage and fly towards your dreams of wonder.
August 2nd, 2018 00:36
Broken
dusk arising said:
Been there, done that, musta liked it some cos found myself there a few times.... ain\'t goin back (i hope).
Awful times as you describe, once survived, bring us into focus of just what we are worth.
July 25th, 2018 16:54
dusk arising said:
Been there, done that, musta liked it some cos found myself there a few times.... ain\'t goin back (i hope).
Awful times as you describe, once survived, bring us into focus of just what we are worth.
July 25th, 2018 16:54
Broken
poetboy123 said:
Everyone goes through different joys and sorrows, this piece was a spectacular description of the latter!
July 25th, 2018 13:03
poetboy123 said:
Everyone goes through different joys and sorrows, this piece was a spectacular description of the latter!
July 25th, 2018 13:03
THE DARK
dusk arising said:
Have you read the piece Candle witch published on here today? I think shes writing about your visitor.
Your writing certainly made me think so.
July 11th, 2018 15:52
dusk arising said:
Have you read the piece Candle witch published on here today? I think shes writing about your visitor.
Your writing certainly made me think so.
July 11th, 2018 15:52
Don\'t let the mirror define you
Goldfinch60 said:
That person you see in the mirror is not you, it is a reflection of you, only others see you as you are and only God really knows who you are.
June 22nd, 2018 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
That person you see in the mirror is not you, it is a reflection of you, only others see you as you are and only God really knows who you are.
June 22nd, 2018 00:27
Don\'t let the mirror define you
Frogspoetry said:
we all often seek approval from other people,we forget that God seesus differently.gret poem and message,gabriella,keep spreading the positive messages.
June 21st, 2018 12:00
Frogspoetry said:
we all often seek approval from other people,we forget that God seesus differently.gret poem and message,gabriella,keep spreading the positive messages.
June 21st, 2018 12:00
The path
Frogspoetry said:
I AM SO GLAD THAT YOU ARE IN A BETTER PLACE NOW.BY THE GRACE OF GOD WE WILL SURVIVE.IN THE WORDS OF OUR FRIEND FOREVERJESUS6 PERSISTENCE IS KEY VERY WISE WORDS TO HANG ON TO. YOUR FRIEND AND SISTER IN CHRIST MELISSA
June 20th, 2018 10:42
Frogspoetry said:
I AM SO GLAD THAT YOU ARE IN A BETTER PLACE NOW.BY THE GRACE OF GOD WE WILL SURVIVE.IN THE WORDS OF OUR FRIEND FOREVERJESUS6 PERSISTENCE IS KEY VERY WISE WORDS TO HANG ON TO. YOUR FRIEND AND SISTER IN CHRIST MELISSA
June 20th, 2018 10:42
The Funeral
Frogspoetry said:
THAT IS REALLY GOOD GABRIELLA,WE WILL ALL BE THERE SOMEDAY,BUT WE KNOW WHERE WE ARE GOING,UNLIKE OTHERS.I HAVE A MISSION TO REACH AS MANY HEARTS THAT I CAN BEFORE I DIE,TO SHARE MY FAITH WITH AS MANY PEOPLE IN THE WORLD THAT I CAN.I THINK THAT GOD BROUGHT ME TO THIS SITE,FOR THIS VERY PURPOSE.BEFORE MY GREAT GRANDMOTHER PASSED AWAY,SHE TOLD ME THAT I WILL DO GREAT THINGS,AND I THINK I FINALLY KNOW WHAT SHE WAS TALKING ABOUT,
June 19th, 2018 12:16
Frogspoetry said:
THAT IS REALLY GOOD GABRIELLA,WE WILL ALL BE THERE SOMEDAY,BUT WE KNOW WHERE WE ARE GOING,UNLIKE OTHERS.I HAVE A MISSION TO REACH AS MANY HEARTS THAT I CAN BEFORE I DIE,TO SHARE MY FAITH WITH AS MANY PEOPLE IN THE WORLD THAT I CAN.I THINK THAT GOD BROUGHT ME TO THIS SITE,FOR THIS VERY PURPOSE.BEFORE MY GREAT GRANDMOTHER PASSED AWAY,SHE TOLD ME THAT I WILL DO GREAT THINGS,AND I THINK I FINALLY KNOW WHAT SHE WAS TALKING ABOUT,
June 19th, 2018 12:16
That Blade won’t help
Frogspoetry said:
thatis an excellent message to spread around
June 16th, 2018 20:23
Frogspoetry said:
thatis an excellent message to spread around
June 16th, 2018 20:23
Time to let go
here said:
very brave and desisive poem- a song and we\'ll delivered write
June 15th, 2018 09:03
here said:
very brave and desisive poem- a song and we\'ll delivered write
June 15th, 2018 09:03
True Love
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing GABRIELLA ~ I was also 16 a few years ago ~ O yes I remember it well ! First chance ~ first glance ~ first dance ~ first trance etc etc and it did last two years (on & off) ! Yes it was True Love ~ while it lasted ~ perhaps it was TOO SOON ? Angela & I have found lasting TRUE LOVE and hope to marry soon ~ Please check my POEMS ~ Yours BRIAN
May 2nd, 2018 10:19
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing GABRIELLA ~ I was also 16 a few years ago ~ O yes I remember it well ! First chance ~ first glance ~ first dance ~ first trance etc etc and it did last two years (on & off) ! Yes it was True Love ~ while it lasted ~ perhaps it was TOO SOON ? Angela & I have found lasting TRUE LOVE and hope to marry soon ~ Please check my POEMS ~ Yours BRIAN
May 2nd, 2018 10:19
Beauty
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks GABRIELLA ~ For a very powerful Poem ! It made me question my motives and the reasons I write poetry ! The question is ~ \"Am I an inspiration ?\" The answer is ~ \"I hope so !\" Thanks for sharing ~ Please check my POEMS ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
April 28th, 2018 17:28
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks GABRIELLA ~ For a very powerful Poem ! It made me question my motives and the reasons I write poetry ! The question is ~ \"Am I an inspiration ?\" The answer is ~ \"I hope so !\" Thanks for sharing ~ Please check my POEMS ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
April 28th, 2018 17:28
lies
Simple-Man87 said:
Sounds like history repeating itself. I love this one. Great job, and in so few words.
April 27th, 2018 16:36
Simple-Man87 said:
Sounds like history repeating itself. I love this one. Great job, and in so few words.
April 27th, 2018 16:36
The Beauty Of The World
blessednloved said:
This is wonderful! I have synesthesia so this makes me think of how I felt when I discovered it. I wondered what it was like inside of people’s heads since everything is so colorful for me. I thought it seemed sad for people who don’t process things like me.
March 25th, 2018 22:53
blessednloved said:
This is wonderful! I have synesthesia so this makes me think of how I felt when I discovered it. I wondered what it was like inside of people’s heads since everything is so colorful for me. I thought it seemed sad for people who don’t process things like me.
March 25th, 2018 22:53
The Beauty Of The World
Lorna said:
Oh yeah - and sometimes I think we could become completely immobilized by how beautiful it can be!
March 21st, 2018 09:53
Lorna said:
Oh yeah - and sometimes I think we could become completely immobilized by how beautiful it can be!
March 21st, 2018 09:53
Anxiety
Poetic25 said:
Gabriella
I really like your little message here. It certainly is something most unnecessary in life, we could all do without.
Michael :)
March 19th, 2018 12:50
Poetic25 said:
Gabriella
I really like your little message here. It certainly is something most unnecessary in life, we could all do without.
Michael :)
March 19th, 2018 12:50
i forgive you
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME GABRIELLA (nice name) thanks for your first poem ~ well written and pulsating with Rhyme ~ Rhythm & Reason ! There come times in our lives ~ when we have to LET GO & LET GOD ~ Amen ~ But however many times we are hurt ~ the BIBLE teaches we must always FORGIVE ~ even in excess of 490 (7 x 70) times. Every Blessing ~ thinking of You ~ BRIAN (UK)
March 17th, 2018 16:53
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME GABRIELLA (nice name) thanks for your first poem ~ well written and pulsating with Rhyme ~ Rhythm & Reason ! There come times in our lives ~ when we have to LET GO & LET GOD ~ Amen ~ But however many times we are hurt ~ the BIBLE teaches we must always FORGIVE ~ even in excess of 490 (7 x 70) times. Every Blessing ~ thinking of You ~ BRIAN (UK)
March 17th, 2018 16:53
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