Comments received on poems by YoursTruly9
🧿🕊D I V I N E
dusk arising said:
Love is beautiful and teaches us if we are wise enough to learn. Love which is fulfilled will never fail us. But love which is not right for both parties will falter and pass. When this happens we must learn that love needs to be perfect for two not just one.
Hard learned lessons are the road to wisdom.
July 21st, 2020 11:42
dusk arising said:
Love is beautiful and teaches us if we are wise enough to learn. Love which is fulfilled will never fail us. But love which is not right for both parties will falter and pass. When this happens we must learn that love needs to be perfect for two not just one.
Hard learned lessons are the road to wisdom.
July 21st, 2020 11:42
🥀🧿’DECEPTION’
Memoirsofamadlife said:
Enjoyed this read. So many of us have felt that pain, but one can always hope.
January 17th, 2020 18:24
Memoirsofamadlife said:
Enjoyed this read. So many of us have felt that pain, but one can always hope.
January 17th, 2020 18:24
🧠💔A.D.H.D
Poetic Dan said:
Legend! This was outstandingly done, not a drop in breath, I hope you can feel now how you are not alone.
Every word felt like it was my own, the fight for understanding.
Inspirational
Thank you
April 21st, 2019 03:20
Poetic Dan said:
Legend! This was outstandingly done, not a drop in breath, I hope you can feel now how you are not alone.
Every word felt like it was my own, the fight for understanding.
Inspirational
Thank you
April 21st, 2019 03:20
🧠💔A.D.H.D
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a brave yet instructive write - thank you for sharing it.
January 15th, 2019 10:49
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a brave yet instructive write - thank you for sharing it.
January 15th, 2019 10:49
🧠💔A.D.H.D
sylviasearcher said:
What an amazing piece of writing to give people insight into the differences in how the brain works.
The flow and rhythm is perfect. It\'s like a \'rap. I do not have ADHD but no a little about it. The way the words are thrown out without breath kind of echo that idea of a mind always on the go.
I am glad the diagnosis helped you.
My son has aspergers syndrome. I always knew it but didn\'t want him to labeled because then all the people see is the label. Trouble was, all they saw without it was a stubborn, awkward, rude and angry young boy, who they would tell off for upsetting the other children when he said he wanted to die.
School teachers should read your poem.
January 15th, 2019 03:03
sylviasearcher said:
What an amazing piece of writing to give people insight into the differences in how the brain works.
The flow and rhythm is perfect. It\'s like a \'rap. I do not have ADHD but no a little about it. The way the words are thrown out without breath kind of echo that idea of a mind always on the go.
I am glad the diagnosis helped you.
My son has aspergers syndrome. I always knew it but didn\'t want him to labeled because then all the people see is the label. Trouble was, all they saw without it was a stubborn, awkward, rude and angry young boy, who they would tell off for upsetting the other children when he said he wanted to die.
School teachers should read your poem.
January 15th, 2019 03:03
🥀Beautiful Liar
BoxMyHeart said:
Definitely a song more than poetry. This is cool, very soulful. Check out my \"don\'t pull the trigger\" I think you\'ll enjoy.
January 11th, 2019 19:37
BoxMyHeart said:
Definitely a song more than poetry. This is cool, very soulful. Check out my \"don\'t pull the trigger\" I think you\'ll enjoy.
January 11th, 2019 19:37
🥀Beautiful Liar
Laydii said:
Same. Goosebumps, even on my leg hair. I loved the way it flew and the rhymes 👌🏽💯 but Damn girl, who broke your heart? LETS GO BREAK SOME BONES!
January 11th, 2019 19:25
Laydii said:
Same. Goosebumps, even on my leg hair. I loved the way it flew and the rhymes 👌🏽💯 but Damn girl, who broke your heart? LETS GO BREAK SOME BONES!
January 11th, 2019 19:25
💔💊’HIDDEN’
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Powerful write and full of emotion.
Strength, bravery and the love of God, give us the courage to overcome all odds.
Keep writing as that helps too. :)
October 6th, 2018 11:52
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Powerful write and full of emotion.
Strength, bravery and the love of God, give us the courage to overcome all odds.
Keep writing as that helps too. :)
October 6th, 2018 11:52
💔💊’HIDDEN’
Crystal Hope said:
Wow! Your piece is so greatly done. Very moving and well captured.
October 6th, 2018 10:59
Crystal Hope said:
Wow! Your piece is so greatly done. Very moving and well captured.
October 6th, 2018 10:59
💔💊’HIDDEN’
Yorelzinala said:
Hidden
Written off
Don\'t step off that ledge just yet friend
I\'m on the edge too
Reading your words
Has let me face the swords of life
Yea life cuts me deep
Many times I can\'t sleep
thinking how my life would have turned out, if I made the right decisions. In my own prison, the seasons still become new, as the sun rises and the moon falls, I\'ve wandered and squandered it all, but I\'m still here, right here standing head held high. Grateful for the breathe I inhaled today, ready to face this cold, cruel world alone. I just want to let you know I\'m hidden too and we\'re never alone. (Truly wish you well poet. Keep sharing your words to us.)
October 5th, 2018 23:33
Yorelzinala said:
Hidden
Written off
Don\'t step off that ledge just yet friend
I\'m on the edge too
Reading your words
Has let me face the swords of life
Yea life cuts me deep
Many times I can\'t sleep
thinking how my life would have turned out, if I made the right decisions. In my own prison, the seasons still become new, as the sun rises and the moon falls, I\'ve wandered and squandered it all, but I\'m still here, right here standing head held high. Grateful for the breathe I inhaled today, ready to face this cold, cruel world alone. I just want to let you know I\'m hidden too and we\'re never alone. (Truly wish you well poet. Keep sharing your words to us.)
October 5th, 2018 23:33
TAKE ME INSTEAD🚑
Lorna said:
She is so lucky to have you for a brother....... may a donor come along soon.........
April 24th, 2018 05:23
Lorna said:
She is so lucky to have you for a brother....... may a donor come along soon.........
April 24th, 2018 05:23
TAKE ME INSTEAD🚑
orchidee said:
A poignant and sensitive write. Thinking of you.
April 24th, 2018 02:18
orchidee said:
A poignant and sensitive write. Thinking of you.
April 24th, 2018 02:18
TAKE ME INSTEAD🚑
Nicholas Browning said:
I care very much about my brother. If anything were to happen to him, there would be some sort of hell to pay. We weren\'t always like that, though. We had our fights, and we didn\'t always see eye to eye. That\'s just how siblings are sometimes. My parents got divorced when I was very young, and it wasn\'t easy for either of us. Our mom was a drug addict, and she stole money from other people to satisfy her addictions. She forced me and my brother to steal as well. Anyways, because of this me and brother didn\'t always get along. We fought a lot over stupid shit. But we\'re good now. We\'re actual siblings. We don\'t do any of the stupid things we used to. We understand that we both only have one sibling, and that we should act accordingly. This poem reminded me of my past, and it almost brought a tear to my eye. This poem is wonderful, and if you\'ve realized the errors of your ways then that\'s all that matters. Best regards to you and your sister.
April 23rd, 2018 22:58
Nicholas Browning said:
I care very much about my brother. If anything were to happen to him, there would be some sort of hell to pay. We weren\'t always like that, though. We had our fights, and we didn\'t always see eye to eye. That\'s just how siblings are sometimes. My parents got divorced when I was very young, and it wasn\'t easy for either of us. Our mom was a drug addict, and she stole money from other people to satisfy her addictions. She forced me and my brother to steal as well. Anyways, because of this me and brother didn\'t always get along. We fought a lot over stupid shit. But we\'re good now. We\'re actual siblings. We don\'t do any of the stupid things we used to. We understand that we both only have one sibling, and that we should act accordingly. This poem reminded me of my past, and it almost brought a tear to my eye. This poem is wonderful, and if you\'ve realized the errors of your ways then that\'s all that matters. Best regards to you and your sister.
April 23rd, 2018 22:58
