Comments received on poems by Karoline



Elemental
Paul Bell said:

Well, that slow fuse started slowly and ended in fireworks.
Hope no flowerers were harmed in this coming together.

October 17th, 2025 06:47

My Sun
SLR said:

Short and powerful. It showcases our propensity to be drawn to something or someone even though we know it\'s not good for us. Well written. I really like this!

May 16th, 2018 21:30

Today
Netashi said:

Neato was a short n sweet read

April 5th, 2018 11:50

Today
smallest_stars said:

“The sun kisses me gently”

I love, love that line!

A lot there for a short poem.

Good write!

April 5th, 2018 10:08

Anchor
Caring dove said:

unique wording , i love this ..

When you touch me

I jolt.

When you kiss me

I scramble.

great poem

April 3rd, 2018 14:32

Yours
Fay Slimm. said:

Welcome to this friendly site Karoline - - I like the flow of this romantic lament. Looking forward to reading more of your work.

April 3rd, 2018 03:01

Anchor
Goldfinch60 said:

Good loving write.

April 3rd, 2018 02:57

Yours
Lorna said:

Very lovely and poignant Karoline.....

April 3rd, 2018 01:42

Yours
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Welcome Karoline ~ Thanks for your first poem a very intriguing expression of your Love ~ expressed in a quartet of Irish Haiku ! 1. Tethered by your smile ! 2. Silently fracturing ? 3. A coin in his pocket ~ A token ? I always give my Lady (ANGELA) a token when we are apart ! 4. SHATTERED ? Because of the parting or something else ? Thanks for sharing & caring ! YOURS BRIAN Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.

April 2nd, 2018 17:30

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