Comments received on poems by Karoline
Today
smallest_stars said:
“The sun kisses me gently”
I love, love that line!
A lot there for a short poem.
Good write!
April 5th, 2018 10:08
smallest_stars said:
“The sun kisses me gently”
I love, love that line!
A lot there for a short poem.
Good write!
April 5th, 2018 10:08
Anchor
Caring dove said:
unique wording , i love this ..
When you touch me
I jolt.
When you kiss me
I scramble.
great poem
April 3rd, 2018 14:32
Caring dove said:
unique wording , i love this ..
When you touch me
I jolt.
When you kiss me
I scramble.
great poem
April 3rd, 2018 14:32
Yours
Fay Slimm. said:
Welcome to this friendly site Karoline - - I like the flow of this romantic lament. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
April 3rd, 2018 03:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Welcome to this friendly site Karoline - - I like the flow of this romantic lament. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
April 3rd, 2018 03:01
Yours
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Welcome Karoline ~ Thanks for your first poem a very intriguing expression of your Love ~ expressed in a quartet of Irish Haiku ! 1. Tethered by your smile ! 2. Silently fracturing ? 3. A coin in his pocket ~ A token ? I always give my Lady (ANGELA) a token when we are apart ! 4. SHATTERED ? Because of the parting or something else ? Thanks for sharing & caring ! YOURS BRIAN Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
April 2nd, 2018 17:30
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Welcome Karoline ~ Thanks for your first poem a very intriguing expression of your Love ~ expressed in a quartet of Irish Haiku ! 1. Tethered by your smile ! 2. Silently fracturing ? 3. A coin in his pocket ~ A token ? I always give my Lady (ANGELA) a token when we are apart ! 4. SHATTERED ? Because of the parting or something else ? Thanks for sharing & caring ! YOURS BRIAN Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
April 2nd, 2018 17:30
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