Comments received on poems by Karoline
My Sun
SLR said:
Short and powerful. It showcases our propensity to be drawn to something or someone even though we know it\'s not good for us. Well written. I really like this!
May 16th, 2018 21:30
SLR said:
Short and powerful. It showcases our propensity to be drawn to something or someone even though we know it\'s not good for us. Well written. I really like this!
May 16th, 2018 21:30
Goodbye
lasergraph said:
It is sad that great writes are too often born from heartache.
April 13th, 2018 16:04
lasergraph said:
It is sad that great writes are too often born from heartache.
April 13th, 2018 16:04
First
w c said:
Very nice poem, Karoline. Being a gentleman never goes out of style.
April 6th, 2018 19:47
w c said:
Very nice poem, Karoline. Being a gentleman never goes out of style.
April 6th, 2018 19:47
First
Karoline said:
Thank you 😊 It\'s just something silly I wrote about a date I went on with one of my friends last night haha.
April 6th, 2018 09:19
Karoline said:
Thank you 😊 It\'s just something silly I wrote about a date I went on with one of my friends last night haha.
April 6th, 2018 09:19
Today
smallest_stars said:
“The sun kisses me gently”
I love, love that line!
A lot there for a short poem.
Good write!
April 5th, 2018 10:08
smallest_stars said:
“The sun kisses me gently”
I love, love that line!
A lot there for a short poem.
Good write!
April 5th, 2018 10:08
Lacking
RiverJordan said:
\"Sheltered from the outside world, yet trapped inside a little storm\", that line hit hard, nice piece!..stay strong!!
April 5th, 2018 05:08
RiverJordan said:
\"Sheltered from the outside world, yet trapped inside a little storm\", that line hit hard, nice piece!..stay strong!!
April 5th, 2018 05:08
Lacking
Lorna said:
I think parents - with the best of intentions - make many mistakes...... fear probably motivates most of them..... they\'re scared that if children veer off course they will be lost so they try to mold them into what they think will work.
April 4th, 2018 05:49
Lorna said:
I think parents - with the best of intentions - make many mistakes...... fear probably motivates most of them..... they\'re scared that if children veer off course they will be lost so they try to mold them into what they think will work.
April 4th, 2018 05:49
Lacking
sylviasearcher said:
The scars of not being enough can run deep. You need to be like the Phoenix and burst those scars into flames and rise
April 4th, 2018 04:32
sylviasearcher said:
The scars of not being enough can run deep. You need to be like the Phoenix and burst those scars into flames and rise
April 4th, 2018 04:32
Lacking
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FOR SHARING & CARING KAROLINE ~ Thanks GOD for Mothers ~ They keep the EARTH on its axis ! APRON STRINGS are rigid ~ then elastic ~ then they SNAP ! C\'est tuojours la VIE ! Loved the structure and flow of your poem ! Your BRIAN Please check my poems ~ Thanks B.
April 4th, 2018 03:16
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FOR SHARING & CARING KAROLINE ~ Thanks GOD for Mothers ~ They keep the EARTH on its axis ! APRON STRINGS are rigid ~ then elastic ~ then they SNAP ! C\'est tuojours la VIE ! Loved the structure and flow of your poem ! Your BRIAN Please check my poems ~ Thanks B.
April 4th, 2018 03:16
Anchor
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
unique wording , i love this ..
When you touch me
I jolt.
When you kiss me
I scramble.
great poem
April 3rd, 2018 14:32
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
unique wording , i love this ..
When you touch me
I jolt.
When you kiss me
I scramble.
great poem
April 3rd, 2018 14:32
Yours
Fay Slimm. said:
Welcome to this friendly site Karoline - - I like the flow of this romantic lament. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
April 3rd, 2018 03:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Welcome to this friendly site Karoline - - I like the flow of this romantic lament. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
April 3rd, 2018 03:01
Yours
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Welcome Karoline ~ Thanks for your first poem a very intriguing expression of your Love ~ expressed in a quartet of Irish Haiku ! 1. Tethered by your smile ! 2. Silently fracturing ? 3. A coin in his pocket ~ A token ? I always give my Lady (ANGELA) a token when we are apart ! 4. SHATTERED ? Because of the parting or something else ? Thanks for sharing & caring ! YOURS BRIAN Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
April 2nd, 2018 17:30
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Welcome Karoline ~ Thanks for your first poem a very intriguing expression of your Love ~ expressed in a quartet of Irish Haiku ! 1. Tethered by your smile ! 2. Silently fracturing ? 3. A coin in his pocket ~ A token ? I always give my Lady (ANGELA) a token when we are apart ! 4. SHATTERED ? Because of the parting or something else ? Thanks for sharing & caring ! YOURS BRIAN Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
April 2nd, 2018 17:30
