Comments received on poems by Karoline
Abdab
peto said:
Lovely write
Sounds like you\'re fallen but with obstacles
The \",fast and far\" and
\"A world a mile\" lines gave it a distant feel
October 31st, 2025 19:27
peto said:
Lovely write
Sounds like you\'re fallen but with obstacles
The \",fast and far\" and
\"A world a mile\" lines gave it a distant feel
October 31st, 2025 19:27
Abdab
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem set in short lines and good rhyme. Nicely done as simple as the love it expresses.
October 31st, 2025 10:51
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem set in short lines and good rhyme. Nicely done as simple as the love it expresses.
October 31st, 2025 10:51
This Man
Karoline said:
It was a dream I had - just to clarify!
Sorry if I offended anyone.
October 25th, 2025 05:37
Karoline said:
It was a dream I had - just to clarify!
Sorry if I offended anyone.
October 25th, 2025 05:37
This Man
Deepak Vohra said:
Very sensual poem! Please avoid such type of poems.
October 25th, 2025 04:25
Deepak Vohra said:
Very sensual poem! Please avoid such type of poems.
October 25th, 2025 04:25
This Man
sorenbarrett said:
Giving pleasure to another certainly part of love. A sensual and erotic poem that may be called sexual as well where sex is a bonding between two souls and a union becoming one. Well done
October 25th, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
Giving pleasure to another certainly part of love. A sensual and erotic poem that may be called sexual as well where sex is a bonding between two souls and a union becoming one. Well done
October 25th, 2025 04:14
This Man
peto said:
Could almost feel your release
Long may it continue karoline
Sensual
October 25th, 2025 03:43
peto said:
Could almost feel your release
Long may it continue karoline
Sensual
October 25th, 2025 03:43
Volupté
peto said:
It may not have the pizzazz factor
But it seems so real and emotional
Says more than I believe you are giving it credit for
I for one loved the read
October 24th, 2025 07:59
peto said:
It may not have the pizzazz factor
But it seems so real and emotional
Says more than I believe you are giving it credit for
I for one loved the read
October 24th, 2025 07:59
Volupté
sorenbarrett said:
Vaguely sensuous, seductive obscurity, erotic illusion, almost sexual but vividly artistic. Nice
October 24th, 2025 04:56
sorenbarrett said:
Vaguely sensuous, seductive obscurity, erotic illusion, almost sexual but vividly artistic. Nice
October 24th, 2025 04:56
The Pen Intellectual
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem that reminds me of the letter in the movie V for vendeta where Ede reading a letter found is told that even though the writer has never met the reader they love them. A most lovely write
October 23rd, 2025 03:51
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem that reminds me of the letter in the movie V for vendeta where Ede reading a letter found is told that even though the writer has never met the reader they love them. A most lovely write
October 23rd, 2025 03:51
Mormor
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of fear of loss. Spoken beautifully in this poem. There needs to come the realization that one can not loose what one truly has if it is lost either you didn\'t have it to begin with or it was not meant to be. Lovely
October 22nd, 2025 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of fear of loss. Spoken beautifully in this poem. There needs to come the realization that one can not loose what one truly has if it is lost either you didn\'t have it to begin with or it was not meant to be. Lovely
October 22nd, 2025 04:28
Mormor
Deepak Vohra said:
Wow! You write poems very beautifully. I think you love someone. Love has the power to change the world.
October 22nd, 2025 02:32
Deepak Vohra said:
Wow! You write poems very beautifully. I think you love someone. Love has the power to change the world.
October 22nd, 2025 02:32
Entanglement
sorenbarrett said:
This is romantic and synchronistic all at once. Nicely worded.
October 21st, 2025 05:35
sorenbarrett said:
This is romantic and synchronistic all at once. Nicely worded.
October 21st, 2025 05:35
Elemental
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful sentiment that is painted in wonderful images. It is resplendent.
October 17th, 2025 06:55
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful sentiment that is painted in wonderful images. It is resplendent.
October 17th, 2025 06:55
Elemental
Paul Bell said:
Well, that slow fuse started slowly and ended in fireworks.
Hope no flowerers were harmed in this coming together.
October 17th, 2025 06:47
Paul Bell said:
Well, that slow fuse started slowly and ended in fireworks.
Hope no flowerers were harmed in this coming together.
October 17th, 2025 06:47
My Sun
SLR said:
Short and powerful. It showcases our propensity to be drawn to something or someone even though we know it\'s not good for us. Well written. I really like this!
May 16th, 2018 21:30
SLR said:
Short and powerful. It showcases our propensity to be drawn to something or someone even though we know it\'s not good for us. Well written. I really like this!
May 16th, 2018 21:30
Today
smallest_stars said:
“The sun kisses me gently”
I love, love that line!
A lot there for a short poem.
Good write!
April 5th, 2018 10:08
smallest_stars said:
“The sun kisses me gently”
I love, love that line!
A lot there for a short poem.
Good write!
April 5th, 2018 10:08
Anchor
Caring dove said:
unique wording , i love this ..
When you touch me
I jolt.
When you kiss me
I scramble.
great poem
April 3rd, 2018 14:32
Caring dove said:
unique wording , i love this ..
When you touch me
I jolt.
When you kiss me
I scramble.
great poem
April 3rd, 2018 14:32
Yours
Fay Slimm. said:
Welcome to this friendly site Karoline - - I like the flow of this romantic lament. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
April 3rd, 2018 03:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Welcome to this friendly site Karoline - - I like the flow of this romantic lament. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
April 3rd, 2018 03:01
Yours
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Welcome Karoline ~ Thanks for your first poem a very intriguing expression of your Love ~ expressed in a quartet of Irish Haiku ! 1. Tethered by your smile ! 2. Silently fracturing ? 3. A coin in his pocket ~ A token ? I always give my Lady (ANGELA) a token when we are apart ! 4. SHATTERED ? Because of the parting or something else ? Thanks for sharing & caring ! YOURS BRIAN Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
April 2nd, 2018 17:30
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Welcome Karoline ~ Thanks for your first poem a very intriguing expression of your Love ~ expressed in a quartet of Irish Haiku ! 1. Tethered by your smile ! 2. Silently fracturing ? 3. A coin in his pocket ~ A token ? I always give my Lady (ANGELA) a token when we are apart ! 4. SHATTERED ? Because of the parting or something else ? Thanks for sharing & caring ! YOURS BRIAN Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
April 2nd, 2018 17:30
