Comments received on poems by Dan Williams
The Lines, part one.
sorenbarrett said:
How do we read between the lines? Assumptions made sometimes right sometimes wrong. Some are better at than others. A most thought provoking write.
August 24th, 2024 08:57
sorenbarrett said:
How do we read between the lines? Assumptions made sometimes right sometimes wrong. Some are better at than others. A most thought provoking write.
August 24th, 2024 08:57
Gunslinger
Dan Williams said:
To tell the truth I was sorry to submit this as soon as I did, but no undo button. This was a deeply disturbing series of events for me, better off forgotten. But hey, thank you.
August 23rd, 2024 21:17
Dan Williams said:
To tell the truth I was sorry to submit this as soon as I did, but no undo button. This was a deeply disturbing series of events for me, better off forgotten. But hey, thank you.
August 23rd, 2024 21:17
Gunslinger
sorenbarrett said:
Ah the feel of old black and white western movies. Here there is this appeal but also a bit deeper message I fear. Nicely done Dan
August 23rd, 2024 05:37
sorenbarrett said:
Ah the feel of old black and white western movies. Here there is this appeal but also a bit deeper message I fear. Nicely done Dan
August 23rd, 2024 05:37
Wrung Dry of Pointless Vanity
Dan Williams said:
Well, Intake that, and thanks.
August 22nd, 2024 18:29
Dan Williams said:
Well, Intake that, and thanks.
August 22nd, 2024 18:29
Wrung Dry of Pointless Vanity
Teddy.15 said:
I know people who would do anything to keep their public image, such a good call out dear Dan, love your title 🌹
August 22nd, 2024 01:39
Teddy.15 said:
I know people who would do anything to keep their public image, such a good call out dear Dan, love your title 🌹
August 22nd, 2024 01:39
To Pamela
sorenbarrett said:
A message that many would like to send but either don\'t have the courage or the words to send. Nicely said.
August 21st, 2024 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
A message that many would like to send but either don\'t have the courage or the words to send. Nicely said.
August 21st, 2024 03:56
Slow Road Dance
Teddy.15 said:
Sometimes we are our own worst enemy when we don\'t take our own advice and try things that may make us happy, hey get yourself one horse it\'s a magical experience even if it\'s frightening at first, as for your last lines well, you are already there. 🌹
August 21st, 2024 00:38
Teddy.15 said:
Sometimes we are our own worst enemy when we don\'t take our own advice and try things that may make us happy, hey get yourself one horse it\'s a magical experience even if it\'s frightening at first, as for your last lines well, you are already there. 🌹
August 21st, 2024 00:38
Cry of The Hermit
NafisaSB said:
it is always the losses that teach us the best lessons - may everything improve from now on though
August 20th, 2024 23:34
NafisaSB said:
it is always the losses that teach us the best lessons - may everything improve from now on though
August 20th, 2024 23:34
Slow Road Dance
Bella Shepard said:
A beautifully crafted story, it catches and holds the imagination with the wonderful icharacters of the troubadour and the ballerina. Light and airy, it is full of smiles.
August 20th, 2024 14:03
Bella Shepard said:
A beautifully crafted story, it catches and holds the imagination with the wonderful icharacters of the troubadour and the ballerina. Light and airy, it is full of smiles.
August 20th, 2024 14:03
Slow Road Dance
Cassie58 said:
So he rode on …. what a pity I thought. Wonderfully penned tale, much enjoyed. Great images. Have a happy Tuesday.
August 20th, 2024 05:25
Cassie58 said:
So he rode on …. what a pity I thought. Wonderfully penned tale, much enjoyed. Great images. Have a happy Tuesday.
August 20th, 2024 05:25
Slow Road Dance
sorenbarrett said:
A most intriguing story with a good moral. Take the chance, live life on the edge and to the fullest you only go around once.
August 20th, 2024 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
A most intriguing story with a good moral. Take the chance, live life on the edge and to the fullest you only go around once.
August 20th, 2024 04:43
Yet Another What If
Teddy.15 said:
Always stick to being a Gentleman, then share your thoughts with us lol what if\'s we all have these. A truly enjoyable read. 🌹
August 19th, 2024 13:11
Teddy.15 said:
Always stick to being a Gentleman, then share your thoughts with us lol what if\'s we all have these. A truly enjoyable read. 🌹
August 19th, 2024 13:11
Yet Another What If
Bella Shepard said:
Cathartic I hope. Emotions turbulent, leaving no peace, it\'s all here. Quite a write!
August 19th, 2024 10:03
Bella Shepard said:
Cathartic I hope. Emotions turbulent, leaving no peace, it\'s all here. Quite a write!
August 19th, 2024 10:03
Yet Another What If
sorenbarrett said:
Questions of a lost? past relationship. Maybe not lost in that so much emotion still remains and the return is questioned as to motive. Full of emotion, regret, anger, pain and just plain hurt this piece contains several wonderful lines and rhyme
August 19th, 2024 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
Questions of a lost? past relationship. Maybe not lost in that so much emotion still remains and the return is questioned as to motive. Full of emotion, regret, anger, pain and just plain hurt this piece contains several wonderful lines and rhyme
August 19th, 2024 05:05
Yet Another What If
Michael Edwards said:
Wow - some lament written from the heart. Very dark but enjoyed nevertheless.
August 19th, 2024 01:12
Michael Edwards said:
Wow - some lament written from the heart. Very dark but enjoyed nevertheless.
August 19th, 2024 01:12
Would Be Wordsmith
Dan Williams said:
I will take that as high compliment, especially from you. Thanks again.
August 18th, 2024 22:34
Dan Williams said:
I will take that as high compliment, especially from you. Thanks again.
August 18th, 2024 22:34
Would Be Wordsmith
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written the thoughts of a poet who is writing to convey a message. As to the last line so nicely stated \"make it clever or just make it pretty?\" I say make it from the heart and that is enough. I have been inside that thought of this poem and know its color, smell and texture. A wonderful write poet to poet.
August 18th, 2024 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written the thoughts of a poet who is writing to convey a message. As to the last line so nicely stated \"make it clever or just make it pretty?\" I say make it from the heart and that is enough. I have been inside that thought of this poem and know its color, smell and texture. A wonderful write poet to poet.
August 18th, 2024 04:59
At the Bottom, In the Pit
Dan Williams said:
I suspect any number things could spell the demise of humans; greed is he top of my list. It drives the rest and seems cannot be cured or even diminished. Any that could control it are the very ones profiting most from it. Makes me sad, colors most of my writing. Thanks for recognizing it.
August 17th, 2024 23:08
Dan Williams said:
I suspect any number things could spell the demise of humans; greed is he top of my list. It drives the rest and seems cannot be cured or even diminished. Any that could control it are the very ones profiting most from it. Makes me sad, colors most of my writing. Thanks for recognizing it.
August 17th, 2024 23:08
At the Bottom, In the Pit
sorenbarrett said:
Gluttony, greed a human quality no other animals kill more than they need to eat. A nicely rhymed poem that speaks of this. Nicely worded my friend.
August 17th, 2024 07:08
sorenbarrett said:
Gluttony, greed a human quality no other animals kill more than they need to eat. A nicely rhymed poem that speaks of this. Nicely worded my friend.
August 17th, 2024 07:08
Tigers Tearing
Dan Williams said:
I did ask, and thanks. I tend to slip into rant but am working on it.
August 16th, 2024 19:26
Dan Williams said:
I did ask, and thanks. I tend to slip into rant but am working on it.
August 16th, 2024 19:26
The Student?
Dan Williams said:
I write a lot about this because I genuinely fear what this country will be Luke for my daughter. Somehow maybe she won\'t have to say \"he told you so\" Thanks.
August 16th, 2024 19:14
Dan Williams said:
I write a lot about this because I genuinely fear what this country will be Luke for my daughter. Somehow maybe she won\'t have to say \"he told you so\" Thanks.
August 16th, 2024 19:14
Tigers Tearing
sorenbarrett said:
Dan this reads clearly and is full of vivid images. As you asked I will give one hint. Less is more see if you can condense the full meaning of each line into fewer words. Loved the message and only include the suggestion because you asked.
August 16th, 2024 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
Dan this reads clearly and is full of vivid images. As you asked I will give one hint. Less is more see if you can condense the full meaning of each line into fewer words. Loved the message and only include the suggestion because you asked.
August 16th, 2024 04:59
Tigers Tearing
Cassie58 said:
Tigers Tearing, what frightful dreams you have. Fortunately for me , my dreams are
far less troublesome Dan. I hope your dreams don’t linger with you all day. An interesting and descriptive write, very imaginative. Have a happy Friday.
August 16th, 2024 01:38
Cassie58 said:
Tigers Tearing, what frightful dreams you have. Fortunately for me , my dreams are
far less troublesome Dan. I hope your dreams don’t linger with you all day. An interesting and descriptive write, very imaginative. Have a happy Friday.
August 16th, 2024 01:38
The Student?
Doggerel Dave said:
\"illusion of liberty\" Does it for me, Dan. You really don\'t have to justify that, but since you have - good stuff.
August 16th, 2024 01:17
Doggerel Dave said:
\"illusion of liberty\" Does it for me, Dan. You really don\'t have to justify that, but since you have - good stuff.
August 16th, 2024 01:17
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