Comments received on poems by Dan Williams
Well, No Wonder Then
sorenbarrett said:
Well said Dan the human race is a paradox arrogantly putting ourselves above every other life source thinking that we are wiser than nature itself and then killing ourselves off with war, pollution, devestation of the enviornment, overpopulation, lazieness and believing all the lies we tell ourselves.
September 23rd, 2024 04:41
sorenbarrett said:
Well said Dan the human race is a paradox arrogantly putting ourselves above every other life source thinking that we are wiser than nature itself and then killing ourselves off with war, pollution, devestation of the enviornment, overpopulation, lazieness and believing all the lies we tell ourselves.
September 23rd, 2024 04:41
Well, No Wonder Then
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Dan, maybe one day somebody may listen to the world and not just themselves.
Andy
September 23rd, 2024 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Dan, maybe one day somebody may listen to the world and not just themselves.
Andy
September 23rd, 2024 01:47
Same Old Way
Goldfinch60 said:
In my long life Dan I have come across some very skilled tradesmen and it has been a beautiful thing to see them work.
Andy
September 23rd, 2024 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
In my long life Dan I have come across some very skilled tradesmen and it has been a beautiful thing to see them work.
Andy
September 23rd, 2024 01:21
Hell Got Here First
aDarkerMind said:
another finely tuned write San.
my fave list grows ever longer.
That your small circle of friends is one pitiful crowd?
strong stuff!
September 22nd, 2024 08:00
aDarkerMind said:
another finely tuned write San.
my fave list grows ever longer.
That your small circle of friends is one pitiful crowd?
strong stuff!
September 22nd, 2024 08:00
Same Old Way
aDarkerMind said:
between sword or ruby, breath or sleep;
no amount of sameness improves this chance.
one to be faved for sure.
September 22nd, 2024 06:36
aDarkerMind said:
between sword or ruby, breath or sleep;
no amount of sameness improves this chance.
one to be faved for sure.
September 22nd, 2024 06:36
Same Old Way
sorenbarrett said:
\"even for we dust motesto titans\" Great line Dan. Many deep philisophical questions here. The last line ties it together. Nicely done
September 22nd, 2024 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
\"even for we dust motesto titans\" Great line Dan. Many deep philisophical questions here. The last line ties it together. Nicely done
September 22nd, 2024 04:04
Hell Got Here First
sorenbarrett said:
Loved it from the first stanza that opened with great poetic power and felt as if it were a classic novel. The last stanza ties it all together so nicely.
September 21st, 2024 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
Loved it from the first stanza that opened with great poetic power and felt as if it were a classic novel. The last stanza ties it all together so nicely.
September 21st, 2024 04:47
Hell Got Here First
orchidee said:
I can\'t agree with some things here, but good write as a poem.
But God got here first. There was never a time when He (can include \'She\' elements too) was not here.
Jesus overcame Satan on the cross. Satan can\'t win ultimately now.
I hold to these things as part of my beliefs.
September 21st, 2024 01:49
orchidee said:
I can\'t agree with some things here, but good write as a poem.
But God got here first. There was never a time when He (can include \'She\' elements too) was not here.
Jesus overcame Satan on the cross. Satan can\'t win ultimately now.
I hold to these things as part of my beliefs.
September 21st, 2024 01:49
Love Vanishing
Goldfinch60 said:
May that resolution be with you Dan and take you into a world of wonder and love.
Andy
September 21st, 2024 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
May that resolution be with you Dan and take you into a world of wonder and love.
Andy
September 21st, 2024 01:25
Love Vanishing
sorenbarrett said:
The story leaves feelings of darkness, anger and estrangement. Very nicely written it engages the reader with great imagery and metaphor painting a picture of discontent.
September 20th, 2024 05:19
sorenbarrett said:
The story leaves feelings of darkness, anger and estrangement. Very nicely written it engages the reader with great imagery and metaphor painting a picture of discontent.
September 20th, 2024 05:19
Hard Winter
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic work. Great crafting of this poem.
September 19th, 2024 17:42
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic work. Great crafting of this poem.
September 19th, 2024 17:42
Hard Winter
Cassie58 said:
The repetition works so well here Dan. Friendless, abandoned and cold. You convey the freeze very well here. I feel sure this write will be relatable to some. Never an easy situation to deal with. Thanks for sharing.
September 19th, 2024 09:14
Cassie58 said:
The repetition works so well here Dan. Friendless, abandoned and cold. You convey the freeze very well here. I feel sure this write will be relatable to some. Never an easy situation to deal with. Thanks for sharing.
September 19th, 2024 09:14
Nothing To Say?
Doggerel Dave said:
A smooth run, Dan. Too good not to let your intended target find it.
Forget the \'so what\', please.
September 19th, 2024 08:06
Doggerel Dave said:
A smooth run, Dan. Too good not to let your intended target find it.
Forget the \'so what\', please.
September 19th, 2024 08:06
Nothing To Say?
Tom Dylan said:
A perfect poem, Dan, beautiful and sad. A fine write.
September 19th, 2024 07:26
Tom Dylan said:
A perfect poem, Dan, beautiful and sad. A fine write.
September 19th, 2024 07:26
Hard Winter
sorenbarrett said:
This has all the makings of a song with its reoccuring refrain. The repetition of this not only emphasizes the statement but puts an emotional foreboding feeling to it as if a prophecy or curse. a bit haunting
September 19th, 2024 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
This has all the makings of a song with its reoccuring refrain. The repetition of this not only emphasizes the statement but puts an emotional foreboding feeling to it as if a prophecy or curse. a bit haunting
September 19th, 2024 04:45
Hard Winter
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that in those cold and dark places a light will be found to lead you to warmth in your life Dan.
Andy
September 19th, 2024 02:08
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that in those cold and dark places a light will be found to lead you to warmth in your life Dan.
Andy
September 19th, 2024 02:08
Hard Winter
aDarkerMind said:
an outstanding write Dan,
and one I can truely relate to.
worthy of much applause.
September 19th, 2024 01:51
aDarkerMind said:
an outstanding write Dan,
and one I can truely relate to.
worthy of much applause.
September 19th, 2024 01:51
Hard Winter
Neville said:
Just in case you aint wrong .. I plan on stocking up with a decent supply of space blankets, plus extra strong mints and have just arranged the annual service on my nuclear reactor .. A compelling poem about separation (for whatever reason) and the anticipated chill, loneliness and compounded emotions of remorse, possible confusion, or uncertainty and grief .. Well penned, friend ..
Neville
September 19th, 2024 01:48
Neville said:
Just in case you aint wrong .. I plan on stocking up with a decent supply of space blankets, plus extra strong mints and have just arranged the annual service on my nuclear reactor .. A compelling poem about separation (for whatever reason) and the anticipated chill, loneliness and compounded emotions of remorse, possible confusion, or uncertainty and grief .. Well penned, friend ..
Neville
September 19th, 2024 01:48
Hard Winter
Teddy.15 said:
My family member lives in Saskatchewan so I understand about the extreme cold weather , hoping it\'s not so bad for you dear Dan. A beautiful poem.
September 19th, 2024 01:33
Teddy.15 said:
My family member lives in Saskatchewan so I understand about the extreme cold weather , hoping it\'s not so bad for you dear Dan. A beautiful poem.
September 19th, 2024 01:33
Nothing To Say?
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully composed Dan it flowed like honey. Loved the rhyme and meter.
September 18th, 2024 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully composed Dan it flowed like honey. Loved the rhyme and meter.
September 18th, 2024 04:30
Nothing To Say?
Cassie58 said:
You certainly have plenty to say here Dan. A sad goodbye from what I can see. Love never seems to be plain sailing, the wind has a habit of dropping out of the sails. I wish you better days ahead and that joy returns. All good wishes.
September 18th, 2024 03:00
Cassie58 said:
You certainly have plenty to say here Dan. A sad goodbye from what I can see. Love never seems to be plain sailing, the wind has a habit of dropping out of the sails. I wish you better days ahead and that joy returns. All good wishes.
September 18th, 2024 03:00
Eight Thousand Sunrises
AuburnScribbler said:
Though written in a painful and yearning tone, this is a beautiful write about the passage of time Dan.
Also, using the sun as a somewhat happy constant, sure adds to the warmth of the piece.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
September 17th, 2024 08:00
AuburnScribbler said:
Though written in a painful and yearning tone, this is a beautiful write about the passage of time Dan.
Also, using the sun as a somewhat happy constant, sure adds to the warmth of the piece.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
September 17th, 2024 08:00
Eight Thousand Sunrises
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Dan. Really enjoyed this.
September 17th, 2024 07:38
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Dan. Really enjoyed this.
September 17th, 2024 07:38
Eight Thousand Sunrises
sorenbarrett said:
Waiting for those golden years you haven\'t heard we are off the gold standard its all federal reserve notes not worth the paper they are printed on. Loved the write and have felt some of the same feelings.
September 17th, 2024 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
Waiting for those golden years you haven\'t heard we are off the gold standard its all federal reserve notes not worth the paper they are printed on. Loved the write and have felt some of the same feelings.
September 17th, 2024 04:25
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