Comments received on poems by Dan Williams
Failure of Fields
Neilton said:
Such a great poem! The questions are surely very relatable since I this most people have them ! Meaningful and beautiful work
September 10th, 2024 00:31
Neilton said:
Such a great poem! The questions are surely very relatable since I this most people have them ! Meaningful and beautiful work
September 10th, 2024 00:31
Failure of Fields
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that begins dark with many shadows, but soon shows the break of day and ends with the dawning of the sun. Nicely said.
September 9th, 2024 06:28
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that begins dark with many shadows, but soon shows the break of day and ends with the dawning of the sun. Nicely said.
September 9th, 2024 06:28
Failure of Fields
2781 said:
Finally brethren, whatsoever things are true, whatsoever things are honest, whatsoever things are just, whatsoever things are pure, whatsoever things are lovely, whatsoever things are of good report; if there be any virtue, and if there be any praise, think of these things.
September 9th, 2024 03:06
2781 said:
Finally brethren, whatsoever things are true, whatsoever things are honest, whatsoever things are just, whatsoever things are pure, whatsoever things are lovely, whatsoever things are of good report; if there be any virtue, and if there be any praise, think of these things.
September 9th, 2024 03:06
How To Grow Old
sorenbarrett said:
When younger I thought of some day growing older. I blinked and now I am older and I reflect upon the end. But the end of one thing is the beginning of another and so life goes on, A very reflective write Dan.
September 8th, 2024 05:55
sorenbarrett said:
When younger I thought of some day growing older. I blinked and now I am older and I reflect upon the end. But the end of one thing is the beginning of another and so life goes on, A very reflective write Dan.
September 8th, 2024 05:55
How To Grow Old
Cassie58 said:
When sleep evades there is plenty of time to reflect on the passing of the years and the aging process. I am right with you there, being an insomniac myself. I rarely find answers though, just more questions and one thing I am sure of I am determined to make each day count. A thoughtful and reflective write Dan. Nicely conveyed. Have a happy Sunday.
September 8th, 2024 03:33
Cassie58 said:
When sleep evades there is plenty of time to reflect on the passing of the years and the aging process. I am right with you there, being an insomniac myself. I rarely find answers though, just more questions and one thing I am sure of I am determined to make each day count. A thoughtful and reflective write Dan. Nicely conveyed. Have a happy Sunday.
September 8th, 2024 03:33
Crescendo
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is full of wonderful lines and is said in a musing manner as if the author is drifting in thought. I loved its casual nature and unhurried pace. Lovely
September 7th, 2024 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is full of wonderful lines and is said in a musing manner as if the author is drifting in thought. I loved its casual nature and unhurried pace. Lovely
September 7th, 2024 05:05
Out of Choices
sorenbarrett said:
As usual, there is a significant amount of philosophy and wisdom in this poem.“There is clarity in defeat missing from triumph “ This statement rings, true as does the next follow up line. “ Which often grows murky as it ages”. They are very nice images as well and overall the whole poem was quite poetic. A very enjoyable read.
September 6th, 2024 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
As usual, there is a significant amount of philosophy and wisdom in this poem.“There is clarity in defeat missing from triumph “ This statement rings, true as does the next follow up line. “ Which often grows murky as it ages”. They are very nice images as well and overall the whole poem was quite poetic. A very enjoyable read.
September 6th, 2024 04:26
The Mindshark
Cheeky Missy said:
This is too fun and clever! I declare! Your made me chuckle. My la, what a capable exposé. Awesome similes beautifully delineated. Thank you for sharing.
September 5th, 2024 18:14
Cheeky Missy said:
This is too fun and clever! I declare! Your made me chuckle. My la, what a capable exposé. Awesome similes beautifully delineated. Thank you for sharing.
September 5th, 2024 18:14
The Mindshark
sorenbarrett said:
I love this one Dan it is an anthropomorphic metaphor of life itself. Cute and fun. They put a smile on my face. Unfortunately it is more true than Fabel. Nicely done.
September 5th, 2024 05:21
sorenbarrett said:
I love this one Dan it is an anthropomorphic metaphor of life itself. Cute and fun. They put a smile on my face. Unfortunately it is more true than Fabel. Nicely done.
September 5th, 2024 05:21
Death Of a Monster
Thad Wilk said:
A scary good and
captivating write!! 😨
Great use of metaphor
and a treat to recite!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
September 4th, 2024 21:12
Thad Wilk said:
A scary good and
captivating write!! 😨
Great use of metaphor
and a treat to recite!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
September 4th, 2024 21:12
Like a Hangman
Cheeky Missy said:
\"Dearest Diary, I\'m burdened and know you will understand. Mayhap I\'ll clear this muck of a fog, for I think I see a glimmer in the distance....\"
Yes, you could tidy this up into a different, more acceptable form but the message is great. Thank you for sharing.
September 4th, 2024 18:00
Cheeky Missy said:
\"Dearest Diary, I\'m burdened and know you will understand. Mayhap I\'ll clear this muck of a fog, for I think I see a glimmer in the distance....\"
Yes, you could tidy this up into a different, more acceptable form but the message is great. Thank you for sharing.
September 4th, 2024 18:00
Like a Hangman
sorenbarrett said:
A monologue, this writing is dark and seems metaphorical. It seems as though the author is speaking to the reader through the body of another. There are some very good lines in this the principle of which is contained in the title and refers to fear being like a hangman around one’s throat. Very nicely done.
September 4th, 2024 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
A monologue, this writing is dark and seems metaphorical. It seems as though the author is speaking to the reader through the body of another. There are some very good lines in this the principle of which is contained in the title and refers to fear being like a hangman around one’s throat. Very nicely done.
September 4th, 2024 04:59
Death Of a Monster
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems quite Gothic. The metaphor is a good one and I enjoyed the read. Nicely done.
September 3rd, 2024 05:27
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems quite Gothic. The metaphor is a good one and I enjoyed the read. Nicely done.
September 3rd, 2024 05:27
Arrows Pointing In
kwrites said:
loved every bit of this. An amazing write it was !!
September 2nd, 2024 04:30
kwrites said:
loved every bit of this. An amazing write it was !!
September 2nd, 2024 04:30
Arrows Pointing In
Lorenz said:
They are many of us sitting by the river ,waiting...
September 2nd, 2024 03:37
Lorenz said:
They are many of us sitting by the river ,waiting...
September 2nd, 2024 03:37
Chance Of A Kiss
Cheeky Missy said:
Yes, the words eloquently paid tribute to exquisite moments whose inherent seduction subtly stole away the heart, yet to relive them seems it would be a very knife in the same, twisting cruelly at the priceless memories reviving what could have been, was once and is not. Or?
September 1st, 2024 17:05
Cheeky Missy said:
Yes, the words eloquently paid tribute to exquisite moments whose inherent seduction subtly stole away the heart, yet to relive them seems it would be a very knife in the same, twisting cruelly at the priceless memories reviving what could have been, was once and is not. Or?
September 1st, 2024 17:05
Chance Of A Kiss
aDarkerMind said:
I thought it worked out very well Dan.
a very impressive write.
September 1st, 2024 12:54
aDarkerMind said:
I thought it worked out very well Dan.
a very impressive write.
September 1st, 2024 12:54
Chance Of A Kiss
sorenbarrett said:
Bitter sweet memories. Sweet in their happiness at the time and bitter in their having passed. Lovely
September 1st, 2024 08:26
sorenbarrett said:
Bitter sweet memories. Sweet in their happiness at the time and bitter in their having passed. Lovely
September 1st, 2024 08:26
Chance Of A Kiss
Neilton said:
What a beautiful poem ! And very nicely written!
September 1st, 2024 05:20
Neilton said:
What a beautiful poem ! And very nicely written!
September 1st, 2024 05:20
Compared to What?
sorenbarrett said:
Love all the questions that refer to costs and values
\"Just as honesty is unreliable, and integrity tries to cheat,\"
We usually think of this as a black and white value but it is not and this emphasizes this in such a nicely worded manner. I could list many example here but the poem stands for itself and I loved it
August 31st, 2024 06:28
sorenbarrett said:
Love all the questions that refer to costs and values
\"Just as honesty is unreliable, and integrity tries to cheat,\"
We usually think of this as a black and white value but it is not and this emphasizes this in such a nicely worded manner. I could list many example here but the poem stands for itself and I loved it
August 31st, 2024 06:28
Compared to What?
2781 said:
Yea doubtless, and I count all things but loss for the excellency of...
August 31st, 2024 02:29
2781 said:
Yea doubtless, and I count all things but loss for the excellency of...
August 31st, 2024 02:29
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